The cat does have a mustache. And Roger, I could cut about 7 minutes out of this 7 minute segment and not miss a thing. But, yes, it never got tightened.
Okay, so that is part one. So far, I think you could cut about 3 minutes out of this seven minute segment and tell as good a story.
The timing seems oddly off, about a half beat slow. For example, the meeting scene-- all the reactions were just a tad slow. Made the acting seem bad, when it really isn't.
The cat does have a mustache. And Roger, I could cut about 7 minutes out of this 7 minute segment and not miss a thing. But, yes, it never got tightened.
FreshCutSafetyPin 4 years ago
haha! the cat looks like it has a moustache!!
hazel141 4 years ago
Okay, so that is part one. So far, I think you could cut about 3 minutes out of this seven minute segment and tell as good a story.
The timing seems oddly off, about a half beat slow. For example, the meeting scene-- all the reactions were just a tad slow. Made the acting seem bad, when it really isn't.
Anyway, just my two cents. On to part two...
RogerOnTheRight 4 years ago
cool
mrtvman 4 years ago