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  • like like like !!!!

  • Wow - it'll be a while until my daughter's there - but the lyrics to this still brought a tear to my eye. 5/5

  • Especially the part about another being first in her eyes lol

  • This is a beautiful song! I really love this. Excellent.

  • This is just wonderful....love the lyrics and you have a very authentic style. :)

  • Oh my god!! This was awesome =) I am a metal dude and I still appreciated this song, keep it up!

  • Thanks! I'll tell you what, a singer/songwriter can't ask for any better than something like that...I appreciate it.

    Don't worry...your metal's coming. Next video!

  • HEY david great lyrics and it is hard to let go,

    loved you song well done my friend ,Alan

  • I would suppose that it really is hard to let go. I had to imagine being in that postion because I don't have children, myself...I am glad you liked my song. That really means a lot to me.

  • love this track>>

    Heartfelt vocals >>

    BRAD........

  • Thank you, Brad. I just try to do the best I can to make these songs believable in the way I sing them. I am really glad you liked this!

  • Great song, and Performance David..

    10/10* Take care, and have a Great wkend...

  • Thank you so much, Lisa. I appreciate your checking this one out, and you have a great weekend, too...

  • No problem, glad to do it. I just put your request on my song list...(I'm backlogged, like everybody else on here! haha)

  • I'll see if I can't dig that one up and have a go at it for you later on...I've always liked Thin Lizzy...I'll see if I can't try and do that one for you...

  • Great calming song David, love this 5/5 stars for sure!

    Pier V

  • Thanks a lot! I am glad you took the time to check this one out..

  • Thanks so much, Chris...I am so glad you checked this one out and left such a nice review. Take care..

  • Thanks Indy...not only for this comment, but for what you do for YouTube.

  • I am so honoured that you have faved this. I try and create songs that I would want to hear...about real people dealing with real stuff. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, but it's all "me".

    I love writing things that people can relate to...I'm so glad you were able to do that on this one...

    David x

  • So glad you approve! When it comes to songs like this where I want people to listen to the words, I don't throw in a lot of flashy runs and things like that. Those are good in their place, but this is not the place. I like to just try and set a good mood...like TiffanyAnneMusic does with piano or Lauramariesongs does with her guitar work. Thanks again...

  • This is AWESOME David!!! The lyrics are AMAZING so heart felt. My eyes are watery now. So LOVELY!!!

  • I am so glad that this song touched your heart in this way. I am so grateful to hear...I agree with what a fellow songwriter on here told me not too long ago: songs are gifts, and I was pleased to pass along to you this gift I've been given. I really enjoy it.

    Thank you for taking time out to view this...

  • Great work David ,5***** thanks for sharing'

    Colin.

  • Colin, thank YOU for doing me the honour of checking this out and commenting on it. I really appreciate your loyal support and belief in me, man...

  • I love it!!! 5/5!! :-)!! david, you are awesome my southern brother! xo

  • You are awesome, too, and I am so glad you took the time to check this out...thanks so much, you're the BEST, Vegas sis!!

    *hugs*!!

    David xx

  • Great original song David. I can't think of any performances of yours I have not enjoyed and this isn't the exception. 5 stars for the tip bucket

  • I know I run you all through some "interesting" extremes, no doubt...lol But each and everything I do is really me and really what I believe in. I don't do anything else because I don't have to.

    And what is great is to have friends like you who understand and appreciate that.

    As always, thank you so much...

  • As always, 5 stars. :) This is a wonderful original David. :)

  • Wow, I am so glad that you like this one! Your Michael Jackson tribute just blasted all my doors off, by the way...terrific!! When a singer and musician of your caliber has such complimentary things to say about my work, I am just in awe. All I can say is, "Thank you so much...."

  • A first class preformance, my friend!!!!

    Robbie

  • And I am so delighted that you approve. You are very sincere and generous in your praise for people...very supportive. I really admire that about you.

    I feel so fortunate that the friends I share my music with seem to understand where I'm coming from as a singer, songwriter, and musician. I really appreciate it, too...Thanks so much, Robbie

    David

  • what a wonderful lyrics, melody and singing!!..very true and heart felt...faved and ima give u 5***** and millions and millions more!!!

  • Oh wow, bless your heart! To hear a nice comment about my singing is always wonderful! And you faved it too...what an honour. I love what you are as a performer and as a person. You are a genuine person and I am honoured to be your friend on here. Thank you for this wonderful comment...

  • Wow, what a great comment! Thank you so much...

  • Great Job David!!!

    5 big Stars!!!

    Cathy:)

  • Aww David a beautiful story.  Sniff Sniff someday my little will be all grown up...

    Peace

    Julia~

  • You have an amazing way with words sir.

  • I appreciated your sensitivity,and most of all, the lyrics..that made this nice delicate song a little great witness of poetry .

    Bravo! 5***** from Rome

    -Luca

  • Wow David,I really appreciate this song,having a daughter myself..Thanks for posting this David..

    God Bless

  • Hi david my friend you gave a first class preformance with lots of emotion in your singing and lyrics,5 big stars heading your way.

    julie xx

  • Well, seeing as how you yourself are first-class, I am quite the honoured one by your praise and estimation of my work. Please know that I never, never take it for granted. I just appreciate you, your kindness, and our friendship so much.

    I try to put myself in the position of the listener when I sing something...and I just don't care for songs where the singer is not singing with passion or conviction. I want the performer to make me FEEL something.

    Thanks for this great review!

    David xx

  • Great Job David!!*****Duke

  • Thanks, Duke...I guess I just try to put myself in the song and try to get the message right! And remember the words...I actually have a hard time remembering what I wrote, myself!

  • David, your lyrics was so touch... You're a good song writer and a good lyric writer.. Wish I could make a song with lyric like you.. Bravo David!

  • I thank you so much for your kind words...not every song turns out to be a great one, but I do try and write things that are true in some way or another.

    I am sure there are things that you do that I wish I could. I guess we're all like that.

    But thank you so much for taking out time to look at this and leave such a nice comment. I appreciate it.

  • Hi David..Splended song my friend. Great lyrics!

    (5*)  Sherry

  • Thank you so much! I guess I just sort of see stories unfold in my mind and the lyrics just sort of happen...when I share these songs, it really is like returning a gift that has been given to me. Thank you so much...

  • That was really really good !!!! Thanks for sharing with me !!!

  • It was an honour to do so. I love sharing my music with great friends like you...

  • That was Absolutely Beautiful!!

    Thanks for sharing it with us!!

  • I am so glad you liked this...I appreciate so much your taking time out of your busy life to view this. Thank you...

  • Hi David, that was really a pleasure listen to! Very, very well done! I honestly enjoyed it - 5 stars and love from Austria - Sharine

  • I feel so honoured that you would say that! Your music always reflects such nice craft and taste. Thank you so much!

    David xx

  • Nice original song! Good lyrics! 5*****

  • I am so honoured to hear this from a person I respect as a singer/songwriter/musician. Glad you approve, I appreciate that a lot!

    David

  • This is a very good original. I loved the words, very special. Good guitar work, thank you for sharing this,great job, keep on writing i think you have something there. Cheri

  • I am really glad to hear the comments on the guitar work that I have received! Wow!

    I guess that, as a lead guitarist, I am sort of more inclined in that direction than a lot of other singer/songwriters on here...but I try to keep the guitar work tasteful and in the context of the song. I think that too much musicianship can sometimes bury the message in a tune and even make people forget what a song is all about.

    I am so glad you admire my writing. Yes, I am certainly going to keep it up.

  • Great lyrics and song David! Brilliant! 5 stars

  • Thank you! I enjoy what you post, too. It is so great to hear from you and to get such a nice review...thanks...

  • 5* David, this is sweet, touching and wonderful!!!!Great emotion comes through and anyone with a little girl can relate!!! Great job....your earthy tone voice sells the song so well....thanks for the

    great share!!!

    hugs

    Joyce

  • I am so blown away that you like the vocal...you hear great singing all the time! So wowowow, thank you so much!

    I tried to put myself in the father's position so that my words could MEAN something...I like trying to do that...trying to take the listener to where the words are. I am so glad you approve...

    *hugs back* !!

    David xx

  • Lovely tune Bud. Great lyrics too. Big 5 starz :)

  • Thanks, man. So awesome to get such a nice review from ya...

  • 5*****

  • Thanks! I really appreciate your taking a look at this one and leaving those stars. Glad you approve!

  • Awesome tune David!!!!!!!!!!

  • So glad you liked this! I really appreciate your taking time to check it out, that meant a lot to me...thank you!

  • Wonderful song! Lots of emotion! Love it! Well done mate and thanks for sharing!! =D

  • I am so glad ya like it mate!

    I try to put a song across in a way that is believable, ya know? I agree with the great Martha Reeves about something...she said, 'I try to never sing something I can't believe in. "

    I like to write songs that tell stories about people and life. So glad you liked this one...

  • Wonderful song, David! And touching lyrics... thanks a lot for sharing! 5* and best wishes to you and yours,

    Lilly

  • Hi Lilly!

    I just tried to put myself in the father's place and imagine what it'd be like...and I guess the rest just fell in place.

    Best wishes to you, also...

    David

  • Love this ! straight from the heart 5*

  • I am so glad that you did, because hearing from you means a lot to me! You are so professional in what you do, yourself. Thanks so much....

  • Very moving song, David! great perfomance, too 5* =)

    Enrico

  • Thank you, Enrico. You make me so glad to hear this. I really tried to perform this one in a way so that the words mean something. I try and get inside the song and try to become the person in the story, when I can.

  • wonderful job..

    I really enjoyed what ya wrote ...

    You sung awesome... five stars

  • Wow, so glad you liked the singing! That helps me a lot, I have really tried to make the singing better on these videos.

    I just try to write a good, strong song and after that, I just hope for the best. I am so glad you took the time to view this...

  • This is just so lovely David. Excellent dear friend. Bright new stars and hugs..Jan and Susan ♥

  • I am so glad you like this one. It just kind of wrote itself...like so many songs that I have been gifted with have done.

    Thanks, ladies...

    *hugs*!!

    David xx

  • Brilliant job David your so clever.

    Carol x5*

  • Thank you Carol...I am glad that you regard this song so highly. I just try to write the kind of song I would like to hear, myself. And I always try to write the truth...even if it's not about me, like this song isn't.

    Thanks again,

    David xx

  • Great job, David!

  • I am so pleased to hear that you like this one, my friend. You strike me as a person of standards and good taste, very creative yourself...so I do not take your praise lightly. Thank you so much...

  • I really like this song, great composition!

    Rick

  • And I really like it when cool people like you take the time to leave such nice comments as this. Thank you so much, Rick, that means a lot to me....

  • Really nice one David :D Keep up the good work =P

    //Björn

  • Thanks Bjorn. I just felt like the time was right to sing this one, and I am glad that everyone who has said something about it really likes it. I always try to write true songs about life.

  • Just another very creative and clever example of songwriting at its finest David, I never tire of hearing these wonderful songs you share good friend. This one absolutely raises the bar for what I feel already has been previously set quite high by you already. David, these songs are just as good and in my opinion much better than what they're currently playing on the country stations. I wish someone in the industry would find some of these gems you've written - They are very worthy! Mark

  • Wow...Mark, I never take these fine and sincerely written comments for granted. You speak from experience and you know what you're talking about. This puts me even more in awe of your awesome estimation of my songcraft.

    What I try to do (and I know you do, as well) is try to write the kind of tune that I myself would want to hear. Thank you for calling my songs "gems"...what an honour.

  • Awesome tune buddy, I like it a lot. You have great talent and I enjoy your videos. 5/5 man \,,/

    Shawn

  • Shawn, lemme tell ya, that is so awesome to hear. I run through a lot of styles on here, but one thing I try to do is tell life like it is and not "put on" about anything. I am glad that you like what I put up here...that means a lot, man...thank you..

    David

  • good job on this great video

  • Thanks for checking this one out, Ricky. I really appreciate it...

  • Good to hear from you David!!

    Eloy

  • Same here!

  • wow David cool song and lyrics....peace...Freddie

  • Thanks so much, Freddie...you're the coolest...

  • Wonderful Beautiful Song David, a classic in my eyes, nothing more needed to say.

    Matt

  • My goodness, Matt, thank you SO MUCH, my friend! What an honour, coming from such a super songwriter as yourself...

  • This is really great honest songwriting in a country folk style. I love it David! You have a really good strong voice too. A very sensitive song that shows a really caring soul. You could be on stage doing this!

    Great!! :))

  • Oh wow, my friend, thank you so much!! I'm kinda happy with the melody...it works. I tested this on a real dad and said, "Is this how it is?" He said, "Yes".

    Thanks so much for your comment on my singing...I have really wanted to improve my vocal performances on here. I probably will be singing this onstage sometime in the near future...thanks a million, you're great, too!!

  • I think this is a good song, if a little sad. But, I think that is the idea. I like it!

  • Thanks....as I said in the description, I did some research (I'm not a dad, myself) and a friend of mine told me that letting go of his daughter was the most emotionally painful experience of his life. I guess I just tried to sing it thoughtfully...

    Yeah...that's the idea. Thanks so much for checking this out...

  • Oh wow David! This is amazing! I don't have the greatest relationship with my dad. The girl in your song is so lucky. You're right, it is like Stealing Cinderella but I think your song is so much better!

  • Thank you so MUCH...I don't have the greatest relationship with my dad, either....I did the research and tried to put myself in the father's position...I didn't want to do another "macho man with a shotgun" song...

    Glad you liked it! The melody is kind of influenced by Holly Kirby's stuff...in my own way, of course...

    Thanks for watching, rating and commenting...you're the BEST!

    b.b.xxxxxxx

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