! was extremely impressed with the overall professional look of it. You told a story without really giving the audience a backstory to buld from. The angles, the proper pauses, the lighting, the reactions. All of it. Very professional. I know nothing about you but this short left me wanting to learn more about the backstory and what happens next. Extremely impressed. Hold onto this as part of your portfolio. Someone will see it and take a chance on you for a feature.
Thanks so much, yeah it's kind of a thought less than a story really. I was going to shoot a music video but the band kind of flubbed on me, so I had this money and all this great equipment so I banged up a short little story/moment in time kind of thing. I had a really great crew so that's a lot of why everything looks so great. I have a Bachelors of Science in Film so I have a good bit of training, and I storyboarded the hell out of this lol so it's very consistent. Thanks for the comment.
When you opened the door to leave the bathroom, I saw a guy in a gray shirt sitting on the bed or something.
TeeKayN 1 year ago
@TeeKayN
GOOD CATCH! I actually never noticed that he was in the shot, damn lol
wallabyj 1 year ago
That was such a waste of time. What was the point of that? The music was lame. And put a shirt on or grow some muscles.
optimuslance 2 years ago
Thanks for your input
wallabyj 2 years ago
! was extremely impressed with the overall professional look of it. You told a story without really giving the audience a backstory to buld from. The angles, the proper pauses, the lighting, the reactions. All of it. Very professional. I know nothing about you but this short left me wanting to learn more about the backstory and what happens next. Extremely impressed. Hold onto this as part of your portfolio. Someone will see it and take a chance on you for a feature.
richardthewriter 1 year ago
Thanks so much, yeah it's kind of a thought less than a story really. I was going to shoot a music video but the band kind of flubbed on me, so I had this money and all this great equipment so I banged up a short little story/moment in time kind of thing. I had a really great crew so that's a lot of why everything looks so great. I have a Bachelors of Science in Film so I have a good bit of training, and I storyboarded the hell out of this lol so it's very consistent. Thanks for the comment.
wallabyj 1 year ago
@wallabyj its been a year since my original comment how has this short film changed your life?
richardthewriter 4 months ago
nice video
LegacyOfAdam 2 years ago
thanks
wallabyj 2 years ago
that was really good, and funny
CruzenV31 2 years ago
why thank you kindly
wallabyj 2 years ago
i'm sorry he's not bad,the cuteness makes up for everything.look at ashton kutcher,he can't act but he's hot.
crazytom9 2 years ago
cute but he can't act.
crazytom9 2 years ago
aw, don't say that about Tamas, he's a good guy, and he worked for free so I can't expect Pacino you know.
wallabyj 2 years ago
i wish there was more video and less credits, but good work(: and the guy was smokinnn hott haha
bpbaby3 2 years ago
That's a good note, I was worried it was a little credit heavy at the front, but I really liked the titles I made so I kept it.
wallabyj 2 years ago
ahhh shit happens I guess........ good job bro
Cesar71413 2 years ago
haha, yeah basically. thanks.
wallabyj 2 years ago
pretty anti-climatic for something so dramatic. it needs more
steveandlarry 2 years ago
unfortunately that was kind of the point
wallabyj 2 years ago
ha ha ha that was kinda funny.
katievanderventer 2 years ago
That's exactly what I was going for lol Just kind of a snicker at the end.
wallabyj 2 years ago
is that mercury rev? or Sparklehorse?
thejamesthird 2 years ago
It's a band called Woods. The song is "Rain On"
wallabyj 2 years ago
u should be noticed
gab1971 2 years ago
It would be nice, haha. But I'm still at the beginning so it takes a while.
wallabyj 2 years ago
good stuff.
can't wait for Coffee or Tea.
CathyTheDestroyer 2 years ago
You'll definitely have to
wallabyj 2 years ago