The melody is decent, but it needs more variation. and the harmonies need work. Also, the beat sounds odd to me. It's catchy, yet it sounds off beat. All in all it's a good effort, but it could use some work. Definitely worth a 4/5, though. Which is still an A in my book.
The melody is decent, but it needs more variation. and the harmonies need work. Also, the beat sounds odd to me. It's catchy, yet it sounds off beat. All in all it's a good effort, but it could use some work. Definitely worth a 4/5, though. Which is still an A in my book.
TFinn04 2 years ago
Thanks. I was kinda going for something you might hear durring a loading screen if your taking a flight(or boat) to another place =p
raigntk 2 years ago
The beat is catchy, but you really should put a more catchy melody. :]
xXprincessxPeyaXx 2 years ago
thnx. thats the part i have most trouble with when i make my compositions xD
raigntk 2 years ago
I like it! Well done!
SuddenStryke 2 years ago