You have amazing potential! The melody in the middle is brilliant. But I find the one in the beginning to be a little weak. I think at some point in the beginning you had and F sharp major that let back into G sharp minor 1:24. Just let it go into B major but then pull it back into minor again without changing your melody. Would make this SOOO much better :D. Not saying that I can compose like this. When I try to sound like Chopin I always get carried away and end up sounding different :)
wow, beautiful!!! wonderful atmosphere, well developed. it sounded like you stretched it a little bit sometimes, in terms of what sounded good and what seemed a little out of place, but overall, a beautiful piece. I suggest you work on it more, though. Embellish it, and keep up the good work!
Beautiful! Very well composed and presented! You appropriately wrote the piece with Chopin in mind; I myself am a pianist who holds a high regard for his music, and I definitely sense his influence in this piece! Bravo! Continue composing!
Beautiful! Very well composed and presented! You appropriately wrote the piece with Chopin in mind; I myself am a pianist who holds a high regard for his music, and I definitely sense his influence in this piece! Bravo! Continue composing!
You have amazing potential! The melody in the middle is brilliant. But I find the one in the beginning to be a little weak. I think at some point in the beginning you had and F sharp major that let back into G sharp minor 1:24. Just let it go into B major but then pull it back into minor again without changing your melody. Would make this SOOO much better :D. Not saying that I can compose like this. When I try to sound like Chopin I always get carried away and end up sounding different :)
sweetsadness10 1 week ago
TY NIE KOMPONUJESZ, TY KOPIUJESZ
To jest jest już kolejna kompozycja, którą po prostu zerżnąłeś od sławnych kompozytorów
MrKrummhorn 1 month ago
Strasznie mnie to poruszyło.. Mistrzowskie. Mam nadzieję, że nadal grasz, bo masz ogromny talent. Sama tworzę, więc wiem co mówię ;) pozdrawiam
ingpta 5 months ago
dosyć ciekawe !
nataliasadowy 7 months ago
wow, beautiful!!! wonderful atmosphere, well developed. it sounded like you stretched it a little bit sometimes, in terms of what sounded good and what seemed a little out of place, but overall, a beautiful piece. I suggest you work on it more, though. Embellish it, and keep up the good work!
missquackquack 7 months ago
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Beautiful! Very well composed and presented! You appropriately wrote the piece with Chopin in mind; I myself am a pianist who holds a high regard for his music, and I definitely sense his influence in this piece! Bravo! Continue composing!
hannahjohnsonmusic 1 year ago
Beautiful! Very well composed and presented! You appropriately wrote the piece with Chopin in mind; I myself am a pianist who holds a high regard for his music, and I definitely sense his influence in this piece! Bravo! Continue composing!
hannahjohnsonmusic 1 year ago
How are you? Son Bethoveen??
I love your music!!
Renesme12345 1 year ago 2
Omg. I absolutely love the way in which you change the keys. it's an ear-pleasurer.
musikal7 2 years ago
begin looks like Elegie (Rachmaninoff), other part like Chopin (nocturn cis-mol #20)
anermak 2 years ago
Good work!!!!
Sing with the right hand!!! I mean, the right hand should be stronger and the left one VERY soft.
Keep composing =)
lxlpaulolxl 2 years ago
Piękny występ
Jahhoo123 3 years ago
ładne
Rooodzynnn 3 years ago