DT - Thou Shall Not Fall

[ukhiphopfan]

yer like that lad thought wen i saw someone had jumped on this it wudntbe decent but yer like it impressed me there

[CHEEZEBURNATHADON85]

you should make your own beats dawg, I will sell you some, I could see you comin up your lyric game needs a tad bit of improvement

[hazzie202]

yo my nigga u good u got some shit but u need to step the performance up the personality the swag up

[WilliamGullett]

can use a little work but not bad

[lanvandam1]

not bad bro keep it up

[JoKeRlReKoJ]

im so ahead of my time i aint even born yet haha iight i see you homie. shit aint bad, matter a fact its good, stay up homie...

[shahtrice]

this is kinda hot, keept it up.

[jayh0va82]

You should try rhymin over the intstrumental produced by cookin soul. They sampled the same song but they sampled it differently and their track hits harder but then again this version is better if you tryin to spit somethin personal and from the heart.

[diggydocman]

flow does good with the inst. good job 5/5

[lanqiu13]

I'm feeling this man keep it up

[Wickedsyn8]

yea its a hot track n the beat seperates it from the others

[quickoats3]

flow and delivery sounds good for the most part, but i think the bass is too level too high...it drowns out your voice. Vocals should be adjusted to match the beat. Nice work though.

[CheezyDoDo973]

this is nice

you got potential

[monkey11107]

this gud shit my nigga liken your flow n with the beat homie bringin me in foreal keep workin on yo shit seem like someone wanna do a kollab with like the lyrics foreal