MJ Fantasy: "Heated Revenge" Part 8

[01MsJackson]

When are you gonna finish this story I love it

[chergarcon]

Amazing story! Please continue or else I might actually just die. Like right now. Omg, it's truly amazing. So emotional. *sniffle*

[makenart]

This story is going great so far. Sad that Mike ended up in jail though :( Please continue it, please. Thx

[MegaZakeya]

minoeke7 *teary eyes* Michael's in jail. :( I couldn't watch the whole thing, 'Cause me and my Dad had to go to the mall and have Dad day. So I missed alot, huh? :(

[minoeke7]

i want to read the next part asap

[minoeke7]

when michael just gave danny 1 punch in the face it would have been good enough and he knew also that he had to leave nicole alone and keep his hands off of her, but mike was so filled with anger that he didn't know when to stop. i hope mike will get soon out off jail and mellody will get ok too

[1137Godrocks7]

awwwwww my gosh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[lovepeacemusic777]

where is part 9 ?

[Brittney1997able]

I hope they are going to be okay

[MsRoneagle]

i cant stand danny at this point michael is in jail because danny is a fucking asshole

[ivonnefanmjjackson]

this is the first time i've see this fantasy cuz the last was ~Dangerous Affair~ xD

but i have to say this hunni.. great work as always! and i don't like that Danny no! >.<

[HannahLuvsMJx]

oooooh juicy lol cool loved it

[rambo71626]

amazing.. how could u write that.. very well job..

thx for sharing..

:)

[BabyGirl25134]

Danny, YOU GOT UR ASS HANDED TO U!!! NOW MY BABY IS GOIN TO SPEND THE NITE IN A GOTDAMN JAIL THX U SOO MUCH, DANNY U PIECE OF TRASH!!! srry lettin out som steam. Melody plz be ok lil applehead!

[BabyGirl25134]

Danny, YOU GOT UR ASS HANDED TO U!!! NOW MY BABY IS GOIN TO SPEND THE NITE IN A GOTDAMN JAIL THX U SOO MUCH, DANNY U PIECE OF TRASH!!! srry lettin gott som steam. Melody plz be ok lil applehead!

[keepfaith777]

Wooow !! I like this story very much. i can not wait for next part. thank you very much.:))

[1mjjloverforever38]

Mane, shiddd he deserved more than that. But gone den Mike YOU BEAT HIS ASS!!!!!!! Keep going....

[mskristina1000]

OMG! i'm so so sad, poor Melody and Michael i hope both of them will be ok. Fucking Danny is ruining everything, if i was in here i would soo kill him for everything

[mskristina1000]

this fantasy is getting good! i hope Melody and Michael are going to be ok

[luvlybabez101]

@mskristina1000 :D aww thank u so much honey!!

[mskristina1000]

@luvlybabez101 hey if youre not busy, do you mind making a fantasy for me as well. get back to as soon as you can and i will give you details for it ok :)

[MegaZakeya]

@luvlybabez101 Just asking, how old is Melody supposed to be? Plz reply

[mjgoonmusic]

I love this story! Poor Michael, I hope he can come back home soon and Melody is okay! Can´t wait for the next part!!!

[luvlybabez101]

@mjgoonmusic thank u so very much sweety♥ :)) im glad you love the story!

[mjgoonmusic]

@mjgoonmusic Your welcome, I really love it! You are great MJ fantasy writer, can´t wait to see what happens next! L.O.V.E!!!

[MONIELUVSMJ]

okay Danny deserved that ass whooping, he is ruining everythingg.. I looovveedd this sooo much giirrlll. gosh, it's like watching a movie. and ohhh noo poor mel and michael. next part plllleeasseee! ((:

[luvlybabez101]

@MONIELUVSMJ yeah he did! he just doesnt know when to quit! and thanks soooo much loveyy!!! :DD

[mskristina1000]

@MONIELUVSMJ yeah!! he needs a good wooping in da ass!!

[MJlova99]

@MONIELUVSMJ ikr I cant STAND danny!!!

[smileMJ33]

I always love your fantasy sweety ,you are a beautiful fan MJ

[luvlybabez101]

@smileMJ33 awww thank u so very much sweety! that means a lot to me♥ :)) im glad u enjoy them sweetie!

[PAIDIA1]

omg..pour melody and Michael...i hope they are ok...and cant wait for the other storys....

[luvlybabez101]

@PAIDIA1 i know its so sad :( but thanx love :))