You Don't See Me - Merlin/Arthur

[yellowvalley]

@aureusyarara:  Thanks so much! That is exactly the kind of concrit I was looking for.

[aureusyarara]

I ran out of space for the most important part:

Despite the editing, the scenes you chose are BLOODY AMAZING, and the TIMING, omg THE TIMING is MADE OF PERFECT.

In fact, look up 'timing' in the dicitorary and you'll find a glossy of this vid. NO LIES.

Also. the song choice? PERFECT. NO COMPLAINTS.

[aureusyarara]

I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say that you have made more vids than this one.

But if you're still looking for concrit -- here:

1) there are blackouts, and they are uneven. Some scenes are separated by black screens, some are not. Either use no blackouts or use them to separate every scene.

2) the coloring? why are some b&w and others in colour when the vid is telling a linear story (read: no flashbacks)? People tend to associate b&w or sepia footage with flashbacks or dreams

[kissmrule]

i so love this videoit socute and sweet

[funnayppl]

this is your FIRST?! omg soooo amazing... my first one was crap compared to this, actually all of mine are! haha love it =]

[Xenosagagirl3]

Wow!!!! This is really great especially for your first vid!!!! I love Merlin/Arthur pairing!!!! I was wondering where did you get the Merlin Series clip scenes from? I want to make a Merlin/Arthur vid but I can't find the clips for it. If you can give me any information on how to get a hold of these clips I would be very very grateful!!!! Again great job on this!!!!! YAY for a first vid. I hope to see more Merlin/Arthur vids by you in the future!!!! :D Thumbs up!!!! :D

[HPgeek2]

That was so well done. Please make more videos! I can't wait to see more.

[sailorsilverrose]

This makes me want to cry in a good way. through out the entire song I was trying to remember where I heard it lol I would have never guessed Josie and The Pussycats

[Origami1able]

first fan vid? seriously fantastic man! went with the song completely unlike so many other fanvids...

[shirokaga]

Aww...I feel sorry for Merlin:/ Lovely video<3

[magi134ema]

when is 2:06 -2:07 or whatever from?

[magi134ema]

if all your vids are this good.. you should continue.. subscribing and waiting for more

[ArmedWithAComputer]

This made me sad...

[Roxanneactress]

This is so beautiful. It's like a fanfiction put to music! Please make another one where Arthur DOES see him eventually.

[roxan368]

Colin, i love your irish accent, it is soo sexy

[botanicagardener]

Been trying to find the music without success.Even Amazon don't stock it as asingle. Is it on an album?

[botanicagardener]

I really like this. Merlin's angst comes through clearly and your choice of clips goes perfectly with the words. But actually what I like best is how they move in time to the varying speeds of the music in every scene. Very well done indeed. )

[kissmrule]

i so love this video it so cute and sweet

[soph4872]

this is great, can't believe this is your first one! if this is your first, you must have awesome things to follow

soph xxx

[bishounenNUSHI]

luv the vids! luv the song!

perfect^^

[dolcegebana]

i couldnt believe that this is your first video ever.. cause you edited everything so well, so believable... you just create brand new story ...

this video was amazing

thank you and keep it up pleaseee

:)

[catcullan1]

who sings this

[yellowvalley]

It's Rachel Leigh Cook from the movie Josie and The Pussycats.

[cunitia]

Wonderful...thank you! How you cut the vids...just to make us see, how unlucky Merlin is...

[magslhalliday]

I liked it a lot: it's so good to see a vid which doesn't try to keep all the clips in show order or is overly literal in interpretting the song, but goes for a mood. I didn't know the song, and thought it would be 'You Don't See Me' by the Beatles: either way, the song goes well with Arthur's curious blindness to Merlin's magic (in both senses, heh). I'm glad you're planning more.

[yellowvalley]

Thanks so much :D

I hate that clips in order thing as well. :D

[AnalystProductions]

aww poor Merlin!

Love the video, it's amazing for your first vid and the clips all match great. The lyrics are perfect too :) lovely song.

Where did you get your clips? Cause i've got loads of vid ideas but few clips that are poor quality :( did you use torrents? lol

Keeeep it up :D

I'll be waiting :)

izzy x

[yellowvalley]

Thanks!!

I got the clips from a friend. :D

[misshobbity]

Oh poor Merlin! I can't believe this was your first video! I loved the pace of it, and the clips went so beautifully with the song. Loved 1:00 - 1:10. I thought it was brilliant! I hope you make more videos :-)

[yellowvalley]

Thanks so much! I'll definitely be making more, it looks like, considering I already started the next one ;). I appreciate the comment letting me know you liked it!