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  • please continue this story.please..please.please!!!­ :)

  • If you don't continue writing this, my life will be worthless. This was the BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ ON YOUTUBE. Did you make a new account? Where did you go? :'(

  • :( y didnt u continue?! i love it!!

  • GOOD GRAVEY THIS IS FANTASTIC PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE AND YOU TRULY ARE AMAZING AT WHAT U DO

  • DONT LEAVE ME HANGING LYK THIS!!

  • omg please post more!! i love this story!!!

  • I've been up since 6am readin ur story n u jx gonna leave us like dis. U jx messed up ma day

  • where's episode 42?? plz write again!!! I LOVE this story

  • Please please write again?(:

  • I love your stories! I've read this one for like 5 times, when are you gonna write again? ;d

  • Oh wow more plz, I don't how many times I've commented on this to get you to post, but I just love your story at the moment I miss it.

  • PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I dont know how many times I've posted on here asking you to continue!!!! PLEASE! We love your writing :)!!

  • Love the episode!!! Post another one soon plz?!?!

  • Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz CONTINUE!!!

  • YOU REALLY NEED TO WRITE MORE!!! I've Read This Series Like 5 Times Already! Please Make More!

  • DUDE!

    WHEN ARE YOU GONNA WRITE AGAIN !?

  • are you going to do anymore

  • where's the next episode

  • Please Please Please do the next epi :)

  • plz post soon i keep reading them over and over again

  • every time i come to see it theres ep 42 but there isn't its just another disappointment i love ur stories why dont u ever finish them?

  • plz post the next one!!!!!!!

  • Please post more! !!!!

  • Uhhh wheres the nexttt onee????

  • Please post soon, I've read this whole series today!!! :D

  • when are you gonna post more ive been waiting for months

  • @fencesfan101

    HAHAH!!! IKR!!!

  • pls post more !!!!!

  • I love this story

    please more !!

  • awesome series i love it and can't wait to know what happens

  • i hope you get your computer fixed soon! (can you do a my chemical romance song at the beggining if you can?) :DD

  • POST MORE OR DIE!!!!

  • oh plz oh plz oh plz post moreee!!:)) i just love this sooo much:)!

  • post soon plzzz!!! i love this series!!!!!

  • wat happeded u should post soon

  • Please post soon i love this series!!!

  • awesome, more plz

  • Post soon please. I just read you entire series today and i'm hooked.

    btw.i feel you on them internet issues. i'm going threw them myself.

  • hope your computer gets fixed soon!!! even though i don't know ya.... luv ya!! no homo :)

  • Post more <3 (:

  • Ill Prefer waiting then u ending this series... but plzz promise ull still post even tho its a while since u haven't posted :)

  • will you post the next soon? =)

  • i love these series there one of my favourites

    whens the next episode comming?

  • -Hurry up & madee the other onee,&& when you do send it to mee pleasee.!!

  • where is the next one???????????????

  • I watch you whole series today it soo good!!!! please make more!! not trying to pressure u or anything!!! N I ♥ your other sries to like PLAYERS!! please continue that too!!!!!

  • I will spell each word now with correct punctuation and grammar. Until you post the next episode, I will keep writing like this. Please, do not make me write like this any longer because I write really slow. Post more episodes soon, please. Thank you.

  • Omg where is the next 1. plz dont do this 2 me. Im addicted to your series now. plz plz plz post!!

  • plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post

    

  • please continue It is my.....tenth time reading up to here and i need to rest.

  • can u post more please...

    i cant wait anymore!!!!!

    it so fun to read your this story...

    please update more for all of us....

  • HOLY FUCK LOVE THIS SERIES!! YOU NEED TO COME BACK! PLEASE?

  • I love this series!!! Please come back!!!! :)

  • Please..Make another episode of this,,Im a huge fan of your stories...please..just make another one...Pwease?? ='(

  • Yea it's December over month has passed plzzzzzzzz make more I <3 this series

  • Pleasee post the next one it's December now n btw I love ur series :D x

  • please put more i barely started reading these and there so addicting. i read them allin 2 hrs so please post more

  • mooreee !

  • M O R E  : (

  • post more please!

  • I love this series sooo much! Post more!!

  • love it

  • have u pasted i cant find the next one ? :)

  • love this series. ha,its funny how she will fall for him then think about everything he has said in the past then turns all icy again. i hope she gives in eventually though. lol. p.s. u should totally check out my stories.

    ~princess

  • What's the other song called?

  • another one!

  • Hehe very sweet. Post as soon as you can

  • moreee<333333

  • POST MORE POST MORE PLEASEEE!

  • next one plzzz. <3

  • She said this on a video: I told one of my readers on myspace to tell you but i guess she didnt. Well to put it short, my sister was a snitch and told my dad i was writing these types of stories and my dad got mad blah blah blah he wanted me to delete my profile and i told him i did. But i didnt. I like writing too much and i love you guys too much too so ive been waiting all this time because he was checking but now it seems like he has forgotten so yeah, im gonna start writing again tomorrow

  • demi is so strong!!!!! love it! unlike other stories....

  • haha sterling's compagny.. XD i love demi in that story!!! she's just perfect..

  • post soon :) :) :)

  • i love this story hope we see more of the kind joe !!!

  • thnk u sooo muchh cuz u come backed and because i have been waiting for this story for so long! <3<3<3 and even u thnkkkk u <3<3

    hahahahahahah =)

  • more please

  • Pls more storys...

  • wow, amaizing XD

  • love it keep posting

  • So good post more soon

    xx

  • awesome

  • i love this series.. to tell u the truth i used to hate it.. i guess i was too immature to understand it? ahahahaha but its AWESOME!!! Thanks for posting so quickly<333

  • i sooooo loved it i cant wait for more :)))))

  • Ouch! I bit myself trying to contain my laughter when my 7 year old sister asked me what it meant when a guy got hard O_o

  • O.o oh damn, what´s she´s gonna do?

  • LOL, I hope Joe actually tells his feelings to Demi ! x3

  • loved it! haha. can't wait for the next one... should really go do my homework now. lol. still. LOVED IT!!!!

  • haha joe your in truble :) luved it! post next onee soon!

  • Oh I hope she doesn't mess him up on purpose..

  • Nvm again, lol it works now

  • @joenelisxoxo hahah, this is amazingggggg!

    gawshhh you made my heart leap this is gonnna beeee sooo gooodddd ;)

    can't waittt for the next one and yes! you're finally back...i told you ppl she was coming back :DD

    -3r!k@

  • @joenelisxoxo can you write more for us...

    pls we love it more....!!!!

    pls!!!!!

  • .....but i have comcast.....

    lol well comcast does hav its problems too

    sooo yeaaa lmao

  • ooooooooo =O

    She is sooo going to get him back! =O

  • She's gonna get him back!

    Oh yeah!

    And I love how Joe's all hard when he saw Demi bent down.

    MORE PLEASE!!!

  • Awhh (:

  • haha joe- [0.0] LOL love this sries!!!

  • i loved it!!!!!!

  • ahhhhh lol shes ganna get him back ^.^

  • great job

  • EEP! More!

    Love it. Aww he trusts her

  • THNXSO MUCH UR FINALLY WRITING AGAIN YES! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

  • he's gonna have to tame his little friend *wink,wink*

  • awesome!!

  • post sooon!! :)

  • yay u posted so good :)

  • I wish i could learn that fast! But nooooo, im stuck in slow mode 4evr!

    Another good epi by the way!

  • Haha Joe SOOO likes Demi!!

  • Wow she learns fast LOL :P please post more

  • -_____-"""" nevermind the internet doesn't work. DON'T GET COMCAST.

  • I love this story.!

    post more!!1

  • KEPEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • post more i wanna know what demi's payback will be

  • The internet is fixed damn comcast has the WORST costumer service EVER.

  • Omj I hope she tortures his ass anyways

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    Also wat happened to players and blood lust

  • This story is good I'm really depressed and it still managed to make me smile 8c)

  • Great episode! i was just wondering when jemi will be officially together? (:

  • Hey guys -.-""" comcast internet is pissing me the fuck off. It keeps shutting down. I'm using my phone for this because I can't go on the internet since its not working. These people have to make sure there fucking system works and there fucking workers to know what theyre doing -.-""""

  • @joenelisxoxo that must suck, but thanks for trying to post i bet ya'll (or you) are annoyed i was when my computer would freeze up:)

  • Let's the payback begin please! 

  • i wanna know what's Demi gonna do to him for payback!!! AHHH!! 8D

  • joe u r gonna have hard time paying for what u'd said :D:D:D this story ROCKS! love it! ♥

  • Pls post more 4 all of us...

    I'm really addicted,attracted and love the story...

    Pls post more i'm getting more insane now(kidding)

  • this serie is so awesome =) post more soon

  • cant wait for the next episode im obsessed with this story. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • awesome cant wait for the next one hahha joe wont holnd himself much longer and demi will make him suffer

  • Cool, Chelsea Staub

  • I really want them to kiss!

  • OMG YAY CHELSEA! plwwwease dont make her mean *puppy dog eyes* :) loved it!!

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