Those damn crane machine games are rip offs. They make the claws barely close to purposely allow the animals to slip from the claws grasp, no matter how good at the game you are. Screw that rip off machine.
that was a really good story. the walk cycle in teh begining might be to over exgerrated but overall u mannaged to convey the story very well. It might not be super polished but its good enough to get a pretty good job
I'm happy now. So Jaseth, you don't have to explain people why you don't like my reel. I know why you don't like it and I respect that. But right now I have a job and I'm improving a lot. To me that's the most important thing.
Thanks the rest of the people who enjoy my video. I appreciated it.
Hey jaseth, I'm the guy who made this reel. Sorry about my english. I speak spanish. I just want to say I don't care if some people say something bad about my reel. They're free to say whatever you want. Some people like it and some don't. It's ok. This was my very firts animation. I'm a business administrator who decided to go to Vancouver to try something new like Animation. So, after 6 moths working and learning I'm really glad with my final work. I got a job because of this. So, I'm happy...
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I don't really know good anima from bad. I have never studied the lighting and machanics of it. I do know that I personally am a crap artist and I stand unafraid to admit it. Since jaseth obviously is more intelligent then all of us, I suppose he has merrit. BUT. Since this is America, jaseth be damned.
Since I have a very good freind who can clean a crane machine with a hand full of quarters, I added that to a playlist. I liked it jaseth, reguardless of you.
I am not being a hypocrite. This is the way a modern civilisation works. People specialise in different areas to ensure the best efficiency and output. When your milk is sour in the supermarket, people don't tell you to go make it yourself. When someone does a single backflip at a huge talentshow and thinks he's the shit, the crowd doesn't cheer because most of them haven't spent the two hours it takes to learn to do it. When this guy makes crap animation, he shouldn't expect special treatment.
Obviously not since I'm 19, but that is completely beside the point. Whether or not I can do it does not make it any better. I am good at other things.
You wouldn't be able to sing like Britney Spears either, but you probably think she is crap anyway.
Compared to basically every other animation I have seen this was boring and annoying to watch. The animation was plain and without life and the character had no personality. The plot was thin and the ending obvious.
The animation was very boring and without character, movement standard and annoying, story lame and predictable. I have no idea why you would make something like this.
why do all of these use the same booring music? and no, the video wasnt funny at all. maybe you guys over there have forgotten that music is a very improtant part of humor, and humor have to be original and unpredictable to be funny. Bad music, and VERY predictable.
au contraire. I thought it was apropriate; often times I feel like 3d animation emotions are way overdone, whereas he just looked like someone who was kind of pissed off and surprised but knew it's just a teddybear and nothing to get to upset about but still determined.
but to me it looks like its "sigh + pissed" because he was sighing and his right eye was showing an angry/impatient emotion. But these 2 doesn't blend well you see. Try sighing and also be pissed at the same time, look at the difference with the animation. Especially the eyebrows expression
By the way, showing the eye action (watever u call it) it means he is already upset.
Plus, this animation was going for exaggerated style already looking from the way he walk
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Your character acting sucks. I saw no life in your characters. Your poses that you chose were weak. The first shot at the beginning was complete over acting. I there was no reason for him to move that much.
Firstly, this is animation, it is not supposed to be like real life. Secondly, it was really well done, thirdly he is a student, he does this to get better, lastly, do it better yourself
Arenal, Animation is suppose to be the illusion of life. Its suppose to feel real so you connect with the character. No I've seen better stuff done, I could tell this project did not have another planning put into it. And as doing it myself? Duh dingbat, I am an animator I create animation. That is why I'm so nitpicky about it.
Actually the uncanny valley explaines how when something that is not supposed to be lifelike looks more like humans we get creeped out. Anyway, you're talking like there is only one way to create animation. You have your way and he has his, maybe he will only use it for this one an make a close to real life animation next time. As i already pointed out this is also a school project. So if you want to help him out don't say "your character acting sucks" Sometimes being nice helps
Also, just to take a real-life example from gaming. Killzone 2, arguably the best looking game EVER right? Well, look at a little game called Team Fortress 2, it has cartoon style animation, sells like hot bread anyway. It's all about variation. If everyone were to create animations like the guys creating Killzone 2 it would grow stale...
Um hello? I am another animator here. I know what I'm talking about. I hate the term "Kids Cartoons" animation is not meant to be just for kids. Who do you think makes them?
In case you haven't figured it out by the other comments Buddy you totally fail at criticism. I hope you are a little punk emo kid so we can hang you up and make you an emo pinata! You'd get to feel pain and we'd get to beat the sh*t out of you so everyone wins!
um, no, I'm not a little kid. I'm another animator. That is why I'm nitpicky about animation. That is why I see imperfections and cliche` choice of key poses. That is why I see that this person, only animated from the book and never deeply thought about the character.
yah same here, as an artist I love when people cut my work up, I like to know what people think good and bad that way you know how to improve. Your always going to get crits you don't agree with 100% but every bit of input helps.
the guy looks like ernie off of george lopez
thatyankeeguy 10 months ago
He needs to be more detailed with the quarters
left4deadmaniac197 1 year ago
I hate those evil machines...I never "won" anything from them....CURSE YOU EVIL LOOSE GRAPPLING CLAWS!!!!!!!!!
equarg 1 year ago
awesome
Bornandbledfilms 1 year ago
Those damn crane machine games are rip offs. They make the claws barely close to purposely allow the animals to slip from the claws grasp, no matter how good at the game you are. Screw that rip off machine.
BrittanyER86 1 year ago
he reminds me of Mr.Bean
radiotevee 1 year ago
LOL
b2311e 1 year ago
I love the dramatic slow motion moment. It's funny the flowers didn't get chopped :D Nicely done1
vseslav1 1 year ago
very good
miniprizes 1 year ago
good film.
does it purposely bear resemblence to sonachaos's video "the skill crane"?
watson9194 2 years ago
Молодец!
globalkevolution 2 years ago
AwesomE!!!
Munchis.-
leocubeddu 2 years ago
Very good !
Greets from Holland
Transavia17 2 years ago
lol sick
airforseone 2 years ago
that would go good in pixar shorts
flippysshotgun666 2 years ago 12
Looks like Mr.Bean
RawrADinosaur20 2 years ago
make more of them there so cool
soccergirlfreak7 2 years ago
rofl man! that was cool!
JikiriQuickspear 2 years ago
Very good!
KritikosLyraris 2 years ago
This Clip is freaking Awesome!!
spyguy503x 2 years ago 2
excellent work your rigging and ur animation is very good
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that was stupid not funny at all
WebkinzCutie09 2 years ago
Really good!
BluBel123 2 years ago
that was a really good story. the walk cycle in teh begining might be to over exgerrated but overall u mannaged to convey the story very well. It might not be super polished but its good enough to get a pretty good job
donp244 2 years ago 3
Looked kinda unfinished
IkkyBooger 2 years ago
lol!!!
stackcups 2 years ago
one of the better ones i have seen from VFS
adam61589 3 years ago
I'm happy now. So Jaseth, you don't have to explain people why you don't like my reel. I know why you don't like it and I respect that. But right now I have a job and I'm improving a lot. To me that's the most important thing.
Thanks the rest of the people who enjoy my video. I appreciated it.
leocubeddu 3 years ago
Hey jaseth, I'm the guy who made this reel. Sorry about my english. I speak spanish. I just want to say I don't care if some people say something bad about my reel. They're free to say whatever you want. Some people like it and some don't. It's ok. This was my very firts animation. I'm a business administrator who decided to go to Vancouver to try something new like Animation. So, after 6 moths working and learning I'm really glad with my final work. I got a job because of this. So, I'm happy...
leocubeddu 3 years ago
HaHa I really loved it!!
m4rcandre 3 years ago
lol sooo funny
kongfumonkey 3 years ago
wow i soo agree with everyone else who posted a comment on this video. It was amazing! exciting, funny, and inspiring from beggining to end!
Chick6517 3 years ago
Animated version of Mr. beans Mody?
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GuardianShortMovie 3 years ago
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DJ0KNUF 3 years ago
teddy got owned rofl
andreacanadian 3 years ago
I don't really know good anima from bad. I have never studied the lighting and machanics of it. I do know that I personally am a crap artist and I stand unafraid to admit it. Since jaseth obviously is more intelligent then all of us, I suppose he has merrit. BUT. Since this is America, jaseth be damned.
Since I have a very good freind who can clean a crane machine with a hand full of quarters, I added that to a playlist. I liked it jaseth, reguardless of you.
zrsgallygirl 3 years ago
I am not being a hypocrite. This is the way a modern civilisation works. People specialise in different areas to ensure the best efficiency and output. When your milk is sour in the supermarket, people don't tell you to go make it yourself. When someone does a single backflip at a huge talentshow and thinks he's the shit, the crowd doesn't cheer because most of them haven't spent the two hours it takes to learn to do it. When this guy makes crap animation, he shouldn't expect special treatment.
jaseth1337 3 years ago
Obviously not since I'm 19, but that is completely beside the point. Whether or not I can do it does not make it any better. I am good at other things.
You wouldn't be able to sing like Britney Spears either, but you probably think she is crap anyway.
Compared to basically every other animation I have seen this was boring and annoying to watch. The animation was plain and without life and the character had no personality. The plot was thin and the ending obvious.
jaseth1337 3 years ago
Leonardo Cubeddu , you will be very BIG !
3na8 3 years ago
lol
runescaperzoco 3 years ago
Hahaha happy end :DD
Razerman30 3 years ago
Everything about that was subpar.
Coribec 3 years ago
LOL!
x6cute 3 years ago
I lold
Cabalwannabe 3 years ago
The animation was very boring and without character, movement standard and annoying, story lame and predictable. I have no idea why you would make something like this.
jaseth1337 3 years ago
well it was kind a' boring BUT maybe he's learning to use these visual animation & effects program... so maybe thats the reason he made it
topo3000mix 3 years ago
ha cuteee!
mirandaaa1646 3 years ago
Very funny!!!
Gleison2 3 years ago
cute
20thCenturyMovies 3 years ago
Wow what'd he do with the Teddy to make it's head fall off?
Cute though~
sweetfactory20 3 years ago
probably the axe?
nerdfighter314 3 years ago
Yeah probably the axe...
sweetfactory20 3 years ago
..nice.
Spoooky76 3 years ago
The crane machine without glass?
leonlim20000 3 years ago
a bit overreacted at the end...
did he really had to break it?
JoeyJIL 3 years ago
Yeah, just had to tilt it a bit.
lexugax 3 years ago
that was cool i wish i could make vids like dat
kandieshow 3 years ago
Great job, however the music was a little weird...... Nonetheless, keep up the great work!
LiamsTech 3 years ago
hahahaha
HelloKTanna 3 years ago
funny.. nice job
sNyoNz 3 years ago
A barrel of axes? Sweet!
zimzim7 3 years ago 2
Not bad at all. Certainly not excellent, but good nonetheless.
dAMike2468 3 years ago
nice mimics and emotions... really good work
konikula 3 years ago
it was alright. wasnt the best. kind of bad animation. it got a little sloppy with the music. to cliche for a film like this.
tdwpfan182 3 years ago
why do all of these use the same booring music? and no, the video wasnt funny at all. maybe you guys over there have forgotten that music is a very improtant part of humor, and humor have to be original and unpredictable to be funny. Bad music, and VERY predictable.
emil2796 3 years ago
sorry but i must agree XD
BrysonEn 3 years ago
:S i think the texuring/modeling an animation is a little poor. U need to look at more references i think.
ElfenLiedd 3 years ago
funny...good work:))
alinpatru 3 years ago
loved this one
andrewpacific4 3 years ago
haha
geekstar9 3 years ago
I loved it!
vargak 3 years ago
lame
shadowsofdream 3 years ago
Argh! Those dang crane machines T-T
tekunoredii 3 years ago
I've had that happen to me, and that's when I reached my hand in there and got it. Yey for skinny arms!
psycoticsinginchick 3 years ago
I always keep an axe handy for these types of situations.
missdivinestalls 3 years ago 2
Funny, i liked the twist.
gdsworld 3 years ago
Very good and clean, but I feel the animation lacks personality..
jaseth1337 3 years ago
Always make sure to have a basket full of axes nearby (or was it left from Halloween VIII?) lol
mario64bits 3 years ago
LoL that was great!
Very funny and very well done, A+!
Snarzellor 3 years ago
lol :D
PesiCool 3 years ago
funny!
hohappyhing 3 years ago
wow! that was really good =]
3DiegoF 3 years ago
thats was really funney!
robenghuse 3 years ago
Hahahahahahahahahaha!!
JassimAlAli 3 years ago
Rofl !!!!!!! :D
KnightsLantern 3 years ago
Hahaha This is Fun to watch ^^
silentacer 3 years ago
nice animation...
twowizdom 3 years ago
adorable! I like this one a lot. Who hasn't gotten mad at those darn machines?!
justducky834 3 years ago
Hahahaha how cute!
Crane machines are hustlers. o.o
xCYN116 3 years ago
I miss the cartoons. That's the only reason why I subscribed.
magicemail 3 years ago
lol...this is great!
All animation is cool and its not meant just for kids either!
DeJa72 3 years ago
pretty good.
gunner49oranje 3 years ago
lmao awesome.
thenoobwar 3 years ago
agree with buddy309. the acting wasn't good. especially at 0:55
GlennAxion 3 years ago
au contraire. I thought it was apropriate; often times I feel like 3d animation emotions are way overdone, whereas he just looked like someone who was kind of pissed off and surprised but knew it's just a teddybear and nothing to get to upset about but still determined.
blejanre 3 years ago
To u its looks like that.
but to me it looks like its "sigh + pissed" because he was sighing and his right eye was showing an angry/impatient emotion. But these 2 doesn't blend well you see. Try sighing and also be pissed at the same time, look at the difference with the animation. Especially the eyebrows expression
By the way, showing the eye action (watever u call it) it means he is already upset.
Plus, this animation was going for exaggerated style already looking from the way he walk
GlennAxion 3 years ago
LOL good one
Hyperactivexp 3 years ago
he could've just reached in and grabbed it, that's what i do
AlishaIceboxx 3 years ago
haha i remember these
Kirilltraceur 3 years ago
Only problem I can see is why he just didn't give it a push so the bear would fall out when it was balancing on the edge.
LPMovies 3 years ago 2
yea thats what I was thinking too
firespikez 3 years ago
Good, but I saw better ! TalantisChannel, there is many french talents !
SolalChabauty 3 years ago
ROFL! ^.^ I've played that machine!!!
gijis02 3 years ago
Good video you're getting good at this!
Quinctius 3 years ago
i hate claw machines they are designed for you to lose!!!
JoraRain 3 years ago
moral of the story: kill for what you want
Tripp393 3 years ago 2
its kinda true that its kind of lame
like the graphics are flawless but the expressions and animation, the plot and the puches are ackwardly put into place
but still its a great job
gammabun 3 years ago
Great job, I liked how he walked at the beginning.
xuangxuang 3 years ago
nice :)
0silviu0 3 years ago
nice work
Hazaraid 3 years ago 2
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Your character acting sucks. I saw no life in your characters. Your poses that you chose were weak. The first shot at the beginning was complete over acting. I there was no reason for him to move that much.
Buddyb309 3 years ago
Firstly, this is animation, it is not supposed to be like real life. Secondly, it was really well done, thirdly he is a student, he does this to get better, lastly, do it better yourself
Arenal0 3 years ago
Arenal, Animation is suppose to be the illusion of life. Its suppose to feel real so you connect with the character. No I've seen better stuff done, I could tell this project did not have another planning put into it. And as doing it myself? Duh dingbat, I am an animator I create animation. That is why I'm so nitpicky about it.
Buddyb309 3 years ago
Actually the uncanny valley explaines how when something that is not supposed to be lifelike looks more like humans we get creeped out. Anyway, you're talking like there is only one way to create animation. You have your way and he has his, maybe he will only use it for this one an make a close to real life animation next time. As i already pointed out this is also a school project. So if you want to help him out don't say "your character acting sucks" Sometimes being nice helps
Arenal0 3 years ago
Also, just to take a real-life example from gaming. Killzone 2, arguably the best looking game EVER right? Well, look at a little game called Team Fortress 2, it has cartoon style animation, sells like hot bread anyway. It's all about variation. If everyone were to create animations like the guys creating Killzone 2 it would grow stale...
Arenal0 3 years ago
wtf is up with you arena.....? xD
Pepito1608 3 years ago
what? just because i think he deserves constructive criticism and think its good? yeah... wtf is up with me
Arenal0 3 years ago 2
constructive criticism fail.
DaParkVid 3 years ago
ur joking right? ever saw kids cartoon animations?
Quinctius 3 years ago
Um hello? I am another animator here. I know what I'm talking about. I hate the term "Kids Cartoons" animation is not meant to be just for kids. Who do you think makes them?
Buddyb309 3 years ago
In case you haven't figured it out by the other comments Buddy you totally fail at criticism. I hope you are a little punk emo kid so we can hang you up and make you an emo pinata! You'd get to feel pain and we'd get to beat the sh*t out of you so everyone wins!
Snarzellor 3 years ago
um, no, I'm not a little kid. I'm another animator. That is why I'm nitpicky about animation. That is why I see imperfections and cliche` choice of key poses. That is why I see that this person, only animated from the book and never deeply thought about the character.
Buddyb309 3 years ago
I support you 100%
I can´t understand why people gets bugged off by constructive comments on films that´re not their own.
stokmarknes 3 years ago
I'm all for constructive comments, but saying "Your character acting sucks" is not constructive in any way
Arenal0 3 years ago
yah same here, as an artist I love when people cut my work up, I like to know what people think good and bad that way you know how to improve. Your always going to get crits you don't agree with 100% but every bit of input helps.
mckronic 3 years ago
He's like a skinny version of Ernie from George Lopez.
FrostbiteMedia 3 years ago
its really annoiyng when it does that
rendyrandy 3 years ago
ughh cool
openguinsrule 3 years ago
I laughed. That was cute.
saruhara 3 years ago
All he had to do was nudge the side of the crane machine.
Zoidage 3 years ago
not bad at all
TouchRocks 3 years ago
Aww... Yeah, poor teddy :((
PirateGirlz 3 years ago
that brings life into perspective Ive done some many cruel things to those machines enough so, they would haunt me O.o
hulkthefuror 3 years ago
the drawings in the outro were the best of the whole^^
well it was funny an these crane machines.. since mario party 1 I know that theyre epic luck machines
TimeBreaker1987 3 years ago
funny funny funny
Docthewrench 3 years ago
^^ the poor teddy
pseydopuppet 3 years ago
Nice
Logan5312 3 years ago