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  • DL Productions ....betcha can't watch just one.

    I've always liked those day dream sequences in movies.

    I felt sorry for Tommy though....all he wanted was something to eat .... poor guy :)

  • He needs to be more still. Weird twist.

  • Actually not necessarily still,  the body acts differently when you receive a good whack to the head, you can either go out cold OR go into seizure where the body can shake violently before falling into deep unconsciousness.

    Besides, I never stated he died after whacking him with the pan.

  • Touche. He was a jerk, however. I would have son the same.

  • Wonderful Video

    Look like watching in the movies

    It make me feel so scare now

    I love it

    You both great acting

    Bravo

    YOU BOTH ROCK

  • Thank you, Auntie Keiko!

  • Dave does great "dead-pan"! ;P You've blown me away, once again! Beautiful work, my dear!

  • Ha, ha ...all in a day's work.

    Thanks Toni!

  • this was really great!

  • I can't even describe how brilliant I think this was. This is true talent. This should be a featured video by every standard. Stunning visuals and even they "out of place" hillbilly song at the end! I loved this tremendously. Excellent acting from you both!

  • I already saw this and probably I will repeat myself.. no problem, you deserve compliments. I love your

    camera by hand before the murder, the dead's subjective (as if he was alive, anticipating the finale) the thriller of this mysterious guy knocking, and the finale of course.. did she dream? She has a second chance, will she do it again? And underlying humour everywhere!

  • Fantastic!!! You did a wonderful job on this!!! You captured this style of film perfectly.

  • This is your best one yet...! I love it!!!

    Duly sent to my faves list...and I'll be sending it to everyone I know that would appreciate it - including my girlfriend!

  • Out of the frying pan, into the frying pan.  Great work guys. Favorited.

  • you all are great actors put together very well good job

  • I love this!! Great job pops and lisa!!

  • Awesome work! =^)

  • Very, very well done!! Great attention to detail: like putting his legs over the tub added a kind of strangeness that is seen in films of that genre...always keeps the audience guessing! Solid acting...understated with perfect timing!! BRAVO...5*****

  • back for more

  • wow....thsi was so good david and lisa....this must have taken days of work.

    pls. tell me u r movie lovers, coz it shows in your work.

    michael

  • Stop By To Watch AGAIN! lol I Love This Video!

    Happy New Year Guys!

    Dale

  • Better Luck Next Time Delores!

    Loved the twitching Pops...has me rolling on the floor...lol

    You are so very talented Lisa...Loved your performance!

    5 Stars for the both of ya!

    Happy New Year!

  • Hey Lisa!

    That was AWESOME, Baby!

    Nice, sweet video as ALWAYS!

    ~OrangeCaesar (Jules)

    p.s. How would've known that you were SOOO STRONG? LOL. j/k Pops! :)

  • Very Hitchcock that, I loved it. 5 stars

    Panned by the critics though?

  • Hi Kie77! Those critics just slay me! I just hope they use alluminum pans! These cast iron ones can really crush ones ego! LOL! Thanks bud!

  • You just kill me...

  • lmao!! you guys are great!! thanks for the send Wizardeal ^_^..

  • That was awesome. Loved the little smirk you had on at the end when reaching for the frying pan. Good job guys.

  • she really was daydreamin' again.. jease. kill that jerk will ya!? his bitchin' is gettin' on my nerves LMFAO

    love the editing, acting, direcing/script, as well as the titles. it was all very kewl! :)

  • *****

  • even when you are an ordinary housewife, you are so beautiful lisa

  • deloris and jim hahaha classic names. seems he is the only one day dreaming now. great job guys.. it looks like its a repost. still great tho

  • OH SNAP! that was awesome!!!!!

    2 heads are bettre than 1!

  • Married to twins? What happens when somebody wants to use the bathroom?

  • Loved it! Great acting. :P

  • Great!!!! This video is so....strange!!!!

    Very good!

  • Excellent video - You two are talented .

  • Love it! You get 5 stars for just being able to drag Pops out of the room LOL Love the opening music and mosaics. Great job Lisa and Dave!

  • that was terrifically dark! Everyone needs a good cast iron pan :)

  • Very good! Jim's charm really had his wife stewing! Guess he found out, in the end, what he was getting for dinner! 5 stars

  • hahaha ! :-D I remember this one, and it's still awesome ;-)

  • WOW that was amazing!!! Sadly a bit too close to home, but amazing! Great Job as usual!

    Warm Regards

  • Another absolute masterpiece!! You two are nothing short of pure genius!

    I've heard that swinging a cast iron skillet gets easier the second time. LOL

  • A little twist there at the end. That was great!

    Pººhßear

  • thwack! I guess that means it's ready, lolololol!

  • BASTURD, BLAMMM!!! Twitches follow...

    Now thats epic.

  • I just faved!

  • WOW, I didnt see that end coming, that's for sure! At first I was thinking this reminds me of Dolores Claiborne with K Bates...But man guys, you made an amazing piece of work!!! Im busy, so It's hard for me to sit through a 7 minute vid sometimes, but I watched it twice!! This raises the bar for all of us YouTube "filmmakers"

    Congrats Lisa and POPS on a gr8 short film!!

    ~GS~GhOsTsEeKeRs and Forrest Iwaszewski

  • This one is AWESOME!!!Happy New Year:))))*****

  • He had it comin' da rat!

    Good punch line!

  • Pop should do a sequel. You nag him about leaving the toilet seat up. leaving towels on the floor and not being a real man because he can't support his family. In the end he takes your hairspray and a cigarette lighter and torches you.

  • One of my favorites, so classic and love the B&W, excellent from begin to end!

    Glad to see it back!Yaaahhh....

  • Better pun?

    "Pops goes the weasel."

    Nice to see this one again.

  • I hear that if you cut their heads off...they'll never come back! Ha ha ha!

    Absolutely one of the best acted and directed shorts on Youtube!!!

    There's nothing like a bit of black comedy to get me going for the day!!

    Did you get the video off your old PC?

  • Hey Lisa & Pops,

    Good Job, I wonder if we'll still be watching each other 20 years from now. Then you guys wouldn't have to wear the grey wigs and all, LOL! Anyway, I enjoyed the short film, thanks for all your work.

    James.

  • well done.

  • I commented before you took it down last time, so here goes again :)

    Oh Wow Lisa this video is so good, you and Pops did a great acting job on it and the story line was brilliant.

    5 Stars***** and favorited :)

    I don't think Hitchcock could have done any better :)

  • I LOVE this one! Just as good in reruns...:-) Happy New Year! :-)

  • Holy crap! I kept thinking, "OK, where's the comedy? This is very disturbing." You are masters of the emotional rollercoaster ride! This is Twilight Zone material at its best.

  • that was amazing :)

  • Absolutely awesome, worth to get featured! Love all the editing with the different camera angles.

  • Hello,Lisa and Pops.

    You give a nice twisted take on "Groundhog Day".

    Only with no redeeming ending. Fugue states were never so brutal.

  • poor Delores, just can't get rid iof that nightmare of a husband huh?

  • Holy crap..just beat him harder..LOL

    Very cool stuff..totally 5 stars ;)

    Happy New Year xoxo

  • Excellent!

  • Incredible!

    I hope to produce something of this quality in the future.

  • Fantastic.

    I couldn't imagine an ending like this...

    Just great.

    5* and adding it to my favourites!

  • Wow This Was Really Good! 5 Stars And Featured! Great Job Guys!

    Dale

  • Oh my goodness, this is excellent!

    well done!

    :-)

  • Pops gets conked on the head!

  • citizenkong, How was your Christmas? Hope all is well. My favorite thing to do, as you know, ha ha! Conk, stab, shoot, maim, injure, etc. etc.

    This video making is GREAT therapy. HA HA!

  • Christmas wouldn't be christmas without a bit of Lisa & Pops :)

    Hope you both had an awesome christmas!

  • iggy35, Thank you Simon! Hope yours was great as well. The time flies so fast, it's almost 2009.

    When's your next upload? Miss seeing ya.

  • I lost interest for a while, just can't get the motivation!

  • you and pops should check out a film called the honeymoon killers (if you haven't already)

  • paultinsel, who stars in that Paul? I might have seen it. I love watching B horror films.

  • BRAVO....the opening credits reminded me of those great early 60s indy films....what a great suprise ending ...i really loved this ...

  • paultinsel, Thanks Paul. Never miss an opportunity to Kill or maim Pops. Ha ha!

    Hope you are well. Have a wonderful New Years. Can't believe it's almost 2009. Where did the year go?

  • First to rate, comment, share and favorite!!

  • emzirek, YEAH! Thank you! Have a great New Years!

  • didn't u upload this like an hour ago ?

  • JamieGurl12, yes, I was trying to render it to fill the youtube screen, but it looks better, I found, this way. Thank you for coming by and watching.

  • oh...kk...thanx 4 the info...=]

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