An Awesome Wolf Animation!!

[preciwolfy]

This is ur best animation? Ur best drawings 2? Dude this is cruddy! I mean seriously. Check out some other animations like by idk golden phoenix or someone

[gnavas2000]

Stupid u need drawing lessons

[catcrazy999]

Awwwww sad story... :( but it was still immense

[toxicangelgirlz]

This is so awesome!u know, besides the end.... BUT REALLY AWESUM!

[jessicaramirez213447]

hehehehe was this made im paint???? and it sure was awesome... hehehe im just kidding im sure the new one you are doing is MUCH better than this one, im looking forward to it SO DONT STOP WORKING!!! lol i have high hopes for you

[StarPaw0910]

MOVIE SAD! 

[cloudlestorm]

ShingClaw is a jerk. His brother was ready to forgive.

[InvaderZerena]

I guess it's okay. I wouldn't say 'Awesome' but it was okay. The storyline is sad though. >_<

[rainbowcupcakeish]

aww theres too much death : /

[daynasorcutemoxy1]

NOT being mean

but personally i dont exactly think its awesome

i think itss the oppisite sorry

[lollyasaurus]

omg that is not awsome that is retarted OMG i would make a beter animation beter than you :) LOL

[powerwolf901]

AWESOME

[ford382005]

this is sooooooo sad=(

[XxbrookiecutterxX]

this was HORRIBLE!!!! nice story but HORRIBlE art

[majathearcticwolf]

I like it and all but its SO sad *Wines*

[Chessycat100]

Dude, do you mind if I remake this? It's so awesome!

[RayAnn213]

@Chessycat100 Sorry, but it's ok. No remakes are nessessary. I'm remaking it as we speak, I have much better drawing skills than I did lol:D

[Chessycat100]

@RayAnn213 Oh, I wasn't going to remake it because it's old or anything, just because I wanted to try it out, but thats okay! :D

[firasource]

lmao i love the sudden music change

[Krohnam]

1:20 Them look like horses. Lol ?

(Sorry for the orthograph, I'm french...)

[WarriorCatTigerLuver]

waaait a seccconndd how do wolves know what toothpicks are?

[scouthouseluv]

can i make one like this? i will give u credit for sure. work like this deserves credit. this should b one of those little shows that r in the commercials

[kittykatgirly1]

No offence is that a llama or a wolf? O.O" Other then that good job! :D

[LafaWolf]

i cant do anything better than this!

[JesusFreak3231]

shining claws an ass his brother was trying to protect him

[scouthouseluv]

is there a 2nd one?

[SWEETCAKESforME]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I <3 THE STORYLINE!!!!! IT TOTALLY (for some reason) REMINDS ME OF WARRIORS!!!! (u know... w/ the cats...) :D

[wolfpupinapack]

your a horse drawer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!

[TheSizzler777]

This is very good!Exept the part where thew Lucas and Shinningclaw where doing there faces like at 1:00 I got scared!xD

[dogs4ever129]

I understand that this is old, but what bothers me is that Shining Claw tortured his brother. If he was a good hearted character, he would send his brother off and tell him to never come back to the territory again without harming him, rather than torture his own brother

[str7rider7]

I wouldn't call it awesome.. But I appreciate the work and time people put in these animations.. So no hard feelings :)

[ToxicBloodScourge]

I actually loved this.. It may be old but the storyline is great, Also the animation isnt half bad. <3 Made me sad at the end. D:

[Chessycat100]

Well, I gotta say, the storyline is pretty good, and please don't hate me for saying this because I know you've been telling jerks who say this is awful that is was made a while back, but it could have been put together a little better. *Covers head* Now don't hate meee!

[RayAnn213]

@Chessycat100 Oh no, it's fine, I do appreciate critisism, it's just I don't like it when people say "it sucked." Well it was made a long time ago people! lol(:

[lpsstories]

this is so sad

[wwolf656]

its pretty good i like to stroy but the drawing arnt as good but better than my first drawing :d

[RayAnn213]

@wwolf656 Well I have gotten VERY MUCH better. lol(:

[wwolf656]

@RayAnn213 glad to hear that :P

[MysteriousWhiteWolf1]

@RayAnn213 what font did you used???

[lovinwolves]

well...you can try animation instad of paint-pencil is free and the all-awsome doink.com is free!

[MarineEverGreen]

@lovinwolves I hate doink! it ruins my animations! especially with THEIR animations at the end! I use gimp, wishing for someone to get me photoshop for either my birthday or x-mas!

[TessyTheWolf]

@lovinwolves If you want my opinion, doink is crap. Paint is much better.

[skydogwhoowhoo]

epic.

[crazy4horses12]

i thought your more of a breyer fan than wolfs

[VeteranFlippy]

i love it

[WaffleshasaPineapple]

the epic nose wrinkles begin at 1:08

[mhiatt23]

@FearTheSpirit like a chihuahua lolz

[bigBoltfan1]

At the end, did Shining Claw choke or did Kye choke?

[bigBoltfan1]

Not the best, but cool. Lol. Come back here you coward!

[SpirixTV]

the picture at 1:11 is awesome!

[Mistsinger2]

I dunno if you'll say yes or even respond but is it alright if i can re-animate this? I love the story and the wolf charachters. If you dont let me it's alright

[RayAnn213]

Ahum. Excuse me, but this was made a LOOOONNNGGG TIME AGO! So really, I don't care for critique, but no insults. Thank you.

-RayAnn213

[icedogbreyer21]

Awesomeness I'm writing a story called icedogs and I can draw wolves fairly well but I don't know how to do animations... This vid awesome!!!!!!!!!

[TheDemonWolfeh]

OMG!!! This is such a great story line! <3 and so well animated!!! well done its epicness!!!

[MoMeowProductions]

I don't really like the story.

[peaceluvtaco]

That was a sad story It was great though!!

[WarriorXWolf]

just a little more animating and you'll be great! good job!

[Wolfie9149]

isnt it was easy like braking toothpicks from the incredables

[kleinama9870]

i can't say this is awesome, but it isn't terrible either. just keep working on getting the anatomy right

[RipJawTheWolf]

Awesome 4half/5

[MishalMooreLover]

Plz make another one :DDDDDD

[Gazuntiteable]

That's good. :3

Great story. Did you happen to use paint and windows movie maker?

[BlackEagleGurl]

maybe i could help u animate?

[25BlueRose25]

lol ya its head was too big for its body

[LovelessHeartOfPain]

.....its ok keep working ^~^ good story idea

[Nimawolf14]

I do animations about wolves and it really helps if you just only DRAW wolves for, like a month, and then go back to animating. ElaineDona is right about the anatomy, it does help, I'd practice different moves. Then when you go back ... it will look awesome XD

[Whitewolfspaw]

is this a series?

[MidnightMoonWolves]

wow...that was....violent...

[ElaineDona]

The storyline was good, but you might want to work on your drawings a little bit. Try looking at wolf/dog anatomy, it actually really helps. :)

[warriorsimpson]

when he said "wanna know why they call me shinginclaw!?" it reminded me of GNG when Gin said "wanna know why they call me Gin the shooting star!"

[RayAnn213]

LOLZ :D

[cutePBgirl]

... but sad...

[cutePBgirl]

OMG THIS IS AWESOME

[RayAnn213]

No, it isn't but it does sound like it eh? :D

[ThePeanutShark]

ms paint is not at all a good program for animation. use flash

[WolfWolfLover1]

AWSOME!! Sad story though..but AWSOME!!

[SiaraMoon14]

The drawings were ok, but i loved the storyline! Well done :)

[simpsons12323]

that was good

[daynaelynch]

good but needs faster and better drawings

[Fribb13]

it was good, practice make perfect. work on the proportion and it would be briliant

[kimicansyn]

i got ripped off....

[Mutaclone]

Good spelling, good story, anatomy and animation needs a LOT of work.

[RayAnn213]

LOLZ Yes I know! :)

[FrostwolfDragon]

Pretty good!

[SuperShaz100]

lol it was good but sad very sad

[DragonGirlz55]

great story line. it wuz sort of funny in a messed up weird way and sad. da animation could use work :) nice job

[RayAnn213]

Yes i know :) Thanks for your critque

[wolfwarriors56]

Very nice storyline there :) And I like your simple animating ^^

[RayAnn213]

Thank you! :)I'm trying to make more advanced animating :)

[wolfwarriors56]

the trick is to take your time ^^ Hope to see more~

[Zeximl]

That was a great story, and very sad. You should work on the running cycles and some wolf antonamy. Wolf antonamy helps VERY much and makes it very easy to make awesome poses.

[wolfshaddow1]

cool

[xhellzarmyx]

that is SAD

[OokamiKokutan]

your story and animation is good but you need to add emotion and expression to your characters

example when the the little wolf confesses to his brother show him guilt on id face or great sadness tears only scratches the surface.

[WolfCrazyGirl42]

you're running cycles need more work!

It was an awsome story though!!

the only bit I didn't like was that ShiningClaw tortured his brother at the end! I don't think that was right!

Ookami Tala xx

[Shenkka]

This needs a LOT more frames XDD

And need to learn more about a wolf's anatomy.

It's a great storyline, though.

[RayAnn213]

I know! LOLZ I'm trying to learn :) It was my second so I have improved from my first animation! :)

[AFIredwolf88]

awesome but...  sad

[soraxroxasxgoofyxrik]

Not bad great work 5/5

[rexwolf449]

Interesting concept. I think you should scan your picture and color them on paint, then animate it... I don't animate my things yet, but you can see my pictures on "drawn stuff" It should be the first one... hope you like it

[SilverWolfKitteh]

I liked the idea of the story, but im sorry the animation was really bad. No offence!! I liked the story!

[SuperEma007]

cool :D

[luvShad4eva]

sad but I wouldnt say awsome the music is cool though!

[Tianathewolf]

my animation is so sad it made me cry! its called Wolf and Dog animation soldiers side. I like yours though you should make a sequal

[WoolyWack]

uhhh i wouldnt say awesome but cool

[spiritmyluv]

how do you aniemate!! what sestum thing do u use!

[HowlingDoomBlazer]

wow!

[Eeveefet]

i love the blood yay

[midnightvampires365]

check out mine i'm all most done. about to brothers........ waaaaaaaaaaaa sad

[MulinaTheAngelWolf]

Awesome but sad

[1poisonIVY]

awsome

[Wolvesauroura]

SAD!!!!! awesome vid though....*crys*

[HybridHowl]

It's.... v.v It's... IT'S SO SAAAAAAHAHAAAAD *bursts into tears*

[catiebirdy]

EPIC!

But so sad.

[Wolfkid27]

The best of friends can become the greatest of enemies from a single incident that breaks and darkens hearts....

[RayAnn213]

Very well said :)

[Wolfkid27]

I love the way you drew the eyes

[RayAnn213]

^-^ Thanks!

[these1are1new1shoes]

this is...well, i like your color choice and the fact that the story made sense...kinda it was cool!

[gottajump3]

aWESOMEEEE!!!!!!

[RayAnn213]

THANKS!! :D

[Firebrand81]

I love this!!! 5 STARS!!!!

[spidereine]

wow you;re good!

[horsefever10]

OMG GREAT JOB!!!! 5/5 STARS!

[Breyerlover3948]

Make moreee!! You're so good at it!

ps. srry i havent been on in a while

[BuckyB00]

u rock and this was awsome!!!

[MistyxStormy4life]

YOu hAvE tO mAkE mOrE!!

[RayAnn213]

I WiLL! lOL

[MistyxStormy4life]

DO IT NOW!

[thowralove]

This is awesome! More!

[PalominoGirl979]

OHH!!! but...on 2:04...i didn't get it...because i thought that SHINNING CLAW was the BLACK wolf, and that kye was the brown one being held down by Lucas

[RayAnn213]

You got it! LoL That's right I just made him "black" Because it was nighttime.

[RearingArabian]

this is great you rock

[RayAnn213]

Thanks!! A bunch~

[HappyGalinTheLight]

So sad but awesome at the same =( =)

[RayAnn213]

Thanks!!! =) =(

[PalominoGirl979]

great...but it's sorta confusing...

could you explain it to me???

i didn't quite get it....there were so many parts...

[PalominoGirl979]

AWESOME!! more more!

[RayAnn213]

LOL I will!

[MistyxStormy4life]

I like it!

[RayAnn213]

Me too!

[dressagebreyer9934]

ITs good but verydepressing! =]