Air J.S.Bach

[allo325]

You are very stiff when you play.

Before you play relax. If you are less tense, your vibrato will be much better.

Also you played an open e and that is a big no-no.

Your tempo isn't consistant.

Also, try playing with a tuner. It will show you when you are out of tune if you can't hear it.

But it only needs a little work, keep practicing.

[refpmeaksedot]

For this violin you can use a Carbondix ;)

And why you play this wonderful piece on an electric?

[robalupa]

Practive more..

[pedrojindrax]

Meu amigo, me desculpe...mas tenho que dizer que esta horrivel....calma, as veses nos precisamos escutar algumas criticas para melhorar...o seu prolema eh que essa musica ja eh realmente muito dificil.Mas uma coisa eh certa, ou você toca ela mais rapida (só um pouco) ou mais lenta(q particularmente-é dificel-mas fica muito mais bonita0...e você tem momentos que toca rapido, depois lento..pula algumas notas, por isso acho que você deveria escutar ela novamente e fazer um novo video...Obrigado.

[SairenKisaki]

nice....just more timing

[Relacuna]

I absolutely think there should be more vibrato on those longer notes. Warm it up! Use the decrescendos. It's not terrible, just needs a little fine tuning.

[s3w3rm0use]

1. more practice to master the tap

2. improve the vibration

3. put more feeling (decrescendo)

[16fingers]

nothing about you, but AIR is nothing for you.

[Atento80]

un korg......KORG...urgente.

[orchdork20]

this violin doesnt have such great tone.

[cogermax91]

beautiful violin !!!!!!!!

[spongeprince123]

again u have to play this piece with positional change, u cannot stick with 1st pos with pieces like this. try Air on G string first.

[aghaanantyab]

you should use a metronome

bad tap

[372278221]

It is BWV1068 ?

[soshi96]

i think the bowing in the first long note must be a lil slower...heheheh...

but ur play is still good^^

keep practicing...XD

[Smebninja]

Hi,

this was a bit like an impro.

You have to pay attention to the length of notes.

Although not bad ;-)

[ubbddu]

why use a lovely bow on an electric violin?

[violinspieler]

I just wanted to try it out... ;-)

[ubbddu]

Actually its not that bad...

I'm just a snob ..

[axelbrz]

Mmm.. I think it's out of time. Imagine the background (piano) so you understand what I'm talking about. Beautiful sound :)

[superanita22]

wow

[pikachoi2007]

not bad, you just to widen abit your vibrato. otherwise. great job. 5 stars

[amenlu]

sigue trabajando en el vibrato y cuenta bien los tiempos!!!

vas por buen camino de todas formas

[hannibal7777]

dude...you killed the song! :/

[muajaa]

hahaha

[1reisha]

such a beautiul tones

[rooddyy10]

Just Exelent =)

5/5 =)

[AndromedaAiken]

Try holding your minims for two counts instead and make sure you count in your head when you play so the piece flows better but this is a good effort!

[kigger622]

violin man can u send me this please? the music part for violin

[Jueng7]

Excelente

Fico imensamente emocionada.

Parabéns

[elyaz17]

very good. The tempo you chose is very appropriate.

[NawhileCrocodile]

Is he playing that out of a Suzuki book? If so, which one?

[violinspieler]

Sorry, this is no suzuki piece ;-)

[debsarooni]

I think you played this beautifully

[EDTYSpotter]

You are so cool. Play the ioline and wear the OCC Pullover.

I Drive Harley and going to learn to play the Violine... 4 stars ;)

[violinspieler]

thanks :-)

I love those OCC guys and most of there bikes. I like Harley too, but I drive a Yamaha FZ 1 Fazer ;-)

[7878666]

can u have more feeling~....

[violinspieler]

can u keep closed your mouth until you've made just ONE vid on your own?

[pikachoi2007]

Not bad, I just hope to see more of musicality, more feelings, and you will be able to carry over your audience.

[LuciferOuAnge]

Du hast sehr schön gespielt :-) Wie lange hast Du Geige gelernt?

Weiter so und viel Spaß beim Geigespielen. :-)

[violinspieler]

Danke sehr, alles in allem hatte ich vielleicht 5 Jahre Unterricht und ich habe ca. 8 Jahre meines Lebens gespielt, nur leider mit einigen Unterbrechungen.

[charmom]

I want to play this someday.

Please check out my video, I really want feedback becuase I am playing this again for a competition.

[violinspieler]

you are good!

I hope you load up more videos ;-)

[PressF5forHelp]

Fantastic, I always loved this piece, you play it very well!

[violinspieler]

Thanks, it was really hard work...