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  • you should make it so rick get sicks or something happens and yuki confesses all by his bed side. Rick dies, Yuki dies of a broken heart and they meet up again

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  • You should have a twist, but a happy ending.

    I only have the "twisted" part. d:

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  • wooow so many comments.. O.O

  • what if you time skipped again and Yuki has an apartment of his own and lives in a different town and its been like another year and he is still depressed that he was dumped and is alone, he managed to find a job and tried dating...he one day returns back to visit his son and sees his ex wife and its still very akward since she found someonelse and they are all loveydovey, his son and him go to the same place that rick and yuki met last time and son leaves noticing the tension and they finally

  • (con) rick and yuki never break eye contact and both are shocked how things repeat themeselves. Yuki comments how this happend before except Rick was with the guy...The he blurts out how he misses rick and wants him back and how he is all he ever thinks about but Rick. Rick angrily tells him off saying how he hates him and being hurt by him, how he didnt make up his mind and how a relationship would never work because he doesnt love him and the guy he used to be with they are now serious.END.

  • or an alternative ending could be yuki has a house of his own and lives in a diff town and Rick again knocks on peoples doors and they meet again. :) they shocked how things repeat themselves and how they cant get away from each other and this time cant hold back their repressed feelings and have hot mansex lol. xD and finally stay together and Yuki says he knows what he wants and its Rick and years pass and they happy and ex wife is jealous and the kid is happy for them, and loves them.

  • im definitely not a writer but lets try this:) Yuki feels lost thanks to his wife kicking him out,he doesn't know where else to go so what is he gonna do(i think you know Lol)he goes to Rick's house for comfort even though he knows he doesn't deserve it for trying to push Rick away so many times.Rick is surprised that he went to him but also angry that he would be Yuki's sloppy seconds.Aaand that's all i can think of..im already out of brain juice Lol.

  • what if yuki is in a car crash and dies but then he wakes up on the first day of his job in the first episode becuse it was all a dream. hmmmmm?

  • I GOT IT

    they bump into each other agen n talk then rick says omg my bf popped the question yay! then yuki says but wait i wanna be with you then yuki says tough! ur too late u broke my heart too many times... yuki thinks about it for a while n decides maybe its best to let rick go n be happy... till he somehow decides to crash the wedding n say NO!PLS DONT LEAVE ME!

    then rick has to make a choice at the alter between yuki n new bf..

    who will it be? the rest is for u.. soz i kno its bad :P

  • This one's good, but at gay wedding, I don't think that would be acceptable for the Priest.

    No Offense, I really like your story.

    And I love this series.

  • actually i think you can have gay marriages nowadays

  • @FamousForMadness gay marriage is allowed in the netherlands :D

  • Yuki : My wife left me..

    Rick: So you come back to me?

    Yuki: yes.. ;-;

    Rick: Because you can't have her you choose me?

    Yuki: I had the responsibility of a wife and a son to be there for, she has no idea what I gave up to try and make it work. It's killed me to not be with you anymore, I've missed you but I've always ended up trying to do the right thing for her and she just leaves. I'm sorry, I don't know if you can ever forgive me but I wanted to try anyways.

    ?? xD tbc?

  • Yuki falls for Rick's brother!!

    and rick falls for yuki's son!!

    ZOMG.

  • Because Yuki's son isn't a teenager or anything, that's so appropriate.. <.<

  • wow..Rick falling for Yuki's son?that actually sounds good.but she wants to END it so i don't think that's the most appropriate thing,it'll just turn into a cliffhanger and we don't want THAT now do we?

  • you could always do the ending were yuki goes running to rick and rick opens him back with open arms well thats if rick truely loves yuki like he said he does but love is full of surpises you never know what will happen but its your story so its up to you have ever you end it no one can really tell you how to end it but yourself

  • Na a happy ending would be lame. There needs to be a twist, hum but what? Something not seen coming that's for sure. The ending must be lame, this is far more deserving that's for sure. Just so you know.

  • Let rick get pregnent >:O MUWAHAHA gay preggers :) HOT!

  • your sick

  • Maybe the new guy falls in love with Yuki one day whaha XD

    And he tries to "steal" him from Rick. And then uhh... Rick shows how much he still loves Yuki and Yuki shows his love back.

    Anothing thing you can do is that Rick was just pretending that that guy was his boyfriend. But it's not. (like he told him to act like that and stuff like that) And so he tries to play a little game with Yuki to make him admit his feelings for Rick.

  • That would be pointless, and lame.

  • I agree

  • I really dont know how you should end it but I deffinatly think they should be together. I dont know how that should happen but youll probably come up with something...

  • Just get them together, and then Kate moves away but Josh doesn't wanna go so he moves in with them...I dunno XD

  • I want them to be together~~~ But not straight away. Something like Yuki has to prove he loves Rick and will never leave again. Dunno how but I'm sure you can think of something.

  • Happy ends are the best!!

    you can't take this dreampairing away from us ;)

    pllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaa­aase!!!

    you just CAN'T let this story and sadly!

  • make something no one ever would expect :D

  • they sould hate each other for a awhile then get back together i want em back together

  • Ooo What is this song i really like it ?

  • Inna - Hot X3

  • Thanks !! ^^

  • I also think you sould add a little scandle before you get them back together- It'll make the reunion sweeter.

  • I'm right where you are with my Required Love so I think I know how you feel... But I would make it hard for Rick to come back into Yuki's life. Maybe the guy Yuki is seeing now dosent want to let go that easy. Or even better, Maybe he's cazy and someone get's hurt in a fight. I like to visit my "twisted" side to give my stories a nice twist. either way I can't wait to see what you come up with. Love your work.

  • Rick should make it tough on Yuki, but yeah, he should take him back :)

    And maybe have him meet Josh as Yuki's boyfriend at the end, that'd be cool!

    And Rick's boyfriend can get a job in Brazil or something and have to leave anyway... lol

    Please please have them end up together~

  • I personally think you should make Rick take him back. But he also has doubt in the back of his mind that Yuki may just go away again. This will make Rick distant and Yuki scared that he may lose someone else. Yuki should confront Rick about it, but Rick denies that he is become distant even though he knows that its true.

  • EH!? C'mon u don't know wht to do?? Just listen to what flippyrocks892 said it's a pretty good idea!

  • I don't think you should just end it with just "Rick and Yuki got back together". I mean, Rick should like, idk, hesitate for a while and yada yada starts a whole controversy with his new bf, Yuki files for divorce to keep their kid ect ect.

    Just my opinion, though. 8U

  • EHhh I think he should get him back and foreget they broke up.

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