ahh, you're just a copy of all the candy bars I've ever eaten, hee hee and of course, I mean this with love, good job! and that's his real voice, right? It's just how I imagined it. Best wishes and I hope dear ol' Richard continues to inspire you, he sure indeed is a muse for me! Cheers!
i really do love what you have done with this poem. check out what i made for another favorite brautigan poem.
circlesandlines 3 years ago
My favorite poem of his. His constant subject, the uselessness of time.
mikerehling 3 years ago
ahh, you're just a copy of all the candy bars I've ever eaten, hee hee and of course, I mean this with love, good job! and that's his real voice, right? It's just how I imagined it. Best wishes and I hope dear ol' Richard continues to inspire you, he sure indeed is a muse for me! Cheers!
mushroommeg 3 years ago
Lovely done...this poem is truely one ovelooked goodie among his time-poems.
kagokass 3 years ago