Eggy's Children's Rhyming Story

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My little one's just given this a thumbs up! LOL.

If anyone has time please take a look at my humorous rhyming story, "Martians Have Manners".

[hillary986]

omg i learned something

[DavidOsaka]

@hillary986 Sorry :-) Can't undo it now lol

[TheTyly10]

that was funny and i saw a bunney

[DavidOsaka]

@TheTyly10 :-)

[Koolkidcameron]

eggy is mental! bats are not out in the day

[Mmiinntt1111]

OMG i wish i had a day like this :)

[DavidOsaka]

@Mmiinntt1111 For sure!

[keeniee]

im so happy

[MACKarko]

This is deranged.

[mikusius]

Whoa my days are just like this

[imcalledsprite]

And thats why you don't do drugs kids.

[Mmiinntt1111]

@imcalledsprite LOL

[YuriMegami]

I have a job interview in the morning and need to see my school councellor.. It is 3 o'clock in the morning. WHY AM I WATCHING THIS?

[fyphfoko]

what are they doing to those kids in the credits?

[SupernaturalGifts777]

@fyphfoko

tickling them ?

[LoLaGeXP]

=D SCEW U KIDS WATCH REDTUBE OR SUMMIN xD

[Thrillerlover96]

WOW LOL why did I just watch this?

[deebabe2009]

this sucks

[makemeadorable45]

eggy is so boring but my lil bro likes him OMG

[CARLOSBABYMAMA100]

now they want tp types on stuff that aint evan for them omg

[101chillax]

OMG! Eggy is so cool! He saw a kitty and a bat :D on a mat! :) and a frog and a dog dance on a log! and a bear sitting on a chair and and a boat try on a coat, and a bee drink some tea, and a fishy JUMPED over the dish! :) Eggy is soooooooo cool. :D

[Krammn]

Thanks for listening, it's been an AMAZING day.

BYE!

I think he's exaggerating a little... >.>

[ausparallen]

i saw a , i saw a ,i saw a...........

[Hilikio]

Chuck Norris Rymed something with Orange.

[shebishobi]

A GOAT WEARING A COAT ROWING A BOAT might b much fun

[msaerq99]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhhhhhh i like it

[Hootbooks]

:-) Super-fab .....

[Rioxka]

@Hootbooks delicious crab

[jpcoolsky100]

o.0

[KezzaBeeApp]

Lovely children's stories. Well done!!!

[ilovepooloads]

soz eggy

[blunklaura]

2cute

[crazymadwriter]

Hi David, it's the crazymad writer of children's stories here. I enjoyed the story with Eggy. All the best from the crazymad writer of children's stories. Bye.

[theskateboardersam]

you should have just kept saying chuck norris because chuck norris rhymes with anything

[CatherineRox1]

Thanks It really helps my baby bro

[cingle2004jp]

Rhyming already nice

[aGame284]

I was hoping this rhyming story had more rhythm.... :D

[seamenitps]

amazing story....colorful video..attractive for kids

[swindaddypike]

how many times does he rhyme!?

[whitedarlene]

Cute

[kavi18in]

very sweet

[BezimiennaKarolinka]

so nice, i saw the frog, i saw the dog :)

[619619junjun]

fish

[candipooh3]

another cute video, you should write for the new Electric Company show :-)

[MrsBooks]

OH...I just love this video! It is sooooooo cute! Will be in my favs. Love it, love it! Thanks, Mrs. Books

[simplekidscrafts]

oh My God this is too cute I love it! When my son wakes up i will show him this video is in my favs. Love it just love it!