Stay: A Smitchie Story Episode 1 (Read Descr.)

[dacb36]

loved it and can't wait for what happens just hard to hear what the voice was saying

[iTwins1]

Hey, people check out my story me and my twin have made a story with a lot of characters and drama and romanticness and sad parts and a whole bunch of stuff i we would be VERY thankful if ya help us out and we can probably put you in one of our videos.... but check out are "Complicated" Trailer, giving you the some of the characters names. There looks, style, and personalities. PLEASE, look at our channel :)

[onceuponajemistry]

your insane! your a way better writter then me!

wow i jsut read this ch. and im in love!

[fishybloop1]

OMG AMAZING!!! :D

[JonasRox4every1]

I love this!.(:

[AlexJoyceMusic]

Loved it and btw is this the 1st time you used a voice because it seems like this is your 10th

[xbabixg0txbacnex]

it looks good can u juss please put subtittles next time?it was relli kinda to understand thanx:)

[xJONASwifeyx]

Amazing but could use subtitles :)

[jemiorpikislover]

amazing post more:D

[jemi1213]

It was really good but kinda hard to hear with the music maybe you can like not put music in it? but its your story i like it :)

[4everamericangirl22]

who got the part? of mitchie?

[jemiandnelenastorys]

@4everamericangirl22  It's in the intro

[krenke015]

omg! that was amazzzzing!

i loved itt, please post more soon!(:

[loverboyz45]

LOveddddd itttttt

[loverboyz45]

my sound is working either didnt hear anythin but the subtitals

[xxnickixxandixx]

my sound isnt working :(

[jnytam12]

next one plzz

[deniafabulous]

good episode It was kinda hard to hear the voice over for mitchie but It was really good (add subtitiles please next time) But it was good and I enjoyed it alot

[lunaxmoona]

its Awsome you did and vary good Job on this one!!!

[demifan981]

So cool with the voie over ! but there're some things at the end that I didn't understand :)

[JoeJonasismine4ever0]

OMGOMGOMG! Amazing! Please Please post more!

(Lol random but will u follow me on twitter? @Joseph_Demetria)

[brittanyy04]

lol i loved it! next one pleaseee!

[gemmaandbecky]

AMAZING!!

[morg942212]

i likes it :)

[L0V33LY]

ow amazinq cant wait for the next. (:

[JoanneOneAndOnly91]

Awesome!! I sooo cat wait for the next episode!

[XXjonasXOXOstoryXX]

Amazing!

[StoriesChannel]

amazing!!! you need more

[bvolleyball9]

this is really good!!!! post more!

[ElleeMchugh]

wow..loveed it

[EcilaCrown]

i COULD understand everything.. hehe..now im proud of me..cuz english isnt my native lang. =D

i REALLY love it...

and.. im kinda sad that it has such a bad ending... as in she landing in pshyatric hospital... TT_TT

and if shane brought her there... that cant be any good sign... -.-

love it though.. i BEG you.. PLEASE post soon... =)))

♥

[SoRawSUgAr]

I had to watch the second half of it twice cuz the first time I was busy singing to the Shakira song haha, but it rocked

[cherrydao96]

Oh my gosh, it was awesome, you need to post more, like NOW! :)

[MrViktoriaaa123]

love it

[maryxmary1]

i love it!

[Juicespy22]

i agree with @thekrolinsign2 it would be better if there were subtitles.

[Juicespy22]

amazing. loved it.

[JessicaNnatasha2]

awesome this was really good!

[thekrolinsign2]

hey im really intrigue by the story..but i have problems understanding some thing in he "voiceover"...i gte the general idea but still..could u please like subtitle...? please i want to understan everything..thanks!"!!

[jemiandnelenastorys]

@thekrolinsign2 I'll put subtitles on the next one 

[xojemikissesxo14]

awesome loved it

[ConverseBabez]

i loved it! but i hate my voice. /: haha.