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  • Aw:) love it!!!

  • omg!! joe, demi, miley and nick should have a foresome .:P and joe should fuck nicks ass when nick gets a blowjob from miley and demi licking joes ass xD

  • I LUV THESE

  • Haha I love that Demi and Miley became bestfriends :)

    Jemi and Niley all the way ! <3

  • nooo!! why i selena a bitch??! i haaate it!! :(

  • i love this!

    nick is freakinn hilarous(:

    & Jemi is adorable<3

  • niley and jemi

  • Joe is like completely stupid in here. But I love it!

  • u the best i wish i could meet u and get ur autograph lol!

  • Very cute.

    I secretly love Miley Cyrus. :)

  • hahah so funny!!

  • Amazing!

  • cool! love it so much! BTW, lol 5:13!

  • pshh wish my dad was like dat but no he's an ass!!!:)

  • Idk, is it going to stay a niley story, or will it change to nelena?

  • Not , it's still Niley & Jemi =)

  • @twilightjonasfan101 nelena?! noooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!

  • you are extremely talented at writing, although I wouldnt exactly say your characters are "good" :P. But I luv'd mileys Stick up for bff line, and Nicks support your gf attitude :)

  • This is awesome! JEESE! I CAN'T WAIT!!!

  • what movie maker are u using?

  • omg....

    this is so awesome!!!

    i gotta keep watching! :D

  • nnnnnooooooo!DONT MAKE SELENA A BITCH PLEASE! PLEASE PLEASE! OK please dont be mean guys but!I HATE NILEY!Ugh

  • omigosh sooooooo gooood!

  • wowowowowwow. i'm speechless.

    okay maybe not, but yeah that was sooooo good:)

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  • This is so freakin cool! :)

  • this is so freaking awesome lol im hooked n its only first eppy lol good job!!

  • You and TheRealTz12895 are the best writers on youtube!!! you both should really go in the business one day!!

  • sorry, i accidentally rated it 2. sorry. sorry. sorry./

  • omg LOL!! wet t-shirt contest..HAHAHAHA!!!! i laughed

  • haha awsome

    so funny story

    and miley & nick are just so cute ;p

  • yay Niley and Jemi

    my two fave. Couples.awesome epp

  • You know like FINALLY a story that miley's the good one and selena is the bad one i mean its not that i hate selena its just she kind og annoying and all that and miley's ALWAYS the mean one in the story's wich kind of pisses me off but you dont know how much i love you AND your series best series EVER so far :D :D :D

  • is frozen yoghurt the american word for ice cream?? if it is i guess you cant sing the song 'i scream, you scream, we all scream, for ice scream' lol man i love that song

  • AWESOME!

  • joe is such a prev.

    luv nick he is so cute

  • The first song is

    "The way we talk" by "The Main" Its an awesome song but I personally love the remix better.

  • lmao. joe's a perv. lol [:

  • awesome love it

  • is this like a sequel to the one you did where demi was a party girl but she got sent to boarding school and turned good then fell in love with joe?? im really confused

  • ya this is the sequel to "Bad girl gone good"

  • lmfao joe is such a perv in this

    i laughed so hard watching this!

    great episode,ill watch the second one too xD

  • whats the first song?

    i love it!

    i have heard it but i cant think of the name and now i want it on my ipod =)

  • ha. Nick Jonas,

    I love him!

    He is so funny,

    gosh joe perverted!!

    Jemi, Niley,

    best couples ever(:

    Love your series(:

  • Haha joe is such a perv =P

    Nick was funny 2 =D

    Awesome!!! :)

  • lmao. joe is such a perv!

  • OMG!!! haha i was laughing the

    whole episode.. Joe is such a perv

    lol Gotta love him ;P

    Nick was hilarious too

    Great JOB :D

  • omg the hot 'n' cold story is from yaaa ?!

  • MORE.

  • super great..hey! am sub right now! ur so good with this! o and cain i ask u 1 request? plz make 'em play a,lil more4 hard 2 get ith eachother and secuce eachothr ad stuff@!plzzzzzzzzzzz! though its reallly great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!! i seriously love u dude! just plz plz plz hope u accepy my request! :D

    peace.love.joy(me :D)

  • Omg!!

    I love it!!

  • YAY.

    I watched Bad Girl Gone Good,

    now this! Woop, i'm happy ;D

    great episode as usual!

  • haha oh my gosh nick

    is hilarious!

    thank you god! hahaha

    he's so my favorite character in this!

  • HEHE Nick:Thank You God!LOL!!!That's funny!!

  • This is awesome!

    Joe is such a perv!!!

  • dis is so kool

    i love dis

  • ahh i love it!! so im trying to deicide who the bigger threat is here...Selena or Ashley hmm

  • i want cheating in next

  • I'm with chow 1991..

    i don't get it...

  • wet t-shirt contest..? where have i heard that before .xD teehee, i loved it [;

  • Aww.

    I kinda wanted to watch the Undomestic Goddess.

    Oh well, this is good too!!

    Im happy=)

    But I really wanted to watch that lolxD

    Im just gonna go ahead and read the book then=D

  • Aw, I'm sorry! I really wanted to write the Undomestic Goddess, but the trailer for this movie got 200+ in one day while TUG barely reached 100 in like 2 days!

    But I'm gonna do it when I reach like part 8 of this movie or something =D

  • Omgosh seriously?!?!?!?

    Yay! It looked like it was gonna be good=D

    In the meantime, I'll enjoy this lolxD

    Cuz it is really good too=DD

  • that was amazing

    Joe is much more perverted than before

    and i dont mind if they are cheesy only if they arent too cheesy.

  • ROFL - LOVE JOE !!!!!

    Demis Funny.

  • yay :)

    WE NEED 7THINGS, BTW!

  • It's already done, it'll be out tomorrow =D

  • "I'm winking at you right now" haha.

    Cheating is baaaaaaaaaaad. :'/

  • I tried not to make things cheesy

    between Jemi, cause that isn't who

    they are in this movie. So, if there's

    any cheesiness, forgive me please :P

    i didnt get that?? why arent they jemi?? =S

  • loved it

  • YA! I love it it's amazing and it should be a lot of cheating that is what makes it amaaaazing first it could be joe then demi then joe (with Miley i saw the trailer) then Demi with..(NOT NICK SEEING NO POSSIBLE good stuff (if you know what i mean ;)

  • Ohhh i lovee it!!!!

    I like the cheating drama but i don't like fighting haha, that doesn't make much sense sooo idk lol. Just please post the next one soon! :)

  • Amazing :)

  • does this mean your making episodes for this?

    cause if you were i'll be sooooo happy!

    (sorry but your stories are amazing and i just luv em' :)

  • OMG!!!!!! I LOVED IT MAKE NEW ONE FAST

  • i love it!!!

  • CHEATING. i <3 the

    jemi dramaaa !

  • i loveeeddd it. i didnt

    read the other one but

    im gonna try to tonightt !!

  • omg your amaizng i love this next one soon

  • wait is this a sequel for something?

  • Yes, it's a sequel for Bad Girl Gone Good =)

  • awesomee episode <3 luved it

  • Miley: Well Its Working *Winks at Nick*

    Nick: *Looks at the sky* THANK YOU GOD

    AHAHAHAA

    AHHAA I LOVE THE LINE "Much Better"

    LOL FUNNY WHEN THERE LIKE

    "Im Winking At You Right Now" AHAH

    NEXT ONE PLEASE (I dont like jemi but your stories awsome)

  • lovee ittt :)

  • Cheating part nextt.

    Awesome <3

  • definately cheating.

    i love drama. XD

  • AHHHHH next one!!!!!!!!!!<333

  • omg love it

    cheating part please

    (i love the drama) :P

  • Cheating defoo... XD

    <3 it!

    -3r!k@

  • Cheating!!!

  • I cant wait for the next part. it'll be exciting to see joe as a cheater & then have him change like demi did (: please post more very soon. you are a great writer

  • i neeeeeeeedddddd to read more of this and plz have marathon of this series plz plz plz plz

  • lol assface hahahahah i love it

  • cheating part next!!!

    totally awesome i loved it!!

    5 stars!!

  • gahahh i need faccckinnggggggg moreeee :) heheheh

    <3 you!

  • love it! your really good!!

  • amazing!!!!!

    Post more soon!!! <33

  • omg im so glad that u made this !

    jemi are so cute!

    but im excited for the cheating parts hahahaha

    great episode i cant wait for the next one!!!!

    :]

  • That was NOT boring. I think that's the best first part of a movie I have ever seen. =] I just hope Joe doesn't turn that...bad, ;] Haha. Anyways, can't wait for the next part.

  • aww I loved this episode I know everyone says that but it's true it was cutee I don't want the cheating episode to be the next one but at the same time it would be cool to see what happens idk you pick

  • ahhh soo TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!

    more please:]

  • Lol. I loved the whole 'I'm winking at you right now!' business...

  • lmao, i loveeee this series.

    its so funny.

    "what are you wearing?"

    "clothes?"

    "yeah, unlike you."

    lol, i loved that XD

    and put the cheating in the next episode. dramaaaaa.

    as much as i dont WANT joe to sleep with miley...it's gonna happen anyway, might as well make it interesting now., right?

    but there BETTER be a somewhat happy ending :P

  • Yay ! :D

    I think the next part should have both. But more cheating. But it's your choice.

    I voted five stars. :D

    And I'll go read what you recommended to us. :P

    Hope that's long enough. :o

  • What's the name of the first song?

  • i don't really care if you put the cheating next or another happy part XD

    it's your story, do what you want with it.

  • NOT boring, blv me :P:P <3

    i love it!!! gr8 job, as 4 usual.. ;D

    ya.. start it next episode! i mean the cheating, cuz the faster he cheats, the faster they start 2 solve things ... which means: JEMI-ness!! even more :P

  • Loved it :D

  • yey its back loved it

  • haha awesome!! :D

  • luv the ep 'n' im so happy ur back

    i think u should do the chetting next ep.

    or when no one i mean no one would expect it ....

  • WOOH! and ugg I hate whats gonna happen next :/ I don't want Miley and Joe to be idiots.... Gosh... But whateves it has to happen for the story :p

  • Haha i loved nick oooh going to your room?xD I love TCBY!(:

  • that was awesome

    cant wait till the drama really starts

    your an amzing writer and I can't wait for what you do next

  • Love it :)

    So good

    Joe n Demi

    are so funny

    really good more

    soon please. Awsome :)

  • tht was awesome!!! haha.

    can't wait till the nxt one!! =)

  • I loved this episode and I can't wait for the next one to come out =)

    And I think that the cheating should start in the next episode even though I love Jemi I think I would be a nice turn if it would start in the next episode =)

    Can't wait for the next one =D

  • Oh my god!! I love this episode! So cant wait for the next one!!

    Thank you soo muh for bringing it back!!

  • He won't cheat on Demi with Miley on that

    weekend.....please tell me it won't happen

    than

    awesome episode =)

    Loved it so much

    Can't wait for the next one

  • sorry i accidently clicked 4 stars when it's supposed to be 5

    joe cheating on demi should be on the next epi, i would feel so bad for demi :(

    omg i love untouchable gunna see it after i write this :D

  • woot :) I love it. haha and nope you d-box ISNT that long ;)

  • im gonna cry when he cheats on her with miley. :(

    make him cheat on her with selena or something! lol or atlest make demi and miley friends after that! your story tho

  • Lol! Before I made the trailer I was actually going to make him cheat on her with Selena, but it would've hurt her as much, so Miley's the one :P

  • :P back to you to. can atleast miley and demi make up after that.

  • I say another happy part, but thats just me.

    great story, i'm sooo happy you did a sequal. : D

  • is joe cheating on demi

  • lol loved alot

    cant wait till the nex one and aha

    why cant u be more like nick

    why cant u be more like joe

    haha

  • Omg,Omg,Omg it was like totally awsome!!!! :D:D

  • more i luv it..

    ur like soo awsme at making this stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • JOE is becoming more of a perv. l0ll.

    but his still so freakin' funny =]

    i can't wait till the next oneee.

  • <33 it moore plzz!

  • more

  • I don really like that Joes cheating on Demi...but Id like to see it in next episode :)

    And Im gonna go see Untouchable right after I write this ;P

    And Im SOOOO happy that you make second season of this series...Im almost happy dancing (Whic I did just 2 times in my life, so you know its an honor (sorry if I didnt wrote that right;P; im still learning english))

    make more soon, 'cause I LO-LO-LO-LO-LOVED it ;)

  • gr8 start :)

  • Haha, this isn't boring. It's great! C:

    I figure that it's going to be cheating but for some reason I want it to be happy

  • i loooove it the script is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny its awesome they should make this a real movie

  • I love this Movie. x) This is like my fav. Youtube Movie...

    And yea you should get to the cheating part..

    'and ur Bikini' - Joe. XDDDDDDDD LOL

  • awesome!!!! =) love it!!!

  • LOL this is sooooo good =D joe is hilarious :P

    i think you should do the drama cheating bit next :)

    cant wait for more :) x

  • HAHAHA! AND YOUR BIKINI! XD LOL JOE!

    I want DRAMA but i dont want Joe to cheat with MILEY! :(

    Great part :)

  • I think you should do. A happy one and then like Joe and Demi get in a fight or something and that why Joe cheats.

    I can't wait for the next episode!! Eep :) I think it's funny how in like every episode Joe and Demi have sex. Funnayy stuff! Can't wait for the next one!

  • hehe., i love joe :P

  • Omg thx u for posting this...and tht was amazing! i loved every part! i love jemi and thts y i want at least one more ep with them nd in tht ep u could make him lik looking at miley or something but ep 3 should be the drama not 2. u did a great job in the being with the song it fix in perfectly.nd i love how it sart th too sex lovers.lol can wait for the nxt ep...nd i hope this comment was long enough

  • hehe i was laughing at joe at the end when he said "and your bikini!" lol

    awesome job, next please!

  • def, cheating.

    Its like the perfect setup, at the beach house on miley's birthday.

    :]

  • Please get to the cheating part lol :P and 4 a first part this was ah-may-zing!

  • wow, thnx dana. what a lovely surprise! :)

  • amazing and yes make joe cheat on the next ep, while their at the beach house!!!! lol love this thx 4 posting!

  • amazing,

    next one please =]

  • lmao.

    made me laugh so hard

    cant wait until DRAMA

  • oohhh I forgot :)

    PLEASE make like 1 more happy one :)

    they are so cute!

    then add drama :)

    I love it this way for a few eps. though :)

  • yay, its finally out. (:

    mileys birthday is not gonna turn out good.. maybe thats where the, um, you know, happens. i cant stand jiley. and i cant stand not watching this. ;D

  • ya i want there to be cheating!

    because the more bad things happen the more drama it has...and do you know what i love?(more then david archuleta)

    DRAMA!

    i love this!

  • yaya my two favorite writers are uploading you and jOejOnascRave

  • SOO GOOD !

    ans i think one morew happy

  • UH - OH!!! I think i know whats happening that weekend D: and its not good... ahh! GREAT EPPI MORE PLEASE!

  • omg!! loved IT!!!!!!

  • xD ahh joe, you and you're wrong mind.

    (happy part :D)

  • awesome!!! i love it!!! post more plzz!!!

  • lmao

    wet t-shirt contest

    haa (:

    <3 loved it

    Jemi and Niley<3

    loved it!! (:

  • this was...AWESOME!!!

    i want another happy part.....put off the cheating for a little bit longer (ironic how that's a jb song :P)

    i know im gonna LOVE this sequel!!

    thanks so much for writing one!!

    your awesome!

  • so excited! can't wait!

  • lol i loved it!

  • ok that was really good.

    i think we can all tell that this definately will be just as good as bad girl gone good :) amazing

    and joe is a perv but i mena that why we love him haha

  • love it!!

  • this is awesome!!

    both of my favorite couples!

    I love joe's character

    NILEEY AND JEMIII <3

  • Haha, i love Joe is this!

    :D

    Awesome Job

  • Wow,Joe;Perverted much? XD

    Another happy part,please?!(:

    Post soon.

  • omg .

    this is far by the best series on youtube :P

    MAKE MOREEEE <3

  • HILARIOUS and of cousre AHMAZING

    i love your series and this looks like its gonna be an AHMAZING sequel cant wait til the next one comes out

    joe is sooo perverted but funny you should make another cheesy one i thought this one was a really good first ep it was cute next one soon PLZ

  • happy part next, then sad or angry or cheating thing part.

    love it!! LOL

  • haha Joe. He's such a sexy perv =P

    great way to start the sequel!

  • <33333

  • lmfaoo, Joes soo funny and pervertedd! hahaha i love himm! XDXD

    && i want another HAPPY PART PLEASEE! i dont want drama yet.

  • HaHa Joe is soo funny.

    And your an amazing writer.

    Can't wait till the next one(:

  • totally loved it please make more i'm begging you i'm on my hands and knees right now jk!lol!