It's was good, but you could turn down the wierd voice you had cuz it's not fitting in quitly. But from all that it where still good. (don't point my sp)
nice video. i have also found an elite voice that would work good. try downloading WavePad. record what you have to say, and then mess with the pitch to your desire. try it
Me and some of my friends are creating a machinima. is it okay if we use this footage to base our machinima around. Ofcourse we would use different maps, different armor, different background story, and different words. However if would be very simular. Would it be okay?
The only problem I would have to say is the microphone. It's way too sensitive to sound.Besides that, creative and you and exceeding amount of potential.
Nice vid. Very nice camera work going on there. 'I shed a tear' and 'I crawled away to see the end'? Slightly contradictory? Or just poetic =p
I would like to understand the story a little better, though. A nuke or weapon? An actual sun? Is the character a gaurdian, custodian, a part of the people or the ones who destroyed them?
Do u think i could use this in a video with my guitar?
SoulEdgeHunter 2 years ago
WOW! thats all i can say! WOW...
very amazing! im subscribing
EnvyMyPower 2 years ago
Perfect. The voice was good, and the dialogue was poetic and smooth.
10/10
Pogra01 2 years ago
This was definitely worth watching 10/10
Rocketbuddy5287 2 years ago
It's was good, but you could turn down the wierd voice you had cuz it's not fitting in quitly. But from all that it where still good. (don't point my sp)
Ztyffe 2 years ago
foooo FUCK da faded sun
IM morre faded then that sheit
ninjaSerg09 2 years ago
every movie iv watched is so depressing today
misswolfy12 2 years ago
Wow,this video really speaks to me. 10/5
IceyIronMan117 2 years ago
That was really good. ;___;
Like seriously. 5/5 dude. Every concept of this is really, really awesome.
Charmwing 2 years ago
nice video. i have also found an elite voice that would work good. try downloading WavePad. record what you have to say, and then mess with the pitch to your desire. try it
hockeyminimigget 3 years ago
that was really good, im not sure what it was about, but it was good
spedkid117 3 years ago
can i make a remake of this?
if so, what did u use?
endrodi3 3 years ago
its ok but that alienish voice ruins it
kinggorgoth 3 years ago
good but to bloody depressing! lolz
numptypumpty3 3 years ago
poetic
adaman2122 3 years ago
T.T "beutiful"
draco3drake 3 years ago
Me and some of my friends are creating a machinima. is it okay if we use this footage to base our machinima around. Ofcourse we would use different maps, different armor, different background story, and different words. However if would be very simular. Would it be okay?
Robbieagray 3 years ago
The voice sounds very simular to the elites throughout the halo series.
Robbieagray 3 years ago
The voice... If it were slightly less whisper-ish, it would be better.
AsceticDarkness 3 years ago
good job
alphasnyp3r77 3 years ago
the voice is so freaking annoying.
But u made a good job with the video
84Ruckman 3 years ago
Are you kidding... I love that voice. Now if only I could replicate it... now that would be awesome!
Robbieagray 3 years ago
I do not know what to say other than good job. Wow... I think that sorta teaches a life leason. Good job. Good job.
ArcHeavyGunner111097 3 years ago
Really good job, not what I expected
Mathias41257 3 years ago
Excellent Job dude 5/5 your a brilliant writer!
oldgregggggggggg 3 years ago
i thought that was really good 5 stars man
superblip 3 years ago
wow...
IamWatchingGod 3 years ago
Nice.
The only problem I would have to say is the microphone. It's way too sensitive to sound.Besides that, creative and you and exceeding amount of potential.
Nightmareclipsntunes 3 years ago
Nice vid. Very nice camera work going on there. 'I shed a tear' and 'I crawled away to see the end'? Slightly contradictory? Or just poetic =p
I would like to understand the story a little better, though. A nuke or weapon? An actual sun? Is the character a gaurdian, custodian, a part of the people or the ones who destroyed them?
bluesocarrot 3 years ago
this is a thing where that sense of not knowing makes you interested.
5throth 3 years ago
im yoda ima soja, i thought i tode ya.
Covenantkilla25 3 years ago
the vocie is a bit annoying
bckb604 3 years ago
nice job
darkchaosphoenix 3 years ago
Poetism... if thats a word XD
JRod1745 3 years ago
Its nice but what do the words mean, artistically.
doboy09 3 years ago
well very superb job. kudos.
propertyofcaleb 3 years ago
very nice. whoever wrote that is extremely talented
propertyofcaleb 3 years ago
that would be me. thanks.
FireDragon04 3 years ago
dang your throat must of got saw
suiopqwnm2 3 years ago
That was awsome! did you wright it? Make more consiquesnses and ceep up the good work!
Syco300AWP 3 years ago
Pretty Nice, 5/5.
Make more please, because I'd love to see them.
ScAxAssassin 3 years ago
those words where so beautiful man that was an awsome video im going to give it a 5/5
demonhunterfollower 3 years ago
That was cool, im not trying to be mean, but some of the camera angles where a bit dodgy =D
i do halo 3 machinima aswell ,although i havent planned a series yet
thebest233 3 years ago
That was so artistic!
insiderperson18279 3 years ago
Nice, i really enjoyed that.
Hadlir 3 years ago
I though it was very good actually.
SpartanEpicon 3 years ago