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  • i love u for this!

  • thank you really helped!

  • @Aboodx96 I'm happy to hear you found this useful. Thanks for letting me know.

  • @Aboodx96 I really enjoyed your videos on How to write a paragraph and wriitng an essay. It was very detailed and easy to follow. I thought the song was a great idea to help a student remember the parts. Do you have a video on writing book reports? I homeschool my son and we are reviewing these topics now. Thank you again

  • @bubie1369 Sorry, I have nothing on book reports, but that would be a good idea.

  • Thank you for your explenation on how to write an essay! :-) I have to hand in an essay by tomorrow, this helped me alot! I have one question; can you write an essay in more than five paragraphs, or is that wrong?

    I'm not used to write essay, so it does not appear natural to me at all!

  • @KristinFav You can absolutely have more than 5 paragraphs for an essay if you are covering more topics. Just be sure your initial paragraph introduces the areas you will cover.

  • This is fantastic. The jingles, while a bit dodgy, make the ponts stick. Thank you very much.

  • LOL Amazing simple simple simple Great Video :D

  • thanks for the help, I had no idea that the introductory paragraph was such a key element in an essay

  • Thank you very much for explain how to write an essay. It really helped me.

  • Thank you very much for explain how to write an essay. It is really helped me.

  • Thank you so much, that's very nice from you to do all this!!

  • @katiatanakarojas

    You're very welcome.

  • and I am going to check out effective paragraph writing. thx. It really makes sense in such laymen terms. Its like.. the dummy version of how to write and essay. pretty much fool proof. do you edit and give feedback?? lol

  • I want to let you know that watching this helped me figure out how to write an essay. I have been thinking about it all day and am really interested in learning how to write effectively. The song.. no offense.. didn't help, but your explanation, voice and break down did. have a nice day. :)

  • made me help alot ...

  • thank u for your effords to explain how to write an Essay.

  • @ISTLGWNF You're welcome. I hope it helps.

  • ...this is retarded

  • WOW! Loving everything you guys have put up on here! Thanks for sharing!

  • Thank you for this! I teach a GED class and my students are having some problems with the essay. Your lesson will help them greatly! Thank you!

    Beth

  • @bethabout You're welcome. I'm glad to hear it. I hope it does the trick.

  • People look at my essay and whisper to there buddy "WoW! This is amazing!!" Thank again! I remember everything you taught me ;)

  • @socheata8 The best thing about teaching is helping students realize their own talent and abilities. I'm so glad you've found yours. Keep up the good work.

  • Thank you sooo much!!!!! You're the best teacher ever!!!! It was sooo helpful!! I got at A+ ;D

  • @socheata8  Congratulations on the A+. Great job!!!

  • I followed this tutorial and I failed my test because my teacher complained that I coloured all my sentences red, blue, purple etc. Thanks! :P (just kidding!!)

  • @jigmesam lol

  • thanks i understand !!

  • do you know how to write a book or booklet / monograph???? Thank You!!

  • @888Kharami In writing a non-fiction book, it may be helpful to think of each chapter as an essay.

  • @Grancie48 Thank You, that is very, very helpful = ) Will let you know how it goes!

  • @Grancie48 Thank You! In writing a chapter/essay...how do I make the 1st paraG the leader for the body since the body will be say 10 pages. Do I simply paraphare the whole chapter in one paraG, then use one point for each paraG in the body, and support the idea with the following sentences, finally summarize in last paraG of chpt? Is it really possible to summarize each and every paraG like the prase "I scream, you scream for ice cream"? A video on this would be even more amazing! Thank You

  • @888Kharami

    If the essay is going to be particularly long, it might be helpful to begin the essay with a paragraph that introduces the reader to each "section" of the essay, then have another opening paragraph at the beginning of each section that outlines the points you will be making within that section. Then write a paragraph about each point. I don't know if I've explained this clearly enough. I hope so.

  • @Grancie48 Thank You! In writing a chapter/essay...how do I make the 1st paraG the leader for the body since the body will be say 10 pages. Do I simply paraphrase the whole chapter in one paraG, then use one point for each paraG in the body, and support the idea with the following sentences, finally summarize last paraG of chpt? Also is it really possible to summarize each and every paraG like the prase "I scream, you scream for ice cream"? A video on this would be Even More Amazing! Thank You

  • would this kind of essay work with a G.E.D essay? cuz my teacher is teaching it a little different.

  • @thekingofoakland Without knowing what you've been taught nor the criteria for grading the GED essay, I can't address your concern specifically.

    However, the two most important things about an essay are the quality of your thoughts and your ability to organize them in a clear and logical way. If you can do this, I'm sure you'll do great on your GED exam.

  • OMG!! Now I know how to write in Paragraphs and Essays. God Bless You. xx

  • luv it!

  • Great info

  • That is AMAZING!! This was one of the best videos I have ever seen on youtube. Great learning techniques and very simple to observe. Well done. And keep it up.

  • @the20mb 

  • @the20mb Thank you so much.

  • This was very helpful! I could not clearly understand any of the other videos I watched or any of the articles I read but this was very easy to understand!

    I have a test tomorrow and I was going to spend all weekend practicing but I went out with friends and then I started playing starcraft 2...

  • wow this is too easy

  • This is song is very nice and it sounds great. But most of all, I learned a lot of writing an essay from watching this video. I really like this video. :)

  • @mathadvantage100 I'm happy to hear that it was useful.

  • I love this video lesson-and-paragraph song

    because it helps me improve my paragraph

    structures. This video clip is cool!

  • Thank You.

  • I learned alot from watching this introduction 3 detail and a summary i take my writing test on wednesday wish me the best of luck. I love the song it's suck in my head

  • @miamitrice92 How did the writing test go?  Did you feel more confident about tackling the essay?

  • I'm having my PSLE(Primary School Leaving Examniation) in 1 month's time and I hope I pass! (I've been failing all the while as I did not know how to write a proper structured essay.) Thank you very much for your vid ^.^. (fravourite this video if you like it NOW!!!)

  • @CloudEX52 Good luck on the exam. I'm so pleased you found this lesson useful.

  • I'm having my PSLE(Primary School Leaving Examniation) in 1 month's time and I hope I pass! (I've been failing all the while as I did not know how to write a proper structured essay.) Thank you very much for your vid ^.^. (fravourite this video if you like it NOW!!!)

  • i'm having a WPE essay test this SAT and i hope i'll pass! thx for ur vdo^^

  • @bigshiz27 Good luck to you.

  • @Grancie48 thank you teacher!

  • WOW!!!!

    i can understand so much better than what i learned from in school.

  • @chunhoochun I'm glad it helped. Thanks for letting me know.

  • Thank you for the great example of an essay

  • @JCAOSUNA You're welcome.

  • It never occurred to me until today that I really had absolutely no idea how to write a structured essay. This video was very clear, and I'm pretty sure I understand it. Hopefully with some practice, I'll pass my GED essay without much trouble! Thank you :)

  • @acritochromacy Good luck on your essay writing and congratulations for going back for your GED. You'll never regret it.

  • You make it sound more easier than my teacher does.

  • @Prim3MavericK It's all about deciding what you want to say and laying it out in an organized manner. Webs and outlines are helpful pre-writing strategies.

  • thanks for the vid, seem easier. Have a essay due today, dame essay lol

  • @KinLichiinii03

    Let me know how you did on your essay.

  • Excellent! It clearly and effectively delivers the methodology of essay writing. I learnt a lot.

  • It's always nice to get positive feedback. Thanks for commenting.

  • Thanks alot!

  • You're welcome.

  • Excellent! Clear and Concise!

  • Thank you.

  • Thanks. This will help me a lot for my semester test tomorrow!

  • Glad to hear it. Good luck on your test.

  • delightful...thanks

  • great video

  • Thank you.

  • great way to explain it to the kids :) nice

  • Thanks. I hope they find it useful.

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