Wrote this last night. The march of souls following their own individual beats in all direction seen they flow, and bump, and glow, creating a wonderful cacophony. But when you shut your ears and listen only with your heart harmony appears from the pulsating dark.
Another brilliant video...is that the only kind you can do? lol
The Celts have a good way of describing the afterlife...they say that after we die, we exist just on the other side of the air. Always did like the thought of that...
A most foreboding poem indeed, only those that have kissed the doors of death may be so bold, a vague contemplation at best, by those that fear their own mortality only too late...By those that view their lives as nothing more than a dusty book that will be read by those that would rationalize the few that may impart that lurid recognition...UR life begain before UR birth...Revel in it now, for it will be gone soon, with no 1 to answer too but yourself.
As I nod off in my relentless motion toward the unsustainable while doubting the mythologies of the ages, I look outward through the visions brought back by eyed mechanical beings created in the likeness of their creators. Giant catastrophies in galactic dust, forces beyond comprehension with awe-inspiring visage and beauty. Yet, above the infinitesmal there is a consistent and dependable structure more reliable than mankind.
Perhaps this speaks more eloquently of an organizing force than do continually warring humans who honor competition as they claim descendence from the one and only "real" God. Dreams of rapture and fear of the ever-burning fire, hoping it will torture their self-made enemies. Torture as an eternal principle? How low can mankind bring the universe in it's own image?
There are only two expressions possible in the impending - glorious expansion beyond religious comprehension, or nothingness.
Great piece. Something I think we can all relate with, at least I can. The music set a mood I have felt when thinking on these things. A cliche seems absurd in response to deep art but I will say it as a form of shorthand as I get back to my lessons, "Now is the present". Your creativity matters and will resound.
Hello Deb. What we create in life, if given the opportunity, will outlive us. So much of what we have comes from that exact source. People created, and as all do... they died. The more we create, the more we add to that depository of things for people to explore... potentially even after we die.
Good contemplation, the inescapable my friend, just live your life, at least that we have in our hands to certain extent,what lies beyond, nobody ever came back to tell me, yeah maybe our "Time-machine" that we so often spoke off will give the answer,LOL,greets Vic.
Hi FlopperBuddy. This video seems to be too ''heavy'' for VloggerHeads. I thought it was just a contemplation, though with spooky music to set a certain tone. I figure since no one, but you, Commented on it on VloggerHeads, that either some brooding contemplation is either not welcome in a more frivolous setting, or people think maybe I'm actually dying and they couldn't care less.
This was excellent, Scott! I love the still image of the pensive Dr. Bodine at the end. Hope to see you on the 'other side' someday, but not too soon, my friend...
This is true. But consider that virtually every cell that was in "your body" at "your birth" has since died and been replaced. One could say that "you" have already died many times over.
Hello Javier. Luckily, we function as an organism not dependent on the life of just a single cell... except at conception, that is... when we are a single cell for a short period of time.
Hello Michael. I think though our cells are always dying, the fact that in our youth we are increasing in size shows that our living elements far surpass the dying elements for that portion of our lives, then we balance off and finally the dying part of us takes over.
Oh, I also meant to ask, was that your music in the background? You've done some really good "serious" music on YouTube already, so I wouldn't be surprised.
Diesel: This would fit into the contest fine - just attach it to Rowan's vid... they just want poems that deal with either religion and/or censorship in either a funny or serious way; look at some of the others people have posted... this is fine... also, you can enter as many times as you want so if you have old video spoken word that deals with religion you can post those to.... go for it!
Loves imbues the soul everywhere
with the same energy
and however it is expressed
all together, those bright liquid sparks,
that ripple and glow in the dark
become a vast growing sea
through space, and by the end of time
shall fill the Universe with Light.
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BigPrairieDude 3 years ago
God appreciates Silence, No Drummers, a Bigger Beard, No Organs and No You. Such and idea of Suchness! She's got to be kidding!!!
Alexknobsob 3 years ago
are you by any chance into theoretical physics?
sliprydick 3 years ago
Deep and foreboding.
Rhonda9 3 years ago
Another brilliant video...is that the only kind you can do? lol
The Celts have a good way of describing the afterlife...they say that after we die, we exist just on the other side of the air. Always did like the thought of that...
suuzzee5 3 years ago
A most foreboding poem indeed, only those that have kissed the doors of death may be so bold, a vague contemplation at best, by those that fear their own mortality only too late...By those that view their lives as nothing more than a dusty book that will be read by those that would rationalize the few that may impart that lurid recognition...UR life begain before UR birth...Revel in it now, for it will be gone soon, with no 1 to answer too but yourself.
dubiousgansta 3 years ago
Gadzooks, Bro D.! I only regret that I have but one life to give... for my wazoo. Hmmm. Almost 3 AM. No wonder I'm talking like a nincompoop!
DieselBodine 3 years ago
That's so sweet.
useryug 3 years ago
Hello Sir Barry. Sweet? LOL!
DieselBodine 3 years ago
As I nod off in my relentless motion toward the unsustainable while doubting the mythologies of the ages, I look outward through the visions brought back by eyed mechanical beings created in the likeness of their creators. Giant catastrophies in galactic dust, forces beyond comprehension with awe-inspiring visage and beauty. Yet, above the infinitesmal there is a consistent and dependable structure more reliable than mankind.
desertlight 3 years ago
Perhaps this speaks more eloquently of an organizing force than do continually warring humans who honor competition as they claim descendence from the one and only "real" God. Dreams of rapture and fear of the ever-burning fire, hoping it will torture their self-made enemies. Torture as an eternal principle? How low can mankind bring the universe in it's own image?
There are only two expressions possible in the impending - glorious expansion beyond religious comprehension, or nothingness.
desertlight 3 years ago
Holy smokes, Laurence! Your mind has been functioning in ultra-drive velocity!
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Thank-you, Coz-Girl. 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Great piece. Something I think we can all relate with, at least I can. The music set a mood I have felt when thinking on these things. A cliche seems absurd in response to deep art but I will say it as a form of shorthand as I get back to my lessons, "Now is the present". Your creativity matters and will resound.
debswildhoney 3 years ago
Hello Deb. What we create in life, if given the opportunity, will outlive us. So much of what we have comes from that exact source. People created, and as all do... they died. The more we create, the more we add to that depository of things for people to explore... potentially even after we die.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Good contemplation, the inescapable my friend, just live your life, at least that we have in our hands to certain extent,what lies beyond, nobody ever came back to tell me, yeah maybe our "Time-machine" that we so often spoke off will give the answer,LOL,greets Vic.
Jazzguts 3 years ago
Hello Vic. Your ''just live your life'' comment is one of the underlying thoughts behind my monologue. ''What will be... will be.''
DieselBodine 3 years ago
i closed my eyes and your spoken words, takes me to another level...;)
elviradark6 3 years ago
Wow, elvira... that's a nice response. 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Art lasts. (wewe)
flophousepoodle 3 years ago
Hi FlopperBuddy. This video seems to be too ''heavy'' for VloggerHeads. I thought it was just a contemplation, though with spooky music to set a certain tone. I figure since no one, but you, Commented on it on VloggerHeads, that either some brooding contemplation is either not welcome in a more frivolous setting, or people think maybe I'm actually dying and they couldn't care less.
LOL & 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
This was excellent, Scott! I love the still image of the pensive Dr. Bodine at the end. Hope to see you on the 'other side' someday, but not too soon, my friend...
SqwishTV 3 years ago
Thanks Brother Jeff. Thoughts for lifelong contemplation.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
WOW Uncle Bodine WoW... ironic i can relate to this so much at this point in my life too ...
For recognition is an activity
in the minds of the living
and the emptiness of Eternity from whence we came
is our reward for unjustified expectations
and hopes... and dreams.
5/5 and favourited .. its soul renching
HUGS Terri xx
HuggableAngel 3 years ago
Hugs, Terri, are always a good thing, even if Eternity fails us.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Another great poem Scott!
CousinoMacul 3 years ago
Thanks, Javier. It was time for something new.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Great poem Scott, and a very atmospheric presentation.
Loreleila 3 years ago
Thanks, Bardess Cathy. 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
A great contemplation; fitting music.
dashpoet 3 years ago
Thank-you, dashpoet. 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Thank you for entering this in the competition and supporting freedom of speech. I love the atmosphere of this poem, really excellent.
RowanFortuneWood 3 years ago
You're welcome, RowanFortuneWood. Glad you liked it. 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Great. Thanks.
"spark falls dim"
"joyful rays of hope"
Those lines are good to me. For why, I cannot say.
HumanTruth0000 3 years ago
Hello, HumanTruth. Thanks for your visit! 8-)
DieselBodine 3 years ago
since birth we all have been in a slow death.
michael
mettanc 3 years ago
This is true. But consider that virtually every cell that was in "your body" at "your birth" has since died and been replaced. One could say that "you" have already died many times over.
CousinoMacul 3 years ago
small deaths indeed.
mettanc 3 years ago
Hello Javier. Luckily, we function as an organism not dependent on the life of just a single cell... except at conception, that is... when we are a single cell for a short period of time.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Hello Michael. I think though our cells are always dying, the fact that in our youth we are increasing in size shows that our living elements far surpass the dying elements for that portion of our lives, then we balance off and finally the dying part of us takes over.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
geez bodine hope yer not quite to the very very last page not yet anyway!
windham666 3 years ago
Hello windham. I hope there's a few more chapters left, too.
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Oh, I also meant to ask, was that your music in the background? You've done some really good "serious" music on YouTube already, so I wouldn't be surprised.
Largo64 3 years ago
Yes, Larry. It's a short piece I wrote called ''Rapport Of The Dead.''
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Fine, if morose work, Scott. But aren't you too young for such "eschatology"?
Largo64 3 years ago
Thanks, Larry. I'm older than you think... perhaps?
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Great stuff Diesel! 5*
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
Thanks, Dave. Is this too ''way out there'' for that contest?
DieselBodine 3 years ago
Diesel: This would fit into the contest fine - just attach it to Rowan's vid... they just want poems that deal with either religion and/or censorship in either a funny or serious way; look at some of the others people have posted... this is fine... also, you can enter as many times as you want so if you have old video spoken word that deals with religion you can post those to.... go for it!
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago