Breaking Free (A Jacob/Renesmee Love Story) CH2 (Spring Summer And Forever)

[lulu117100]

that´s sooooo Cute!!!!!

[GIRLZROC219]

this is nothing like harpielady99 's book! nessie hates suprises and her mom's anme is bella not kristen (thats the actress who plays her) it's a good book don't get me wrong but miss leading

[14Rawan]

@GIRLZROC219 The bella-Kristen thing was a little mistake, but the book would of course change with the writer, each one of us see the characters in a different way, yes it's misleading, but we try our best.

[GIRLZROC219]

@14Rawan i mean of course it would change i wasn't playing on it not to :) by the way the book is still good but i just wonder how it would end if harpilady99 finished. also random thought but i also wonder what mrs meyer would think of this book cuz it feels like she wrote this!

[14Rawan]

@GIRLZROC219 well, to see how harpielady would've finished it,well we'll have to ask her cuz i don't know :D and i think Meyer would "not bad girls" xD but we can't know that either :P what's important is the people who read this and give their feedback, like yourself. :)

[GIRLZROC219]

@14Rawan awww shucks you make me feel important! lol so i don't mean to sound rude but how did you end up making/finishing 'brecking free' ?

[14Rawan]

@GIRLZROC219 The story reached a dead end with harpielady, so she asked me to finish it, as it would bring me more subs and views, so I said OK I'll try. She was right for most of it, it did bring me views but only on this series, people still don't read the other stories i write :) But it was fun.

[GIRLZROC219]

@14Rawan i don't understand why other people don't read/watch your videos/books! i mean you write niley fan-fics right? well like 65% of nick fans are team niley so i don't see why you don't get more views. i myself are a nelena fan (not that i don't like niley) but ima read your others fics too cuz im kewl like dat XD lol

[14Rawan]

@GIRLZROC219 I do one Niley and one Nelena ( I had a poll on the Nelena one between harpielday and another friend, which is why it's Nelena) and i would love to see your feedback on my other stories :D thank you.

[annieluvtaylena]

LOVE LOVE LOVE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

[swim4pilot]

cant wait for more

[harpielady99]

good job

i knew u will do grea

i guess i left it in the right hands

[14Rawan]

@harpielady99 thank u ,means a lot to me :D

[Crazymakeupfanatic]

loved it!! plz post more! :)