See You On the Finish Line (So Close 2) (Chapter 5)

[ngynjonaslover]

oh my god!!!! you really need to post the next chapter...my friends are reading this with me and they said you need to post!!!!

[Liene4587]

OMG!

Whats wrong with becca?

Poor nick, I hope they can visit her!!1

[jessicannamaria]

great chapter :) can't wait to find out what wrong with Rebecca! :)

[blankdanii]

I want to know whats wrong so bad lol :)

[BeckyJonasXoXo]

OMJ!!!!

Wats happening to Rebecca!!!

(love it)

[alohaxahola]

omg! what wrong with becca! =S i hope she's okay? i have a bad felling about this.....

loved it x

[acoustichearts94]

ommgg!!!

is she okay?!

will they come home?!

poor nick. :/

poor becca!!

ahhhhh more!

i NEED to know whats wrong.

NOW.

[followyourdreams29]

you're killing me! come on you could have told us

[helloxoxosunshine]

i honestly dont know how much longer i can wait. this is the most suspensful wait in the history of youtube fanfics.

[xOsEaNaOx]

I Read The Wholee Story Of So Close Yet So Far Last Night So I Can Read This One And Its Sooooo Good!

[bookofathousandwords]

i'm commenting, i'm commenting! whoo! :D

[bookofathousandwords]

post soon, please! i hope rebecca's alright!

[bookofathousandwords]

aww, man! DUDE, you totally can't stop like that. it kills, ya know that. come on peeps, get it to 20!

[ChillinCherryChic]

uh oh bad feeling...hope im wrong

[TheRealKennaNicole]

oh my gosh no!! im gonna like cry!!

amazing chapter!!

[ImaginationThrives]

Awesome. that's all I need to say, awesome.

[wishinonastar07]

ur killing me here woman!!!

grrrr....

hahahaha

now i'm officially REALLY nervous!

[nickjismyfavrit]

*glares*

you couldn't have told us?! fine. haha jk

hope fully joe kevin and nick will be able to go back.

awesome chapter.

plz post soon

[Boycrazy7484]

Don't stop there! post more please!!