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[pettyeddycme]

Bro i really like this...great job

[TheSoniaElaine]

This was a really great vid, thank you for sharing

[morcaman]

Please contact me at joel at morcaman dot com to discuss inclusion of this and other short films in my tv show, sprockets and splices

thx

[425aniket]

thanks for sharin this video great work loved the pace n acting in the movie

[cscdigitalgraphics]

Nice work, very intense at times. Great job.

[gentleterminator]

Thanks ! wish you a happy new year...

[TheStripeyStudios]

Hey! Thank you so much for sending the video to us.

Overall this is a great little short film. I was entertained throughout and it dealt with some really interesting topics, which I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to at some extent. Who hasn't had that one night when they go out and can't remember anything?

Favourite parts; the opening sequence with the smashed egg, storyline was quick and you didn't faff around.

Overall it was awesome! Liked and favourited! <3

[RORSCHACHPR0DUCTIONS]

Great work and something i can inspire too many thanks for the share would love to know more about your production :if possible?

[saujas123]

thanks for sharing, loved the pace, music and cinematography

[webtubeify]

Nice camera work...great editing...solid scoring, and audio mix: all around, great work.

[brushstrokesrock]

Nice cinematography. I especially loved the shot @ 2:19 - 2:22.

Honest approach to characters. Close-ups of the quiet girl's face kinda remind me of Ingmar Bergman's actors. There's just something calm yet striking about the film. Lovely.

[SharonDrory]

Love this movie. Excellent performance, emotional love story between people who do not know each other. Excellent video for my personal opinion Sharon Arik Drory

[SkProducts]

that guy looks like rupert grin

[audmani]

i am NOT into this type of thing at all, but i liked it, a lot! thank you, whoever sent me this. love wins in the end.

[yzrman76]

I LOVE THIS!!! Great filming, great acting and scripts and all around awesome piece. I can really learn a lot form this. I am also into filming and creating my own plots and screen plays and scripts. Thanks a lot.

[HarlemFilmCenter]

Hello to our friends at OnceAWeekFilmFest...! We enjoyed the film and shared on Facebook!

Thanks

[Penscreen]

I enjoyed it. I think the moral here is don't get pissed! Everyone I have known who drinks way too much ends up in the shit.

[xoticLezPride]

Thanks for sharing!

[t4705mb6]

Very.....convoluted - very obscure story telling. I don't believe in "messages" aimed at making you think if they don't show some sort of direction no matter how meager. Obviously there is a reference to alcohol. I didn't focus on that. I was first taken by the young man wanting a woman to masturbate in.

Everyone seemed "shallow" here. A common theme in today's film making - no decent person to "like".

Perhaps we are being programmed to KNOW we are all worthless & mean nothing to this world?

[mrpetersnelling]

@t4705mb6 Oh no! Sorry you didn't like the film. I think in a way things kind of are shallow and that lots of people are trapped in the shallow waters, but trying for something more, something deeper. We tried to make all the characters want something more in life and in the end the is a glimmer that love will triumph. We wanted the film to give young people hope and move them by making it about the kind thing they experience all the time. Thanks for your comments though.

[t4705mb6]

@mrpetersnelling Yeah, whatever. The values were decent. Maybe cut off your ear? Art and beauty are in the eye of the beholder. I'm sure you don't give a flying shit what I think. I commented during a weak moment.

The film was stimulating and though provoking, a real plus added to my day.

[ShelterDogs]

I couldn't really tell what this was about. I agree with others that the production skills were very good. But I can't say the same for the storytelling.

[mrpetersnelling]

@ShelterDogs Too bad for us! Sorry you didn't like the story. I guess we were trying to show how young people get caught up and make mistakes and do that in one night out on the town. Thanks for you comments though.

[ShelterDogs]

@mrpetersnelling I'm sure whomever sent me the link to this video did so so that you could get constructive feedback. So far it seems you are getting some fair criticism.. from two of us anyway. The rest just giving thumbs up. I'm a huge movie buff, so I've seen A LOT of movies. Honestly, I couldn't tell what it was about. It seems t4705 had the same problem. I think maybe too much going on at once. Productions skills were very good as I said. Some of the acting I liked, too.

[Fingasshole]

I enjoyed watching it, a very well done picture.

[mrpetersnelling]

@Fingasshole Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

[morcaman]

Please contact me to discuss adding this short to my TV show w w w sprockets and splices dot com. or joel at morcaman dot com.

[mrpetersnelling]

@morcaman Hi, Be great for you to add the film. Let me know how I do that. I'm on twitter here- @Peter_Snelling Cheers.

[colmonhs]

Wow! I forgot I was subscribed to this channel.

Superb movie! I liked it a lot!

Maybe you guys could add an actual person to provide some info before the movie starts and after it ends and give us a heads up about what is to come in the future on this channel.

[mrpetersnelling]

@colmonhs Really glad you liked the film! Cheers.

[andrewnorris2]

Really enjoyed this. I liked the way it was filmed, especially the phone call on the stairs scene. A moving and honest portrayal of some quite raw emotions, I was quite moved watching this. It was a bold move to get funding from the police. Impressed, thanks. Oh, and I really liked the choice of music and the use of still pictures at the beginning.

[mrpetersnelling]

@andrewnorris2 Really glad you liked the film. Thanks for watching. The funding from the police was tricky but in the end they actually just left us to get on with it and were much less interfering that some organisations I work for. Thanks for your comments. P