Actually not necessarily still, the body acts differently when you receive a good whack to the head, you can either go out cold OR go into seizure where the body can shake violently before falling into deep unconsciousness.
Besides, I never stated he died after whacking him with the pan.
I can't even describe how brilliant I think this was. This is true talent. This should be a featured video by every standard. Stunning visuals and even they "out of place" hillbilly song at the end! I loved this tremendously. Excellent acting from you both!
I already saw this and probably I will repeat myself.. no problem, you deserve compliments. I love your
camera by hand before the murder, the dead's subjective (as if he was alive, anticipating the finale) the thriller of this mysterious guy knocking, and the finale of course.. did she dream? She has a second chance, will she do it again? And underlying humour everywhere!
Very, very well done!! Great attention to detail: like putting his legs over the tub added a kind of strangeness that is seen in films of that genre...always keeps the audience guessing! Solid acting...understated with perfect timing!! BRAVO...5*****
WOW, I didnt see that end coming, that's for sure! At first I was thinking this reminds me of Dolores Claiborne with K Bates...But man guys, you made an amazing piece of work!!! Im busy, so It's hard for me to sit through a 7 minute vid sometimes, but I watched it twice!! This raises the bar for all of us YouTube "filmmakers"
Pop should do a sequel. You nag him about leaving the toilet seat up. leaving towels on the floor and not being a real man because he can't support his family. In the end he takes your hairspray and a cigarette lighter and torches you.
Good Job, I wonder if we'll still be watching each other 20 years from now. Then you guys wouldn't have to wear the grey wigs and all, LOL! Anyway, I enjoyed the short film, thanks for all your work.
Holy crap! I kept thinking, "OK, where's the comedy? This is very disturbing." You are masters of the emotional rollercoaster ride! This is Twilight Zone material at its best.
DL Productions ....betcha can't watch just one.
I've always liked those day dream sequences in movies.
I felt sorry for Tommy though....all he wanted was something to eat .... poor guy :)
ScalerWave 2 years ago
He needs to be more still. Weird twist.
PersephoneWhispers 2 years ago
Actually not necessarily still, the body acts differently when you receive a good whack to the head, you can either go out cold OR go into seizure where the body can shake violently before falling into deep unconsciousness.
Besides, I never stated he died after whacking him with the pan.
DelisaProductions 2 years ago
Touche. He was a jerk, however. I would have son the same.
PersephoneWhispers 2 years ago
Wonderful Video
Look like watching in the movies
It make me feel so scare now
I love it
You both great acting
Bravo
YOU BOTH ROCK
AuntieKeiko 2 years ago
Thank you, Auntie Keiko!
DelisaProductions 2 years ago
Dave does great "dead-pan"! ;P You've blown me away, once again! Beautiful work, my dear!
seaweed2007 2 years ago
Ha, ha ...all in a day's work.
Thanks Toni!
DelisaProductions 2 years ago
this was really great!
tunisianswife 3 years ago
I can't even describe how brilliant I think this was. This is true talent. This should be a featured video by every standard. Stunning visuals and even they "out of place" hillbilly song at the end! I loved this tremendously. Excellent acting from you both!
FatWagar 3 years ago
I already saw this and probably I will repeat myself.. no problem, you deserve compliments. I love your
camera by hand before the murder, the dead's subjective (as if he was alive, anticipating the finale) the thriller of this mysterious guy knocking, and the finale of course.. did she dream? She has a second chance, will she do it again? And underlying humour everywhere!
urbania70 3 years ago
Fantastic!!! You did a wonderful job on this!!! You captured this style of film perfectly.
theDave1956 3 years ago
This is your best one yet...! I love it!!!
Duly sent to my faves list...and I'll be sending it to everyone I know that would appreciate it - including my girlfriend!
TrigFX 3 years ago
Out of the frying pan, into the frying pan. Great work guys. Favorited.
WOMCProductions 3 years ago
you all are great actors put together very well good job
RickyCountryAtHeart 3 years ago
I love this!! Great job pops and lisa!!
childre24 3 years ago
Awesome work! =^)
GContelli 3 years ago
Very, very well done!! Great attention to detail: like putting his legs over the tub added a kind of strangeness that is seen in films of that genre...always keeps the audience guessing! Solid acting...understated with perfect timing!! BRAVO...5*****
HalooftheMuse 3 years ago
back for more
ScenicVideos 3 years ago
wow....thsi was so good david and lisa....this must have taken days of work.
pls. tell me u r movie lovers, coz it shows in your work.
michael
mettanc 3 years ago
Stop By To Watch AGAIN! lol I Love This Video!
Happy New Year Guys!
Dale
stealth5976 3 years ago
Better Luck Next Time Delores!
Loved the twitching Pops...has me rolling on the floor...lol
You are so very talented Lisa...Loved your performance!
5 Stars for the both of ya!
Happy New Year!
Gordieiati 3 years ago
Hey Lisa!
That was AWESOME, Baby!
Nice, sweet video as ALWAYS!
~OrangeCaesar (Jules)
p.s. How would've known that you were SOOO STRONG? LOL. j/k Pops! :)
OrangeCaesar 3 years ago
Very Hitchcock that, I loved it. 5 stars
Panned by the critics though?
Kie77 3 years ago
Hi Kie77! Those critics just slay me! I just hope they use alluminum pans! These cast iron ones can really crush ones ego! LOL! Thanks bud!
T0MMY2GUNS 3 years ago
You just kill me...
WindHarps 3 years ago
lmao!! you guys are great!! thanks for the send Wizardeal ^_^..
elviradark6 3 years ago
That was awesome. Loved the little smirk you had on at the end when reaching for the frying pan. Good job guys.
smokingmonkeyvideos 3 years ago
she really was daydreamin' again.. jease. kill that jerk will ya!? his bitchin' is gettin' on my nerves LMFAO
love the editing, acting, direcing/script, as well as the titles. it was all very kewl! :)
MorbidKittyProd 3 years ago
*****
Clobberbob55 3 years ago
even when you are an ordinary housewife, you are so beautiful lisa
joliroi 3 years ago
deloris and jim hahaha classic names. seems he is the only one day dreaming now. great job guys.. it looks like its a repost. still great tho
RippedShits 3 years ago
OH SNAP! that was awesome!!!!!
2 heads are bettre than 1!
thechico1979 3 years ago
Married to twins? What happens when somebody wants to use the bathroom?
ladybard1968 3 years ago
Loved it! Great acting. :P
canadianstudmuffin 3 years ago
Great!!!! This video is so....strange!!!!
Very good!
albetazza1983 3 years ago
Excellent video - You two are talented .
BUTCHYKID624 3 years ago
Love it! You get 5 stars for just being able to drag Pops out of the room LOL Love the opening music and mosaics. Great job Lisa and Dave!
Steampiper 3 years ago
that was terrifically dark! Everyone needs a good cast iron pan :)
LeSaMilano 3 years ago
Very good! Jim's charm really had his wife stewing! Guess he found out, in the end, what he was getting for dinner! 5 stars
jdstorms 3 years ago
hahaha ! :-D I remember this one, and it's still awesome ;-)
ALEClovesGENIALMUSIC 3 years ago
WOW that was amazing!!! Sadly a bit too close to home, but amazing! Great Job as usual!
Warm Regards
stear1966 3 years ago
Another absolute masterpiece!! You two are nothing short of pure genius!
I've heard that swinging a cast iron skillet gets easier the second time. LOL
anmoose 3 years ago
A little twist there at the end. That was great!
Pººhßear
HereWithYoudotcom 3 years ago
thwack! I guess that means it's ready, lolololol!
justplainerica 3 years ago
BASTURD, BLAMMM!!! Twitches follow...
Now thats epic.
rootbrian 3 years ago
I just faved!
fiwaszewski 3 years ago
WOW, I didnt see that end coming, that's for sure! At first I was thinking this reminds me of Dolores Claiborne with K Bates...But man guys, you made an amazing piece of work!!! Im busy, so It's hard for me to sit through a 7 minute vid sometimes, but I watched it twice!! This raises the bar for all of us YouTube "filmmakers"
Congrats Lisa and POPS on a gr8 short film!!
~GS~GhOsTsEeKeRs and Forrest Iwaszewski
fiwaszewski 3 years ago
This one is AWESOME!!!Happy New Year:))))*****
sistermoonshine13 3 years ago
He had it comin' da rat!
Good punch line!
JimmerSD 3 years ago
Pop should do a sequel. You nag him about leaving the toilet seat up. leaving towels on the floor and not being a real man because he can't support his family. In the end he takes your hairspray and a cigarette lighter and torches you.
Warnomore50 3 years ago
One of my favorites, so classic and love the B&W, excellent from begin to end!
Glad to see it back!Yaaahhh....
marykajohnson 3 years ago
Better pun?
"Pops goes the weasel."
Nice to see this one again.
PuppyZwolle 3 years ago
I hear that if you cut their heads off...they'll never come back! Ha ha ha!
Absolutely one of the best acted and directed shorts on Youtube!!!
There's nothing like a bit of black comedy to get me going for the day!!
Did you get the video off your old PC?
hallbe 3 years ago
Hey Lisa & Pops,
Good Job, I wonder if we'll still be watching each other 20 years from now. Then you guys wouldn't have to wear the grey wigs and all, LOL! Anyway, I enjoyed the short film, thanks for all your work.
James.
LonePrairieCowboy 3 years ago
well done.
raullara 3 years ago
I commented before you took it down last time, so here goes again :)
Oh Wow Lisa this video is so good, you and Pops did a great acting job on it and the story line was brilliant.
5 Stars***** and favorited :)
I don't think Hitchcock could have done any better :)
Jagamp 3 years ago
I LOVE this one! Just as good in reruns...:-) Happy New Year! :-)
GreatGig1 3 years ago
Holy crap! I kept thinking, "OK, where's the comedy? This is very disturbing." You are masters of the emotional rollercoaster ride! This is Twilight Zone material at its best.
Perroquet51 3 years ago
that was amazing :)
eleven12thirteen 3 years ago
Absolutely awesome, worth to get featured! Love all the editing with the different camera angles.
BattlefieldDoktor 3 years ago
Hello,Lisa and Pops.
You give a nice twisted take on "Groundhog Day".
Only with no redeeming ending. Fugue states were never so brutal.
Blargaldalien 3 years ago
poor Delores, just can't get rid iof that nightmare of a husband huh?
wizardeal 3 years ago
Holy crap..just beat him harder..LOL
Very cool stuff..totally 5 stars ;)
Happy New Year xoxo
jasminmommy 3 years ago
Excellent!
lazmalt 3 years ago
Incredible!
I hope to produce something of this quality in the future.
bowlingballout 3 years ago
Fantastic.
I couldn't imagine an ending like this...
Just great.
5* and adding it to my favourites!
danbergam 3 years ago
Wow This Was Really Good! 5 Stars And Featured! Great Job Guys!
Dale
stealth5976 3 years ago
Oh my goodness, this is excellent!
well done!
:-)
twish1999 3 years ago
Pops gets conked on the head!
citizenkong 3 years ago
citizenkong, How was your Christmas? Hope all is well. My favorite thing to do, as you know, ha ha! Conk, stab, shoot, maim, injure, etc. etc.
This video making is GREAT therapy. HA HA!
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
Christmas wouldn't be christmas without a bit of Lisa & Pops :)
Hope you both had an awesome christmas!
iggy35 3 years ago
iggy35, Thank you Simon! Hope yours was great as well. The time flies so fast, it's almost 2009.
When's your next upload? Miss seeing ya.
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
I lost interest for a while, just can't get the motivation!
iggy35 3 years ago
you and pops should check out a film called the honeymoon killers (if you haven't already)
paultinsel 3 years ago
paultinsel, who stars in that Paul? I might have seen it. I love watching B horror films.
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
BRAVO....the opening credits reminded me of those great early 60s indy films....what a great suprise ending ...i really loved this ...
paultinsel 3 years ago
paultinsel, Thanks Paul. Never miss an opportunity to Kill or maim Pops. Ha ha!
Hope you are well. Have a wonderful New Years. Can't believe it's almost 2009. Where did the year go?
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
First to rate, comment, share and favorite!!
emzirek 3 years ago
emzirek, YEAH! Thank you! Have a great New Years!
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
didn't u upload this like an hour ago ?
JamieGurl12 3 years ago
JamieGurl12, yes, I was trying to render it to fill the youtube screen, but it looks better, I found, this way. Thank you for coming by and watching.
DelisaProductions 3 years ago
oh...kk...thanx 4 the info...=]
JamieGurl12 3 years ago