Hi oli is that you? This isJane yer old teach! (if it is you) I think I recognize an auteur signiture there! its great any way! If it isn't you then well done to whoever you are because it's a good piece. of course short film is anything under 15 minutes and you use your time wisely with some great colour use and performance, nice concept, keep going!
Nice concept and excellent visuals, but I offer one gentle criticism. Shorter usually equals better in short film. One of my friends runs the Reel Shorts Festival in Chicago and when we chose films to include we ran into many that we good, but didn't make the cut because they would have been better if they had been slightly more concise. You seem to have talent though, so full steam ahead!
Hi oli is that you? This isJane yer old teach! (if it is you) I think I recognize an auteur signiture there! its great any way! If it isn't you then well done to whoever you are because it's a good piece. of course short film is anything under 15 minutes and you use your time wisely with some great colour use and performance, nice concept, keep going!
janeydownsouth 2 years ago
Nice concept and excellent visuals, but I offer one gentle criticism. Shorter usually equals better in short film. One of my friends runs the Reel Shorts Festival in Chicago and when we chose films to include we ran into many that we good, but didn't make the cut because they would have been better if they had been slightly more concise. You seem to have talent though, so full steam ahead!
Nejij 3 years ago
Very interesting movie. the only thing that bugged me is whats happening in it lol
geaneyk 4 years ago