Let down by poor sound. Guys, always ALWAYS use an external microphone on a boom pole. Even a cheap shotgun microphone off ebay will do wonders. Get it as close to your subject as you can without it being in shot. Gaffer-tape it to a broom handle if necessary (I assume you guys are running at a low budget?!).
The editing can do with tightening, and the footage would have benefited from more close-ups of the characters.
Just want to express my gratitude to everyone who downloaded to watched the film thus far, appreciate all the positive feedback and comments and to thankyou for your current and future support - Vij
DenzelA, how can you post a message 1 day saying "Awesome Film....not bad for Amateur's", then the next day claim to be Vij, you are not Vij. I dont know what you are trying to do, thank you for your original comment though.
hey vij, its norah...pretty good short film...just one comment though...the sound quality...it was a bit difficult to hear...but all in all thumbs up!
Hi Norah, thanks for your comment. Yes, the sound isnt all the good, due to the fact that, we werent really sure what we were doing, as it was our first film, so we used the mic on the camera itself.
this is wicked, check some of the short films i've made on my profile
keep up the good work
jaypresto666 3 years ago
Not a bad first effort.
Let down by poor sound. Guys, always ALWAYS use an external microphone on a boom pole. Even a cheap shotgun microphone off ebay will do wonders. Get it as close to your subject as you can without it being in shot. Gaffer-tape it to a broom handle if necessary (I assume you guys are running at a low budget?!).
The editing can do with tightening, and the footage would have benefited from more close-ups of the characters.
That's my two cents worth!
Keep going!
Ian
EonPeon 5 years ago
"Hello gorgoeus"
bkschwit 5 years ago
Just want to express my gratitude to everyone who downloaded to watched the film thus far, appreciate all the positive feedback and comments and to thankyou for your current and future support - Vij
DenzelA 5 years ago
DenzelA, how can you post a message 1 day saying "Awesome Film....not bad for Amateur's", then the next day claim to be Vij, you are not Vij. I dont know what you are trying to do, thank you for your original comment though.
mabdul123 5 years ago
Awesome Film....not bad for Amateur's
DenzelA 5 years ago
hey vij, its norah...pretty good short film...just one comment though...the sound quality...it was a bit difficult to hear...but all in all thumbs up!
Norahsvideos 5 years ago
Hi Norah, thanks for your comment. Yes, the sound isnt all the good, due to the fact that, we werent really sure what we were doing, as it was our first film, so we used the mic on the camera itself.
mabdul123 5 years ago