I would suppose that it really is hard to let go. I had to imagine being in that postion because I don't have children, myself...I am glad you liked my song. That really means a lot to me.
I'll see if I can't dig that one up and have a go at it for you later on...I've always liked Thin Lizzy...I'll see if I can't try and do that one for you...
I am so honoured that you have faved this. I try and create songs that I would want to hear...about real people dealing with real stuff. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, but it's all "me".
I love writing things that people can relate to...I'm so glad you were able to do that on this one...
So glad you approve! When it comes to songs like this where I want people to listen to the words, I don't throw in a lot of flashy runs and things like that. Those are good in their place, but this is not the place. I like to just try and set a good mood...like TiffanyAnneMusic does with piano or Lauramariesongs does with her guitar work. Thanks again...
I am so glad that this song touched your heart in this way. I am so grateful to hear...I agree with what a fellow songwriter on here told me not too long ago: songs are gifts, and I was pleased to pass along to you this gift I've been given. I really enjoy it.
I know I run you all through some "interesting" extremes, no doubt...lol But each and everything I do is really me and really what I believe in. I don't do anything else because I don't have to.
And what is great is to have friends like you who understand and appreciate that.
Wow, I am so glad that you like this one! Your Michael Jackson tribute just blasted all my doors off, by the way...terrific!! When a singer and musician of your caliber has such complimentary things to say about my work, I am just in awe. All I can say is, "Thank you so much...."
And I am so delighted that you approve. You are very sincere and generous in your praise for people...very supportive. I really admire that about you.
I feel so fortunate that the friends I share my music with seem to understand where I'm coming from as a singer, songwriter, and musician. I really appreciate it, too...Thanks so much, Robbie
Oh wow, bless your heart! To hear a nice comment about my singing is always wonderful! And you faved it too...what an honour. I love what you are as a performer and as a person. You are a genuine person and I am honoured to be your friend on here. Thank you for this wonderful comment...
Well, seeing as how you yourself are first-class, I am quite the honoured one by your praise and estimation of my work. Please know that I never, never take it for granted. I just appreciate you, your kindness, and our friendship so much.
I try to put myself in the position of the listener when I sing something...and I just don't care for songs where the singer is not singing with passion or conviction. I want the performer to make me FEEL something.
Thanks, Duke...I guess I just try to put myself in the song and try to get the message right! And remember the words...I actually have a hard time remembering what I wrote, myself!
I thank you so much for your kind words...not every song turns out to be a great one, but I do try and write things that are true in some way or another.
I am sure there are things that you do that I wish I could. I guess we're all like that.
But thank you so much for taking out time to look at this and leave such a nice comment. I appreciate it.
Thank you so much! I guess I just sort of see stories unfold in my mind and the lyrics just sort of happen...when I share these songs, it really is like returning a gift that has been given to me. Thank you so much...
This is a very good original. I loved the words, very special. Good guitar work, thank you for sharing this,great job, keep on writing i think you have something there. Cheri
I am really glad to hear the comments on the guitar work that I have received! Wow!
I guess that, as a lead guitarist, I am sort of more inclined in that direction than a lot of other singer/songwriters on here...but I try to keep the guitar work tasteful and in the context of the song. I think that too much musicianship can sometimes bury the message in a tune and even make people forget what a song is all about.
I am so glad you admire my writing. Yes, I am certainly going to keep it up.
5* David, this is sweet, touching and wonderful!!!!Great emotion comes through and anyone with a little girl can relate!!! Great job....your earthy tone voice sells the song so well....thanks for the
I am so blown away that you like the vocal...you hear great singing all the time! So wowowow, thank you so much!
I tried to put myself in the father's position so that my words could MEAN something...I like trying to do that...trying to take the listener to where the words are. I am so glad you approve...
I try to put a song across in a way that is believable, ya know? I agree with the great Martha Reeves about something...she said, 'I try to never sing something I can't believe in. "
I like to write songs that tell stories about people and life. So glad you liked this one...
Thank you, Enrico. You make me so glad to hear this. I really tried to perform this one in a way so that the words mean something. I try and get inside the song and try to become the person in the story, when I can.
Thank you Carol...I am glad that you regard this song so highly. I just try to write the kind of song I would like to hear, myself. And I always try to write the truth...even if it's not about me, like this song isn't.
I am so pleased to hear that you like this one, my friend. You strike me as a person of standards and good taste, very creative yourself...so I do not take your praise lightly. Thank you so much...
Thanks Bjorn. I just felt like the time was right to sing this one, and I am glad that everyone who has said something about it really likes it. I always try to write true songs about life.
Just another very creative and clever example of songwriting at its finest David, I never tire of hearing these wonderful songs you share good friend. This one absolutely raises the bar for what I feel already has been previously set quite high by you already. David, these songs are just as good and in my opinion much better than what they're currently playing on the country stations. I wish someone in the industry would find some of these gems you've written - They are very worthy! Mark
Wow...Mark, I never take these fine and sincerely written comments for granted. You speak from experience and you know what you're talking about. This puts me even more in awe of your awesome estimation of my songcraft.
What I try to do (and I know you do, as well) is try to write the kind of tune that I myself would want to hear. Thank you for calling my songs "gems"...what an honour.
Shawn, lemme tell ya, that is so awesome to hear. I run through a lot of styles on here, but one thing I try to do is tell life like it is and not "put on" about anything. I am glad that you like what I put up here...that means a lot, man...thank you..
This is really great honest songwriting in a country folk style. I love it David! You have a really good strong voice too. A very sensitive song that shows a really caring soul. You could be on stage doing this!
Oh wow, my friend, thank you so much!! I'm kinda happy with the melody...it works. I tested this on a real dad and said, "Is this how it is?" He said, "Yes".
Thanks so much for your comment on my singing...I have really wanted to improve my vocal performances on here. I probably will be singing this onstage sometime in the near future...thanks a million, you're great, too!!
Thanks....as I said in the description, I did some research (I'm not a dad, myself) and a friend of mine told me that letting go of his daughter was the most emotionally painful experience of his life. I guess I just tried to sing it thoughtfully...
Yeah...that's the idea. Thanks so much for checking this out...
Oh wow David! This is amazing! I don't have the greatest relationship with my dad. The girl in your song is so lucky. You're right, it is like Stealing Cinderella but I think your song is so much better!
Thank you so MUCH...I don't have the greatest relationship with my dad, either....I did the research and tried to put myself in the father's position...I didn't want to do another "macho man with a shotgun" song...
Glad you liked it! The melody is kind of influenced by Holly Kirby's stuff...in my own way, of course...
Thanks for watching, rating and commenting...you're the BEST!
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This song is great man. If I ever ask my girlfriend to marry me (Her name is Lacey) I want you to play this at our wedding!
rockdrummersrock 9 months ago
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rockdrummersrock 9 months ago
like like like !!!!
laceyw14 1 year ago
Wow - it'll be a while until my daughter's there - but the lyrics to this still brought a tear to my eye. 5/5
MarkH901 2 years ago
Especially the part about another being first in her eyes lol
MarkH901 2 years ago
This is a beautiful song! I really love this. Excellent.
chrishurnsolo 2 years ago
This is just wonderful....love the lyrics and you have a very authentic style. :)
onewomanandsomesongs 2 years ago
Oh my god!! This was awesome =) I am a metal dude and I still appreciated this song, keep it up!
Argug1 2 years ago
Thanks! I'll tell you what, a singer/songwriter can't ask for any better than something like that...I appreciate it.
Don't worry...your metal's coming. Next video!
westpoint64 2 years ago
HEY david great lyrics and it is hard to let go,
loved you song well done my friend ,Alan
theKAVRIN 2 years ago
I would suppose that it really is hard to let go. I had to imagine being in that postion because I don't have children, myself...I am glad you liked my song. That really means a lot to me.
westpoint64 2 years ago
love this track>>
Heartfelt vocals >>
BRAD........
krytuesdaygiving 2 years ago
Thank you, Brad. I just try to do the best I can to make these songs believable in the way I sing them. I am really glad you liked this!
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great song, and Performance David..
10/10* Take care, and have a Great wkend...
Lisa3577 2 years ago
Thank you so much, Lisa. I appreciate your checking this one out, and you have a great weekend, too...
westpoint64 2 years ago
No problem, glad to do it. I just put your request on my song list...(I'm backlogged, like everybody else on here! haha)
westpoint64 2 years ago
I'll see if I can't dig that one up and have a go at it for you later on...I've always liked Thin Lizzy...I'll see if I can't try and do that one for you...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great calming song David, love this 5/5 stars for sure!
Pier V
VisserIsLive 2 years ago
Thanks a lot! I am glad you took the time to check this one out..
westpoint64 2 years ago
Thanks so much, Chris...I am so glad you checked this one out and left such a nice review. Take care..
westpoint64 2 years ago
Thanks Indy...not only for this comment, but for what you do for YouTube.
westpoint64 2 years ago
I am so honoured that you have faved this. I try and create songs that I would want to hear...about real people dealing with real stuff. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, but it's all "me".
I love writing things that people can relate to...I'm so glad you were able to do that on this one...
David x
westpoint64 2 years ago
So glad you approve! When it comes to songs like this where I want people to listen to the words, I don't throw in a lot of flashy runs and things like that. Those are good in their place, but this is not the place. I like to just try and set a good mood...like TiffanyAnneMusic does with piano or Lauramariesongs does with her guitar work. Thanks again...
westpoint64 2 years ago
This is AWESOME David!!! The lyrics are AMAZING so heart felt. My eyes are watery now. So LOVELY!!!
sistermoonshine13 2 years ago
I am so glad that this song touched your heart in this way. I am so grateful to hear...I agree with what a fellow songwriter on here told me not too long ago: songs are gifts, and I was pleased to pass along to you this gift I've been given. I really enjoy it.
Thank you for taking time out to view this...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great work David ,5***** thanks for sharing'
Colin.
RythmnMaster2009 2 years ago
Colin, thank YOU for doing me the honour of checking this out and commenting on it. I really appreciate your loyal support and belief in me, man...
westpoint64 2 years ago
I love it!!! 5/5!! :-)!! david, you are awesome my southern brother! xo
yustforfunonly 2 years ago
You are awesome, too, and I am so glad you took the time to check this out...thanks so much, you're the BEST, Vegas sis!!
*hugs*!!
David xx
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great original song David. I can't think of any performances of yours I have not enjoyed and this isn't the exception. 5 stars for the tip bucket
GregoryLog 2 years ago
I know I run you all through some "interesting" extremes, no doubt...lol But each and everything I do is really me and really what I believe in. I don't do anything else because I don't have to.
And what is great is to have friends like you who understand and appreciate that.
As always, thank you so much...
westpoint64 2 years ago
As always, 5 stars. :) This is a wonderful original David. :)
TiffanyAnneMusic 2 years ago
Wow, I am so glad that you like this one! Your Michael Jackson tribute just blasted all my doors off, by the way...terrific!! When a singer and musician of your caliber has such complimentary things to say about my work, I am just in awe. All I can say is, "Thank you so much...."
westpoint64 2 years ago
A first class preformance, my friend!!!!
Robbie
xxxlittledreamxxx 2 years ago
And I am so delighted that you approve. You are very sincere and generous in your praise for people...very supportive. I really admire that about you.
I feel so fortunate that the friends I share my music with seem to understand where I'm coming from as a singer, songwriter, and musician. I really appreciate it, too...Thanks so much, Robbie
David
westpoint64 2 years ago
what a wonderful lyrics, melody and singing!!..very true and heart felt...faved and ima give u 5***** and millions and millions more!!!
yayiemai 2 years ago
Oh wow, bless your heart! To hear a nice comment about my singing is always wonderful! And you faved it too...what an honour. I love what you are as a performer and as a person. You are a genuine person and I am honoured to be your friend on here. Thank you for this wonderful comment...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Wow, what a great comment! Thank you so much...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great Job David!!!
5 big Stars!!!
Cathy:)
CathyKay29 2 years ago
Aww David a beautiful story. Sniff Sniff someday my little will be all grown up...
Peace
Julia~
JuliaSpring2008 2 years ago
You have an amazing way with words sir.
deltahotel1 2 years ago
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SUPERMEGADUARTE 2 years ago
I appreciated your sensitivity,and most of all, the lyrics..that made this nice delicate song a little great witness of poetry .
Bravo! 5***** from Rome
-Luca
RomeSnowShower 2 years ago
Wow David,I really appreciate this song,having a daughter myself..Thanks for posting this David..
God Bless
timstime1970 2 years ago
Hi david my friend you gave a first class preformance with lots of emotion in your singing and lyrics,5 big stars heading your way.
julie xx
juliereed2002 2 years ago
Well, seeing as how you yourself are first-class, I am quite the honoured one by your praise and estimation of my work. Please know that I never, never take it for granted. I just appreciate you, your kindness, and our friendship so much.
I try to put myself in the position of the listener when I sing something...and I just don't care for songs where the singer is not singing with passion or conviction. I want the performer to make me FEEL something.
Thanks for this great review!
David xx
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great Job David!!*****Duke
TexasHighDef 2 years ago
Thanks, Duke...I guess I just try to put myself in the song and try to get the message right! And remember the words...I actually have a hard time remembering what I wrote, myself!
westpoint64 2 years ago
David, your lyrics was so touch... You're a good song writer and a good lyric writer.. Wish I could make a song with lyric like you.. Bravo David!
LanangYogya 2 years ago
I thank you so much for your kind words...not every song turns out to be a great one, but I do try and write things that are true in some way or another.
I am sure there are things that you do that I wish I could. I guess we're all like that.
But thank you so much for taking out time to look at this and leave such a nice comment. I appreciate it.
westpoint64 2 years ago
Hi David..Splended song my friend. Great lyrics!
(5*) Sherry
sherrywine1941 2 years ago
Thank you so much! I guess I just sort of see stories unfold in my mind and the lyrics just sort of happen...when I share these songs, it really is like returning a gift that has been given to me. Thank you so much...
westpoint64 2 years ago
That was really really good !!!! Thanks for sharing with me !!!
Pensygirl54 2 years ago
It was an honour to do so. I love sharing my music with great friends like you...
westpoint64 2 years ago
That was Absolutely Beautiful!!
Thanks for sharing it with us!!
CousinSusie 2 years ago
I am so glad you liked this...I appreciate so much your taking time out of your busy life to view this. Thank you...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Hi David, that was really a pleasure listen to! Very, very well done! I honestly enjoyed it - 5 stars and love from Austria - Sharine
SharineONeill 2 years ago
I feel so honoured that you would say that! Your music always reflects such nice craft and taste. Thank you so much!
David xx
westpoint64 2 years ago
Nice original song! Good lyrics! 5*****
TERUKO5 2 years ago
I am so honoured to hear this from a person I respect as a singer/songwriter/musician. Glad you approve, I appreciate that a lot!
David
westpoint64 2 years ago
This is a very good original. I loved the words, very special. Good guitar work, thank you for sharing this,great job, keep on writing i think you have something there. Cheri
magicwoman116 2 years ago
I am really glad to hear the comments on the guitar work that I have received! Wow!
I guess that, as a lead guitarist, I am sort of more inclined in that direction than a lot of other singer/songwriters on here...but I try to keep the guitar work tasteful and in the context of the song. I think that too much musicianship can sometimes bury the message in a tune and even make people forget what a song is all about.
I am so glad you admire my writing. Yes, I am certainly going to keep it up.
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great lyrics and song David! Brilliant! 5 stars
deanb92 2 years ago
Thank you! I enjoy what you post, too. It is so great to hear from you and to get such a nice review...thanks...
westpoint64 2 years ago
5* David, this is sweet, touching and wonderful!!!!Great emotion comes through and anyone with a little girl can relate!!! Great job....your earthy tone voice sells the song so well....thanks for the
great share!!!
hugs
Joyce
teacherjoyceann 2 years ago
I am so blown away that you like the vocal...you hear great singing all the time! So wowowow, thank you so much!
I tried to put myself in the father's position so that my words could MEAN something...I like trying to do that...trying to take the listener to where the words are. I am so glad you approve...
*hugs back* !!
David xx
westpoint64 2 years ago
Lovely tune Bud. Great lyrics too. Big 5 starz :)
RobElliottMusic 2 years ago
Thanks, man. So awesome to get such a nice review from ya...
westpoint64 2 years ago
5*****
claudiarute 2 years ago
Thanks! I really appreciate your taking a look at this one and leaving those stars. Glad you approve!
westpoint64 2 years ago
Awesome tune David!!!!!!!!!!
mindfulmusic78 2 years ago
So glad you liked this! I really appreciate your taking time to check it out, that meant a lot to me...thank you!
westpoint64 2 years ago
Wonderful song! Lots of emotion! Love it! Well done mate and thanks for sharing!! =D
fishmonkeyproduction 2 years ago
I am so glad ya like it mate!
I try to put a song across in a way that is believable, ya know? I agree with the great Martha Reeves about something...she said, 'I try to never sing something I can't believe in. "
I like to write songs that tell stories about people and life. So glad you liked this one...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Wonderful song, David! And touching lyrics... thanks a lot for sharing! 5* and best wishes to you and yours,
Lilly
LillyC68 2 years ago
Hi Lilly!
I just tried to put myself in the father's place and imagine what it'd be like...and I guess the rest just fell in place.
Best wishes to you, also...
David
westpoint64 2 years ago
Love this ! straight from the heart 5*
susannawolfe 2 years ago
I am so glad that you did, because hearing from you means a lot to me! You are so professional in what you do, yourself. Thanks so much....
westpoint64 2 years ago
Very moving song, David! great perfomance, too 5* =)
Enrico
zappatero7 2 years ago
Thank you, Enrico. You make me so glad to hear this. I really tried to perform this one in a way so that the words mean something. I try and get inside the song and try to become the person in the story, when I can.
westpoint64 2 years ago
wonderful job..
I really enjoyed what ya wrote ...
You sung awesome... five stars
1959leonardo 2 years ago
Wow, so glad you liked the singing! That helps me a lot, I have really tried to make the singing better on these videos.
I just try to write a good, strong song and after that, I just hope for the best. I am so glad you took the time to view this...
westpoint64 2 years ago
This is just so lovely David. Excellent dear friend. Bright new stars and hugs..Jan and Susan ♥
weeyin1155 2 years ago
I am so glad you like this one. It just kind of wrote itself...like so many songs that I have been gifted with have done.
Thanks, ladies...
*hugs*!!
David xx
westpoint64 2 years ago
Brilliant job David your so clever.
Carol x5*
ilovemaniototo 2 years ago
Thank you Carol...I am glad that you regard this song so highly. I just try to write the kind of song I would like to hear, myself. And I always try to write the truth...even if it's not about me, like this song isn't.
Thanks again,
David xx
westpoint64 2 years ago
Great job, David!
BigLoveZone 2 years ago
I am so pleased to hear that you like this one, my friend. You strike me as a person of standards and good taste, very creative yourself...so I do not take your praise lightly. Thank you so much...
westpoint64 2 years ago
I really like this song, great composition!
Rick
bios36 2 years ago
And I really like it when cool people like you take the time to leave such nice comments as this. Thank you so much, Rick, that means a lot to me....
westpoint64 2 years ago
Really nice one David :D Keep up the good work =P
//Björn
Deadlygreg 2 years ago
Thanks Bjorn. I just felt like the time was right to sing this one, and I am glad that everyone who has said something about it really likes it. I always try to write true songs about life.
westpoint64 2 years ago
Just another very creative and clever example of songwriting at its finest David, I never tire of hearing these wonderful songs you share good friend. This one absolutely raises the bar for what I feel already has been previously set quite high by you already. David, these songs are just as good and in my opinion much better than what they're currently playing on the country stations. I wish someone in the industry would find some of these gems you've written - They are very worthy! Mark
Maysey1 2 years ago
Wow...Mark, I never take these fine and sincerely written comments for granted. You speak from experience and you know what you're talking about. This puts me even more in awe of your awesome estimation of my songcraft.
What I try to do (and I know you do, as well) is try to write the kind of tune that I myself would want to hear. Thank you for calling my songs "gems"...what an honour.
westpoint64 2 years ago
Awesome tune buddy, I like it a lot. You have great talent and I enjoy your videos. 5/5 man \,,/
Shawn
warmachine169 2 years ago
Shawn, lemme tell ya, that is so awesome to hear. I run through a lot of styles on here, but one thing I try to do is tell life like it is and not "put on" about anything. I am glad that you like what I put up here...that means a lot, man...thank you..
David
westpoint64 2 years ago
good job on this great video
RickyCountryAtHeart 2 years ago
Thanks for checking this one out, Ricky. I really appreciate it...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Good to hear from you David!!
Eloy
Escagedo3rd 2 years ago
Same here!
westpoint64 2 years ago
wow David cool song and lyrics....peace...Freddie
AndreasBusshart 2 years ago
Thanks so much, Freddie...you're the coolest...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Wonderful Beautiful Song David, a classic in my eyes, nothing more needed to say.
Matt
withnailus 2 years ago
My goodness, Matt, thank you SO MUCH, my friend! What an honour, coming from such a super songwriter as yourself...
westpoint64 2 years ago
This is really great honest songwriting in a country folk style. I love it David! You have a really good strong voice too. A very sensitive song that shows a really caring soul. You could be on stage doing this!
Great!! :))
cbrb40 2 years ago
Oh wow, my friend, thank you so much!! I'm kinda happy with the melody...it works. I tested this on a real dad and said, "Is this how it is?" He said, "Yes".
Thanks so much for your comment on my singing...I have really wanted to improve my vocal performances on here. I probably will be singing this onstage sometime in the near future...thanks a million, you're great, too!!
westpoint64 2 years ago
I think this is a good song, if a little sad. But, I think that is the idea. I like it!
zmov1 2 years ago
Thanks....as I said in the description, I did some research (I'm not a dad, myself) and a friend of mine told me that letting go of his daughter was the most emotionally painful experience of his life. I guess I just tried to sing it thoughtfully...
Yeah...that's the idea. Thanks so much for checking this out...
westpoint64 2 years ago
Oh wow David! This is amazing! I don't have the greatest relationship with my dad. The girl in your song is so lucky. You're right, it is like Stealing Cinderella but I think your song is so much better!
imalittlemidget 2 years ago
Thank you so MUCH...I don't have the greatest relationship with my dad, either....I did the research and tried to put myself in the father's position...I didn't want to do another "macho man with a shotgun" song...
Glad you liked it! The melody is kind of influenced by Holly Kirby's stuff...in my own way, of course...
Thanks for watching, rating and commenting...you're the BEST!
b.b.xxxxxxx
westpoint64 2 years ago