I was in this play 10 years ago.. you did well I would agree with comments about the hair in your face being distracting, and also be more bold in the beginning as you go on, it should be harder to talk about where the pauses will be mote natural in the monologue. Hope this helps! :)
I LOVE REGGIE FLUTY. she's my favorite character :) im doing The Laramie Project in my acting class and I love it. I am putting up some monologues on my channel from it. But I think you did great :)
You definitely have potential, but what really bothered me was that you had your hair covering half your face. The audience needs to see all of your expression!
you did not suck and i started to cry i saw the play you got that from and just let me say you did better then they the actress tha t played her very well done
YOU were in the same class am I am now. YOU had the same monologue as I have now! However I am doing mine opposite of yours because I don't think the police should get emotionally involved in their work.
And she'll probably think I'm not doing it good because I am not attached to this horrid piece...I said it, I don't like it, I think it's bad...and I didn't like Boys' Life either; did you do that one too?
Yeah! I, well, this monologue is hard cause it can go either way. My teacher told me to be all stoic and non-emotional in the beginning and then kind of crack through the surface at the end. I can see why you wouldn't like this monologue though. Very dark.
We did Boys' Life too! I liked that play, it had to grow on me first though. :)
A monologue on the Laramie Project, the thing that happened to him was disgusting, I've seen it and I must admit (I'm sure this no longer counts since you have more than likely already performed your monologue) Its really good. the pauses and the tones were excellent and the finishing line was just heart breaking. =) well done
I remember that case, and I know there's a move out too with the same name that might help you (if it's the same thing). I missed the fact that you were acting as a police officer the first time, and was confused as to the lack of emotion, but then I went back and saw that, so it made more sense. Still, it seems like she might be just a little more emotional about the event than that, maybe a little more bothered by it, something like that. Nice job :).
Yea, it's weird. Sometimes when I'd go to comment on things it wouldn't post, so I'd resubmit, but it didn't usually post more than once, maybe that's what happened here though.
I remember that case, and I know there's a move out too with the same name that might help you (if it's the same thing). I missed the fact that you were acting as a police officer the first time, and was confused as to the lack of emotion, but then I went back and saw that, so it made more sense. Still, it seems like she might be just a little more emotional about the event than that, maybe a little more bothered by it, something like that. Nice job :).
I remember that case, and I know there's a move out too with the same name that might help you (if it's the same thing). I missed the fact that you were acting as a police officer the first time, and was confused as to the lack of emotion, but then I went back and saw that, so it made more sense. Still, it seems like she might be just a little more emotional about the event than that, maybe a little more bothered by it, something like that. Nice job :).
Nice hair, although it'd help connect with audience more if it was done in another style. I like how it looks though. I feel you should include a little bit more stuttering at certain points, or at least some kind of hesitation. Might heighten the dramatic effect.
i think it was really good.. i really like how u end it ..
I don't really understand that bullshit about cops showing little emotions and blah blah blah and showing a little bit of your self is good.. that is my opinion.. because if no one did that every one would do the part in the same way.. i hope i understood the comments and did not say things without understanding them but that is my opinion and yeah u should pull your hair back so it does not hide your face..
Girlfriend you are AMAZING. I love The Laramie Project, it's so moving. You did way better than the girl who played the officer at my school. CONGRATS!!
You did fine. However, it might help if you pushed your hair out of your face. First, it would help you you get into the role more -- no cop would ever appear on the job with hair looking like that. And second, it would allow your audience to see what you're trying to express with a bit more clarity.
You did a good job with the reading though. I'd hire you. :-)
The art should be to describe the scene as a true witness - describe what you saw totally without emotion BUT we should get just a hint that it has affected you.
We should end up thinking - what a heartless sod - but then think - hang on - she did allow a hint of herself to come through.
Please accept this as a positive comment - you were not dispassionate enough.
One cops arent unshakeable..they are very shakeable they just know how to get over it..frankly I think that was good it felt real it just felt like a woman talking to me like she was telling me the story because I asks..Good job Honeybear..oh this is Jessi if you didnt know..hahah..love you
Sounds good. The only thing I suggest would be to do sort of a build. Start of stoic, like you're trying to be an unshakeable cop, the slowly get more and more flustered. Don't get weepy, just try to convey that feeling of "I can't believe I saw something that horrible." Then try to regain your composure when you're talking about the picture.
quite good...well actually i don't know the play...maybe you should try to get a bit bustling, when you describe what you've seen, but as quick as you become fast-paced you also should calm down... in total most time it was on th same speech level, perhaps you could diversify that more...speak more quickly, than more slowly...(i know that this is very difficult, but try it again and again^^)...be careful that it does not become too exuberant...hope i could help you
I was in this play 10 years ago.. you did well I would agree with comments about the hair in your face being distracting, and also be more bold in the beginning as you go on, it should be harder to talk about where the pauses will be mote natural in the monologue. Hope this helps! :)
thereal12step 1 month ago
I WAS Reggie. In my senior year of High school.
Nana4742 1 month ago
yeah I'm doing Reggie for my Drama class in High school she sounded like the best person to pick :D
Droplich1993 2 months ago
I LOVE REGGIE FLUTY. she's my favorite character :) im doing The Laramie Project in my acting class and I love it. I am putting up some monologues on my channel from it. But I think you did great :)
dreamdaily94 1 year ago
no offense but i dont believe your responses...
reggie fluty was THERE. she saw matthew tied to the fence and covered in blood... shes a cop... she aint no sweetheart.
shes a tough cookie and she tries to hold it together in this interview and finally breaks down.
you kept the same pacing throughout the monologue. build on it more and readjust your beat analysis.
ReachMabry 1 year ago
You sound just as cute as you look
TLK61987 1 year ago
You definitely have potential, but what really bothered me was that you had your hair covering half your face. The audience needs to see all of your expression!
ZannyRamone 2 years ago
you did not suck and i started to cry i saw the play you got that from and just let me say you did better then they the actress tha t played her very well done
TRUEBLOODFAN2010 2 years ago
you did a good job! :) my biggest criticism is that the hair in your face was very distracting. other than that, it was really nice
erikagrice 2 years ago 2
oh my god that was really good i my self am an actor and that was so good
charmedandfriendsfan 2 years ago
hey this not bad..check out my monologue! thanks!
Bfolks84 3 years ago
YOU were in the same class am I am now. YOU had the same monologue as I have now! However I am doing mine opposite of yours because I don't think the police should get emotionally involved in their work.
And she'll probably think I'm not doing it good because I am not attached to this horrid piece...I said it, I don't like it, I think it's bad...and I didn't like Boys' Life either; did you do that one too?
nydolls1973 3 years ago
Yeah! I, well, this monologue is hard cause it can go either way. My teacher told me to be all stoic and non-emotional in the beginning and then kind of crack through the surface at the end. I can see why you wouldn't like this monologue though. Very dark.
We did Boys' Life too! I liked that play, it had to grow on me first though. :)
Who's your teacher?
HoiTahPoiSha 3 years ago
You did a good job on your monologue. I remember this happening I was still working for DOC in Okla.
Keep up the good work, you make good videos.
Danogil 3 years ago
A monologue on the Laramie Project, the thing that happened to him was disgusting, I've seen it and I must admit (I'm sure this no longer counts since you have more than likely already performed your monologue) Its really good. the pauses and the tones were excellent and the finishing line was just heart breaking. =) well done
bwadarkness 3 years ago
You soooo didn't suck!
It made me start to cry because
it was wonderful how you did it.
It was beautiful! Reall, it was.
And I'm not just saying that. I
really did start to cry. I think you
are brilliant.
emoboi415 3 years ago
damm!! ur good shit that story sounds deep i can say ur acting is shit hot!! welldone
marvingit 3 years ago 2
sexy
bruisermist 3 years ago
That was very good. Your tone was perfect!
I am a new fan of you. I think you're awesome!!
wanderingvoice18 3 years ago 3
thats deep
shag232002 4 years ago
ook yea to help a suggestion it was good wording but more emotion like u acually saw this "boy" dying in front of u
xgregxgorex 4 years ago
I remember that case, and I know there's a move out too with the same name that might help you (if it's the same thing). I missed the fact that you were acting as a police officer the first time, and was confused as to the lack of emotion, but then I went back and saw that, so it made more sense. Still, it seems like she might be just a little more emotional about the event than that, maybe a little more bothered by it, something like that. Nice job :).
runeshai 4 years ago
runeshai; Do you remember that case?
Jackle61 3 years ago
Yea, why? My comment posted 3 times, I don't know why.
runeshai 3 years ago
runeshai; Just jokin' around, I've had that happen to me, not sure why it happens.
Jackle61 3 years ago
Yea, it's weird. Sometimes when I'd go to comment on things it wouldn't post, so I'd resubmit, but it didn't usually post more than once, maybe that's what happened here though.
runeshai 3 years ago
I remember that case, and I know there's a move out too with the same name that might help you (if it's the same thing). I missed the fact that you were acting as a police officer the first time, and was confused as to the lack of emotion, but then I went back and saw that, so it made more sense. Still, it seems like she might be just a little more emotional about the event than that, maybe a little more bothered by it, something like that. Nice job :).
runeshai 4 years ago
I remember that case, and I know there's a move out too with the same name that might help you (if it's the same thing). I missed the fact that you were acting as a police officer the first time, and was confused as to the lack of emotion, but then I went back and saw that, so it made more sense. Still, it seems like she might be just a little more emotional about the event than that, maybe a little more bothered by it, something like that. Nice job :).
runeshai 4 years ago
Nice hair, although it'd help connect with audience more if it was done in another style. I like how it looks though. I feel you should include a little bit more stuttering at certain points, or at least some kind of hesitation. Might heighten the dramatic effect.
Good job~ Good luck for your theatre class!
TiptheJester 4 years ago
wow your really hott
demonoroli 4 years ago
i think it was really good.. i really like how u end it ..
I don't really understand that bullshit about cops showing little emotions and blah blah blah and showing a little bit of your self is good.. that is my opinion.. because if no one did that every one would do the part in the same way.. i hope i understood the comments and did not say things without understanding them but that is my opinion and yeah u should pull your hair back so it does not hide your face..
tinejenta 4 years ago
Girlfriend you are AMAZING. I love The Laramie Project, it's so moving. You did way better than the girl who played the officer at my school. CONGRATS!!
kingcharlemagne23 4 years ago
Liked it - i wish you well in your studies
visitor3107 4 years ago
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what the **** is wrong your alien esque eyes? god you are ugly. ugly parents i presume
LUNAPOLICE 4 years ago
oh yeah and what makes you better than her? get a life you saddo.
IAMTHEJESTERBOY 4 years ago 3
I think she's attractive. I suplex thee into the third row for that comment!
MrPotatoesLatkie 4 years ago
eine auge im gesicht zusehen ist ein zeichen für eine behinderung oder ?
lenkatka 4 years ago 3
No; one eye in her face isn´t a malfunction :-)
Maybe it is a new hair style made by " hairkiller " - the new coiffeur ;-)
oliver02041981 4 years ago
nice hair
oliver02041981 4 years ago 2
You did fine. However, it might help if you pushed your hair out of your face. First, it would help you you get into the role more -- no cop would ever appear on the job with hair looking like that. And second, it would allow your audience to see what you're trying to express with a bit more clarity.
You did a good job with the reading though. I'd hire you. :-)
flimbag 4 years ago 3
u did a good job and why would people try 2 kill him its dumb
maniloverunescape 4 years ago
I disagree with the previous comments.
The art should be to describe the scene as a true witness - describe what you saw totally without emotion BUT we should get just a hint that it has affected you.
We should end up thinking - what a heartless sod - but then think - hang on - she did allow a hint of herself to come through.
Please accept this as a positive comment - you were not dispassionate enough.
Paul.
PaulR986 4 years ago 2
One cops arent unshakeable..they are very shakeable they just know how to get over it..frankly I think that was good it felt real it just felt like a woman talking to me like she was telling me the story because I asks..Good job Honeybear..oh this is Jessi if you didnt know..hahah..love you
rhsbdb 4 years ago
It's not too bad, really, but like the others here said, there's always room for improvement. Hope you do well.
nextg 4 years ago
Well....Im not sure but,u could express more emotion while talking.....but anyway at least you memorized it,it´s a good start!
FlashingBlRD 4 years ago
Sounds good. The only thing I suggest would be to do sort of a build. Start of stoic, like you're trying to be an unshakeable cop, the slowly get more and more flustered. Don't get weepy, just try to convey that feeling of "I can't believe I saw something that horrible." Then try to regain your composure when you're talking about the picture.
insanitybook 4 years ago
quite good...well actually i don't know the play...maybe you should try to get a bit bustling, when you describe what you've seen, but as quick as you become fast-paced you also should calm down... in total most time it was on th same speech level, perhaps you could diversify that more...speak more quickly, than more slowly...(i know that this is very difficult, but try it again and again^^)...be careful that it does not become too exuberant...hope i could help you
Cicero753 4 years ago