One more thing I thought of. Do you know how to notate bowings? If you look at m. 5 1st Vln the entire first bar is played downbow, and so on. Whenever you slur something together it is one bow direction and then the next slurred group is the opposite. So, for another example right there, m. 8 2nd Vln those notes will be played all in the same bow direction, which will probably be awkward to play.
When I go through a string work I pretend to play it with my pencil to see if it works.
@link090909 I admit I have no clue about string instruments :P ... at the time I wrote this, I was using the slurs as a phrase beginning-end marking, not realising it would affect the bowing
Very nice, Ross. I like the overall feel of it. One suggestion and one question off of the first listen. When you go into pizz at m. 17, I think you should have a second ending from the section immediately before it just to facilitate the change. And the question: is there a logical reason to have 2nd Vln higher than 1st at m. 43?
I have to continue in another comment, I ran out of space.
@link090909 I know now that a tiny little amount of time is needed for them to transition, didn't when I wrote this, I was only young and inexperienced :P
Wow! That was really quite fantastic! :D You should really consider ReaperMark7's suggestion, it's the perfect song for a part in a video game where your on a ship or something. ^.^
love it, put it in itunes lmao.
Dalton1357911 1 year ago
One more thing I thought of. Do you know how to notate bowings? If you look at m. 5 1st Vln the entire first bar is played downbow, and so on. Whenever you slur something together it is one bow direction and then the next slurred group is the opposite. So, for another example right there, m. 8 2nd Vln those notes will be played all in the same bow direction, which will probably be awkward to play.
When I go through a string work I pretend to play it with my pencil to see if it works.
link090909 1 year ago
@link090909 I admit I have no clue about string instruments :P ... at the time I wrote this, I was using the slurs as a phrase beginning-end marking, not realising it would affect the bowing
rossyxan 1 year ago
Very nice, Ross. I like the overall feel of it. One suggestion and one question off of the first listen. When you go into pizz at m. 17, I think you should have a second ending from the section immediately before it just to facilitate the change. And the question: is there a logical reason to have 2nd Vln higher than 1st at m. 43?
I have to continue in another comment, I ran out of space.
link090909 1 year ago
@link090909 I know now that a tiny little amount of time is needed for them to transition, didn't when I wrote this, I was only young and inexperienced :P
rossyxan 1 year ago
OMG THIS SOUNDS HORRIBLE.......
Lol I keed. Daaang dude, or girl, you iz gifted!! :O I love this
flyingcookie101 1 year ago
@flyingcookie101 Many thanks :)
rossyxan 1 year ago
It actually does fit as music for a videogame, as mentioned. Sounds great! Only thing I didn't like was the modulation.
BlisteringDDj 2 years ago
*The last modulation that is
BlisteringDDj 2 years ago
@BlisteringDDj originally I went back to minor ... thought it'd work
rossyxan 2 years ago
fantastic compostition. how long did this take you?
DoctorTomm 2 years ago
A couple of days at most.
rossyxan 2 years ago
Wow! That was really quite fantastic! :D You should really consider ReaperMark7's suggestion, it's the perfect song for a part in a video game where your on a ship or something. ^.^
boredomavenger 2 years ago
It's pretty good but it seems that u wanted something more dramatical lol
DiegoMa13 2 years ago
Ah, I really like it. I kind of underestimated it at the title.
MyFlamsAreLethal 2 years ago
Nah, I'm not good enough :P Game wasn't my objective lol who listens to that music anyways?
rossyxan 2 years ago
a lot of people! :O
piggemz 2 years ago
Awesome song!! You should consider lending you're music talents to a game company cause you're songs just give off this tranquil vive. ^_^
ReaperMark7 2 years ago 3