Dim Mood

[MGABBYB]

Yay, thanks for coming to my rescue...

[WOMCProductions]

The world is like a bad dream,

You can't remember but it seems,

To stay alive inside your mind,

And prey upon your leisure time.

It happens in an open spot,

The air is sticky and it's hot.

First they take away our clothes,

Then they lay us down in rows.

[bowlingbrawlout]

WOMC

Viewed through my prism of "All poetry is *bad* poetry" this one is worth a second read.

Somewhere in there is a compliment.

[exit7sleaf]

I'm convinced; I'm intrigued, completely wired in a fresh way similar as I would be if I were reading a book.

[clayLavl]

hmm..interesting. what's it about?

[bowlingballout]

Check out the what it is a video response to. I did like the feel of this. I may try to make more "upsetting" poem vids. This was more of a prototype.

[slippereal]

cool one giuseppe i can't wait to see where this leads rock on browlingball!

[AVDJ]

Nice job, bowlingballout!

[joe6panther6]

Thanks, bro!

Very good. I'm planning on doing another vid soon based on whatever gets submitted.

[AVDJ]

I can't wait to see that!