Your speech made us laugh specially when you showed chicken and eggs. It was surprised us so I think it was really good. and everyone could make it perfectly. But I think when you walk around, you had better more smooth. It was not natural : ( anyway I think your speech was so fun. Good job choyee :^) and your cloth is cute:P
Your demostration speech was really interesing and your topic was so great especailly the chiken and eggs. But you need to walk around the classroom more naturally and check your audiences whether they follow your directions well or not throughout your speech. I am looking forward to joining your next speech and well done!!!!!
When I started my speech, I forgot my script, so I hesitated many times. It was not good. Therefore, my speech was not smooth. I need more practice. I think my pronunciation was bad. I sounded like a Korean. At the end of the speech, I couldn’t time my speech. I had a few seconds left. My worst mistake was pointing at someone with my index finger. It was rude. I didn’t know that. But overall, it was not bad. Cheer up CY!!!
Your speech made us laugh specially when you showed chicken and eggs. It was surprised us so I think it was really good. and everyone could make it perfectly. But I think when you walk around, you had better more smooth. It was not natural : ( anyway I think your speech was so fun. Good job choyee :^) and your cloth is cute:P
Ayasa218 1 month ago
Your demostration speech was really interesing and your topic was so great especailly the chiken and eggs. But you need to walk around the classroom more naturally and check your audiences whether they follow your directions well or not throughout your speech. I am looking forward to joining your next speech and well done!!!!!
yangyoung48 1 month ago
When I started my speech, I forgot my script, so I hesitated many times. It was not good. Therefore, my speech was not smooth. I need more practice. I think my pronunciation was bad. I sounded like a Korean. At the end of the speech, I couldn’t time my speech. I had a few seconds left. My worst mistake was pointing at someone with my index finger. It was rude. I didn’t know that. But overall, it was not bad. Cheer up CY!!!
choyee310 1 month ago