5 stars. Hey, finally you used a more subtle strumming style. Now add some small note fills and you will be making great progress. Nice vocals and lyrics.
not trying to be a prick cause your music kicks ass man but sit up and keep the guitar straight cause you keep hitting the wood with the pick... just some advice.
he can't help but hit the wood while he plays. thats why most guitars have pick guards (his don't)just below the strings to save from having to refinish it one day.anyone who plays will tell you its hard keep still when your feelin it.just to let you know
I was trying think who sings this song, I just realised it is your own work. It is really good, you have a talent man. Have you written many of your own songs?
if you ever make a CD... let me know... i like youre musik!...
DoHgrast 3 years ago
5 stars. Hey, finally you used a more subtle strumming style. Now add some small note fills and you will be making great progress. Nice vocals and lyrics.
capoman1 3 years ago
dude can i have some chords to this i lve this song...
vhptv 4 years ago
Starring right at me, it's kinda creepin me out.
sixxers 4 years ago
haha... ok... :)
GetJeffFryed 4 years ago
but its really good all of them are keep at it
sixxers 4 years ago
dude this is great, you can write as well, you are a real talent.
emmauelfan 4 years ago
not trying to be a prick cause your music kicks ass man but sit up and keep the guitar straight cause you keep hitting the wood with the pick... just some advice.
vhptv 4 years ago
he can't help but hit the wood while he plays. thats why most guitars have pick guards (his don't)just below the strings to save from having to refinish it one day.anyone who plays will tell you its hard keep still when your feelin it.just to let you know
ChristianSongWriter 4 years ago
I was trying think who sings this song, I just realised it is your own work. It is really good, you have a talent man. Have you written many of your own songs?
gisago 5 years ago
I have written many songs... I have a 4 or 5 of my own on here now... and I hope to do more of them on here... They will come soon...
GetJeffFryed 5 years ago
God knows I don't try to hard
But if I tried, who knows, How Far
Be my lady, be my love, be my stars up above,
I don't know anything, i'm just a guy who happens to sing with my lips, my smile.
GetJeffFryed 5 years ago
I don't know what to say but it gets stronger more each day, I don't know what to do about this cause I just want to kiss your lips, your smile
I've been up and i've been down, tried to turn this thing around, oh I wish you could see that all I want and all I need is your lips, your smile
GetJeffFryed 5 years ago