Hey everyone so I'm a film maker and that is my passion. i have just created a new short film titled "Dear Sam" a short film by Jordee Arvin, i want to get looked at so bad. so all i ask is to help me out and like this comment so people can see this and watch my film and to get more likes and comments and maybe subscribers i know you all will like it so please can i use a little help? thanks a lot. the film is on my channel :) cheers!
Great acting, very intense and very emotional. The opening was outstanding. In a way, the story would have been better if it ends on the guy begging his girlfriend to stay. The point of the film is anger to remorse to regret....
@cscdigitalgraphics Thank you for the feedback, it's always interesting to hear good tips on how it could have been more powerful, I will take it with me into future projects. Thanks for watching!
Please check out my latest two short films: The sci-fi drama "NUMERICA" where for every child born an adult must volunteer to die and also a fun little comedy short entitled "Love Sick".
Just click my username and head to my channel, thanks so much! :)
uhm, it seemed to me that he killed somebody. uhm, did he killed his gf or he was just talking to an answering machine? i just cannot understand. uhm, it is also draggy.. the first part is too long. i thought at first he was just having a hard time readying himself in confessing to a girl...
anyways, you could always redo it...practice more.. :)
@marovic2 I agree with you, the first part is to long. About the answering machine, that could be the case, i guess it's up to the viewer to decide! Thank you for the feedback.
The title for your short film interests people, "ooh about love and telling her you love her". Without reading the info beforehand. I waited, impatiently for the dialog and just more of an understanding of the film. Exceptional job, with the big and surprising twist! Good choice for music. I agree with kickboxer11, about the beginning being dragged a bit too long. More films please. Kudos to you.
This was very incredible and intriguing. It captured my attention immediately and kept it through the entire film. Fantastic job with one camera and one angle! The emotion comes through loud and clear. Very intense. Exceptional job done with a very sad but real subject. Bravo!
Am I the only one on here who didnt get the point of this film?? :D young fella staring at the mirror (apparently) for 3 minutes.. He did kill her? or she was just angry ? ????? im not saying it was a bad scene, but I just didnt get that:))
I like the fact that it was all from one angle - this typically makes a film quite boring, but it worked really well for yours. The only thing I would change is the beginning - maybe shorten that part or cut a few scenes out. I understand you were trying to convey the emotion, but it dragged on a bit long, for me.
Maybe i'm a year late in commenting but i love this.. great work. i love it that you didnt show that he opened the door. It leaves your audience imagining what could happen next :) <3
i just simply dont know what to say to this..i wanted to cry...i just couldnt believe what happened...very good film...although i would have liked to seen what happened after he opened the door to the person that was knocking..
This was very well put together. I loved the dramatic display of emotion, though some of your movements were a little redundant, like reaching up to touch your hair or your face, which I can understand would be a habit in times of stress, but I would have limited it to maybe two times, since lifting of the arms is really, really strong body language. The tension was brilliantly conveyed in the pacing around the bathroom, and I loved how you had the door shut when you delivered the lines. Bravo!
@Chanceless Thank you for all the feedback! It's very useful for me to hear. And thank you for watching, i've watched your singing videos, and I like them alot!
I love this! You did great, really. Btw you're acting was good, but the part when you came back after you left the bathroom I was expecting a more dramatic expression, but anyways keep it up! keep doing awesome shot films as this one.
Where are you from? This was good, but you should've filmed it in the day or told your neighbours because I think screaming or something would have fit. You're not a bad actor, though.
I am from the UK! I know a Swedish guy. Maybe you know him :P I watched your 'You Are Fantasic' video but unfortunately I don't speak Swedish...:( You've got some great movies! x
No, i'm pursuing my dream to one day work with films. My has always been to be a director, and since I finished school i wave been trying to get into directorschool. Do you have any dreams of working with film?
Nice :) Well I'm going to study medicine but after University I'll either do that, or possibly try becoming an actor/writer/director...I'm crazy about making movies, just I have such difficulty creating interesting stories for short ones. Have you seen any of mine? They're easier to imagine than create, that's why some of them seem a bit pointless and hard to understand :P
@johnyhenao Yes, you are very right about that. It's very stripped down, maybe to much for some. Looking back, I whould probably do alot of things differenty. Thanks for watching!
I get the concept of the film but you will please tell me what the knocking sound was? Was it you, a neighbor or the girl maybe coming back to life???
so...the guy has a fight with her girl. he hit and killed her right? then after he despear and go to the bath, he go back and tell her to wake up but it's too late because she's dead?
I thought it was too much of the same thing over and over. Over half the movie is the boy breathing heavily in front of the camera. I did like what variation there was, but it wasn't enough for two minutes, and I was disappointed to see the movie revert to that toward the end.
The rest of it is amazing, though. Very sad and touching.
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Hey everyone so I'm a film maker and that is my passion. i have just created a new short film titled "Dear Sam" a short film by Jordee Arvin, i want to get looked at so bad. so all i ask is to help me out and like this comment so people can see this and watch my film and to get more likes and comments and maybe subscribers i know you all will like it so please can i use a little help? thanks a lot. the film is on my channel :) cheers!
666666666233 4 months ago
@666666666233 I really like the camerawork. Keep on making films! :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Once upon a Time in Raval
watch?v=IZzB8jiOEgk
Short film
psycomedia 5 months ago
@psycomedia Fun little short!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
nice yaa realyy nice! good work!
Ayeshaparween 5 months ago
@Ayeshaparween Thank you very much!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Great acting, very intense and very emotional. The opening was outstanding. In a way, the story would have been better if it ends on the guy begging his girlfriend to stay. The point of the film is anger to remorse to regret....
cscdigitalgraphics 5 months ago
@cscdigitalgraphics Thank you for the feedback, it's always interesting to hear good tips on how it could have been more powerful, I will take it with me into future projects. Thanks for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
lol his reaction in the first minute of the video: how the hell did i get into this shit?!
r1oot 6 months ago
@r1oot Haha, yes, despair is the feeling I wanted to lift up. Thanks for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
wtf this sucks!
animeworldchick 6 months ago
@animeworldchick I'm sorry to hear you say that, thanks for watching anyway :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
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kevinmarkfilms 6 months ago
@kevinmarkfilms I wonder what you wrote?
andreashurtig 1 month ago
SWEDISH <3
Jag gillade filmen, den rörde mig.
Bra jobbat.
FRRT23333 6 months ago
@FRRT23333 Kul att höra att du gjorde de, tack för att du tittade!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
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Please check out my latest two short films: The sci-fi drama "NUMERICA" where for every child born an adult must volunteer to die and also a fun little comedy short entitled "Love Sick".
Just click my username and head to my channel, thanks so much! :)
kevinmarkfilms 7 months ago
@kevinmarkfilms Two good short films, fun to see a funny short, keep up the good work!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
uhm, it seemed to me that he killed somebody. uhm, did he killed his gf or he was just talking to an answering machine? i just cannot understand. uhm, it is also draggy.. the first part is too long. i thought at first he was just having a hard time readying himself in confessing to a girl...
anyways, you could always redo it...practice more.. :)
marovic2 8 months ago
@marovic2 I agree with you, the first part is to long. About the answering machine, that could be the case, i guess it's up to the viewer to decide! Thank you for the feedback.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
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sebsomm 9 months ago
@sebsomm Very interesting film. I was trying to figure out what was happening. Has he died? Visiting his old home, were new people have moved in?
andreashurtig 1 month ago
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kevinmarkfilms 9 months ago
@kevinmarkfilms ..and here you wrote something too?
andreashurtig 1 month ago
it took you long to get to the point
in your next film make it short and sweet please
rougerules57 9 months ago 11
@rougerules57 I totally agree with you, it dragged on a little bit to long. I hope you will enjoy future videos. :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
it took you long to get to the point
in ur next film make it short and sweet plz
rougerules57 9 months ago
@rougerules57 Yes, when looking back, I can see it should be a little bit shorter. Thank you for the feedback!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Brilliant!
DJacqu8351 10 months ago
@DJacqu8351 Thank you, your comment is brilliant!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
u sort of look like michael rosebu something from smallville who plays lex luthor but when he has hair.
purpleheart300 10 months ago
@purpleheart300 Haha, I've actually heard that before. Maybe I'm Michael Rosenbaums twin?
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Thank you! This is one of my favorites out there. I appreciate you letting me post a response. Keep up the outstanding work!!1
exactimages 10 months ago
@exactimages Thank you, you are awesome!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
The title for your short film interests people, "ooh about love and telling her you love her". Without reading the info beforehand. I waited, impatiently for the dialog and just more of an understanding of the film. Exceptional job, with the big and surprising twist! Good choice for music. I agree with kickboxer11, about the beginning being dragged a bit too long. More films please. Kudos to you.
itszchristine 10 months ago
@itszchristine Thank you for your feedback! Yes, it's always interesting diving in to the subject of love!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
nice film!.. i liked the melody sooo much
geldishka1 11 months ago
@geldishka1 Yes, is haunting!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
P.S. I hope you don't mind what I did with it. re: video response. :)
exactimages 11 months ago
@exactimages It's an honor! I really liked it!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
This was very incredible and intriguing. It captured my attention immediately and kept it through the entire film. Fantastic job with one camera and one angle! The emotion comes through loud and clear. Very intense. Exceptional job done with a very sad but real subject. Bravo!
exactimages 11 months ago
@exactimages Thank you very much, it warms my heart to hear it. :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
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andreashurtig 1 month ago
Am I the only one on here who didnt get the point of this film?? :D young fella staring at the mirror (apparently) for 3 minutes.. He did kill her? or she was just angry ? ????? im not saying it was a bad scene, but I just didnt get that:))
petermynar 1 year ago
@petermynar I guess it's up to the viewer to decide. How ever you look at it, it's mainly a film about despair. Thank you for watching it anyway. :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
wow this was really powerful.
tagalicious2789 1 year ago
@tagalicious2789 My mission is complete, thank you for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
keep it ! nice video
oidutStudio 1 year ago
@oidutStudio Thank you very much!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
-.-
Cyborg321123 1 year ago
@Cyborg321123 Haha, sweet.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
i realy like ur short it inspired me to make my own .
Bkproductions6 1 year ago
@Bkproductions6 Wow, i'm glad to hear it! Is it online to watch?
andreashurtig 1 month ago
woww this is really good1
You're gonna be an amazing director someday
courageousvictory 1 year ago
@courageousvictory That is beautiful to hear, i'm looking forward to more little projects.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
It is a really good movie and you are a good actor as well (you shouldn't write that in the description because it might affect some people!;) )!
perhonen21 1 year ago
@perhonen21 That's probably a good idea, actually, im going to follow your advice and remove it now!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Very nice film; I enjoyed it a lot. :)
I like the fact that it was all from one angle - this typically makes a film quite boring, but it worked really well for yours. The only thing I would change is the beginning - maybe shorten that part or cut a few scenes out. I understand you were trying to convey the emotion, but it dragged on a bit long, for me.
But, again, very nice work!
Kickboxer128 1 year ago 21
@Kickboxer128 I totally agree with you, it dragged out a little bit to much. Thank you for all the feedback!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
AWESOME......
glenquilat 1 year ago
@glenquilat You are awesome!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
You're not a bad actor, this was touching and beautiful.
ElderVanBuren 1 year ago 4
@ElderVanBuren I'm glad to hear it!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
It was a devastating short film but it was very good.
TaylorSheneaP 1 year ago 2
@TaylorSheneaP Thank you so much. :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Maybe i'm a year late in commenting but i love this.. great work. i love it that you didnt show that he opened the door. It leaves your audience imagining what could happen next :) <3
filmparadis 1 year ago 2
@filmparadis Thank you, i thought so to. We have the same minds!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
You captured the emotions so well.
MissTiffyToxic 2 years ago
@MissTiffyToxic I'm glad to hear it. Thank you for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
I like it.
cuhle73 2 years ago
@cuhle73 Thanks!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
VEry Nice!!! (:
mikurushikumi 2 years ago
@mikurushikumi Thank you!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
i just simply dont know what to say to this..i wanted to cry...i just couldnt believe what happened...very good film...although i would have liked to seen what happened after he opened the door to the person that was knocking..
mikeysgirl314 2 years ago
@mikeysgirl314 Just let it out. Yes, that whould make one interesting sequel. Than you for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
This is really good stuff man...keep it up...what track have you used for the background score?
iraclion 2 years ago
@iraclion He came, he stayed, he fell - EF
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Cute guy(:
Sexy hands<3
XxSceneErikaxX 2 years ago
@XxSceneErikaxX My hands are super sexy.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
I njoyed it man, good job
Clone56 2 years ago
@Clone56 Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
i really felt like cryin.....
Anushree19 2 years ago
@Anushree19 Do it, let it go. There is something beautiful with a good cry.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
So amazing!
xemmahhleex 2 years ago
@xemmahhleex Thank you, it warms my heart to hear.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
This was very well put together. I loved the dramatic display of emotion, though some of your movements were a little redundant, like reaching up to touch your hair or your face, which I can understand would be a habit in times of stress, but I would have limited it to maybe two times, since lifting of the arms is really, really strong body language. The tension was brilliantly conveyed in the pacing around the bathroom, and I loved how you had the door shut when you delivered the lines. Bravo!
Chanceless 2 years ago
@Chanceless Thank you for all the feedback! It's very useful for me to hear. And thank you for watching, i've watched your singing videos, and I like them alot!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
well, you've got me crying despite your "bad" acting.
i liked this a lot.
vivalaxmorgan 2 years ago
@vivalaxmorgan That is beautiful to hear, it feels good, having made an impact somewhere. Thank you for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
I love this! You did great, really. Btw you're acting was good, but the part when you came back after you left the bathroom I was expecting a more dramatic expression, but anyways keep it up! keep doing awesome shot films as this one.
AndyandBruna 2 years ago
@AndyandBruna Thank you, I appriciate the feedback. I've watch some of your singing videos, you are very talented!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
Where are you from? This was good, but you should've filmed it in the day or told your neighbours because I think screaming or something would have fit. You're not a bad actor, though.
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
I am from Sweden, were are you from? Yes, you are probably right, it whould have been better.. thank you for your feedback, have a good day!
andreashurtig 2 years ago
I am from the UK! I know a Swedish guy. Maybe you know him :P I watched your 'You Are Fantasic' video but unfortunately I don't speak Swedish...:( You've got some great movies! x
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
You can choose to see it with subtitles, or doesn't that work? Oh, were does that swedish guy live? :)
andreashurtig 2 years ago
Oh! I didn't know that. Thanks. Currently he's in Liverpool, England, for a music degree.
Once a class of Swedish teenagers came to our school and taught us a bit of Swedish...all I know is Jag elskar dig (?) but I can't use that! :P
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
haha, thats a nice little sentence :) ..if i should be picky it's "Jag älskar dig" ..but I i'm not very good in english so!
andreashurtig 2 years ago
:D I'd like to learn Swedish someday. Sounds cool :P How old are you by the way?
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
Yeah, i like the language :) I'm 20 years old in the film. Now i'm 21. How old are you?
andreashurtig 2 years ago
Almost 16. Are you in movies or art as a career?
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
No, i'm pursuing my dream to one day work with films. My has always been to be a director, and since I finished school i wave been trying to get into directorschool. Do you have any dreams of working with film?
andreashurtig 2 years ago
Nice :) Well I'm going to study medicine but after University I'll either do that, or possibly try becoming an actor/writer/director...I'm crazy about making movies, just I have such difficulty creating interesting stories for short ones. Have you seen any of mine? They're easier to imagine than create, that's why some of them seem a bit pointless and hard to understand :P
GoldVisionFilms 2 years ago
@GoldVisionFilms I've seen them, and I like them! I hope for you the very best in the future.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
mmmmm yeah pretty good ..but you can add more
johnyhenao 2 years ago
@johnyhenao Yes, you are very right about that. It's very stripped down, maybe to much for some. Looking back, I whould probably do alot of things differenty. Thanks for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
hahahahaha this is hilarious.
triggles91 2 years ago
@triggles91 I'm glad you are happy. :)
andreashurtig 1 month ago
I get the concept of the film but you will please tell me what the knocking sound was? Was it you, a neighbor or the girl maybe coming back to life???
dancekat 2 years ago
Maybe it was the neighbour, maybe it was the girlfriend coming back to haunt him, you decide :)
andreashurtig 2 years ago
Um? Well I think if I had to choose it would be the girlfriend coming back because he had like a crooked smile at then end of the film. :P
dancekat 2 years ago
@dancekat Yes, that could very much be the case. If you say that is the ending, that is the ending. Thank you for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
maybe it was the police
DutchCourageWhoohoo 2 years ago
Great idea. Unique and interesting... but again, I would have started about 2 minutes into it. Still, I love the concept. *thumbsup!
KerrickLiev 3 years ago
@KerrickLiev You are so right. Looking back, that whould be a great idea. The first part is way to long. Thanks for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
*his
alechan90 3 years ago
@alechan90 Jepp.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
so...the guy has a fight with her girl. he hit and killed her right? then after he despear and go to the bath, he go back and tell her to wake up but it's too late because she's dead?
alechan90 3 years ago
@alechan90 Yes, that sounds like a good interpretation of it. I guess despair was meant to be the underlying theme. Thank you for watching!
andreashurtig 1 month ago
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no nudity = bad movie...nice try
fightme10s 3 years ago
@fightme10s Haha. Well, we all have different taste in films.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
I thought it was too much of the same thing over and over. Over half the movie is the boy breathing heavily in front of the camera. I did like what variation there was, but it wasn't enough for two minutes, and I was disappointed to see the movie revert to that toward the end.
The rest of it is amazing, though. Very sad and touching.
freddumpling 3 years ago
@freddumpling Thanks for you reflections, i appriciate it. And I totally agree with you, the first half, could be a lot shorter.
andreashurtig 1 month ago
hey what camera did you use?
fakersfield 3 years ago
I used a JVC GZ-MG77.
andreashurtig 3 years ago
so somebody's dead?
fakersfield 3 years ago
Who knows, only your imagination sets the boundries :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
it was pretty darn good to me! :)
iiFia1125 3 years ago 2
Thank you very much, hope you will see my future videos :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
está increíble el video! me encanta, de verdad. es sencillamente genial.
yalleguee 3 years ago
I'm pretty bad at spanish, but thank you! :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
ooohhh
so he killed his gf?????
i think i get it!!
lol
sry bt tha drooling was just too much
i'll give ya 3 stars
good luckk with your next vids
leadparachute79 3 years ago
Thank you very much :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
good. but the drool..... didn't need it. from actor to actor, that's a no no.
my friend didn't get the ending.
oliveorginski 3 years ago
me either
flimflamman53 3 years ago
Thanks for watching, try watching it again? :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
I totally agree, it was just to much. Thank you for your opinion! Maybe your friend will get the next ending :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
i liked it (: x
MontyyGrrrl 3 years ago
Thank you :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
*(shock)* :O
ohh-kay?
LOL
rayselmayann 3 years ago
Did you get the ending? :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
no, couldnt bothered
rayselmayann 3 years ago
Any tips for my filmmaking? :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
ohhhh i watched it again!
ohhhhhhhh he killed his gf? or wife? watever
LOL
and now i get it....
soo so ill giv 2 stars =D=D
c yaaah
rayselmayann 3 years ago
Thanks for watching, hope you'll see the other videos coming up soon :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
umm.....
sugarbab1992 3 years ago
You're not very satisfied with it? :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
Bra jobbat
arsenchik 3 years ago
Tackar :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
Najs! :D//steph
2L82Getme 3 years ago
Ja nånstans får man börja iallafall, så tack! :)
andreashurtig 3 years ago
Bra jobbat Adde!
Jag måste säga att jag är lite imponerad...
Hoppas du har det riktigt bra och att att du trvis i den nya skolan! hoppas vi ses snart// Andreas Gustafsson
barcelonaren 3 years ago
Det var verkligen roligt att höra, ja de är bara fint här borta :) hoppas du har de bra så ses vi säkert snart! Tack igen!
andreashurtig 3 years ago