Added: 4 years ago
From: xxxSunbeamxxx
Views: 1,558
Sort by time | Sort by thread (beta)

Link to this comment:

Share to:

All Comments (43)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • Well written and well read! : )

  • @im1lostdragon  Thank you!! :)

  • Thanks for including this in your poetry playlist, Chuck - I appreciate that! I am so delighted you love this poem :) Very best wishes to you and your family :) Sunbeam :)

  • many thanks Jill...I've sent this to Emma...I know she will love this as I do

    Gary xx

  • Hi Gary :)...I had seen Emma's Channel after that one email you sent and saw she liked unicorns...I nearly sent her this - then decided that was too pushy from a total stranger...lol! I am glad that you liked it enough to share it with her...:)

    Thanks for watching, Sunbeam :)

  • thank you Sunbeam.....don't be afraid to say hello to Emma sometime....:--) she loves hearing from people around the globe

    I love your poetry & would dearly love to hear & see more

    kind regards Gary :--)

  • My daughter and I love Unicorns. I used to remember drawing and dreaming of Unicorns when I was a child. When you have time, Rent the movie, LEGEND. Its very mystical and enchanting.

    I sense you are very much a "Celestial being..."

    Very beautiful..

  • Hi Chuck :) I will make a note of that movie - I love enchanting things :)

    And thank you for the 'celestial being' comment.....I take that as a compliment )

    Sunbeam :)

  • Marvelous!

    Danny

  • Thanks Danny! :)

  • Fascinating How you came up with this Poem, I wonder was it maybe the begining of a dream? Like your other listeners have said your voice is perfect for this, and the way you read it seems very narrative. wonderful!

    jason

  • Hey - I just sent you an email!! :)...I havent watched this in ages and just noticed a mistake on my video!! I put 'taught' instead of 'taut'...for the Unicorn's skin...sigh!!..

    I dont know what the image was - my poems usually come in a picture first - like a persistant image in my head that 'has to be heard' somehow. Magical - just like the Unicorn :)

    So pleased you like my poetry as well as my singing :) I really appreciate you watching :)

    Sunbeam :)

  • That was just beautiful..

    Pººhßear

  • Jill, you have such a soothing voice and a handle on poetry without doubt. Have you ever considered doing a children's book or video? I can easily see kids packed around the TV watching and listening to you guiding them on a mystical journey through enchanted woods. You have inspired me to pick up my pen again. I wish you well. Pardon me while I sub, please don't deny me THAT pleasure at least. Take care.

  • Hello :) I have some ideas for some children's stories and did enjoy reading to my son when he was smaller! But my priority is to get a poetry book published first, along with working on another book about when I took my son backpacking around the world when he was 4/5 years old...lots to go at - just finding the time to work on these projects!

    TY for your support. Oh - do pick up your pen again - and please share some perhaps on YT with us all :)

    With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • And now, I also have been touched. Thanks! 5*

  • Hi Tom :) You are very welcome....the magic is always there - we just need to reach out and invite it in :)

  • brings me to "the last unicorn" with mia farrow and jeff bridges (cartoon)

    thnks for the sweet memory...they pop us less and less as we age, it seems

  • Glad it resurrected something for you in some way :)

  • yes, brings me back to doodleling faeries and such on my school book covers!

    I hope you see many more, poems in your mind, and unicorns,

    Regards,

    Morgan

  • That was Beautiful!

  • Hello - glad you liked this dreamy little poem of things magical :)

  • Beautiful poetry! Thanks for posting!

  • iCE2sKY: Hello!! Thanks very much for stopping by! Glad you liked it!! Sunbeam :)

  • Ive commented "No pixie am i" And I really do love your poems, im making this one up as I go, Ill pick a random topic now.. Enjoy sunbeam :)

    Tiny feet dance along tiny wings of the butterfly,

    Swooping and soaring through the sweet scented roses,

    Tiny smiles widen when the Butterfly dives, then ends it in a glide.

    Tiny fairy children sweep off to fairy beds,

    where fairy mummies and daddies, fluff the moss pillow beneath their heads.

    Fairy eyes close aft a day of surf and winged soar.

    -S.

  • Hello again :) Now that is just beautiful...precious teeny tiny images that make the reader bend closer to get a closer look!!...I did enjoy...thank you :)

  • Reminds me of preconscious, that mystical state just before sleep where vivid imagery comes to me at times.

  • Yes - you are right!! I was trying to nap when I wrote it...maybe I was more in that state!! Thank you for taking the time to come see my magic Unicorn!! :)

  • yes sunbeam, preconcious is a place of creative wonder- but it is rare for me now. the random imagery is so wonderful and I want it back so much. your poem reminded me of that special place and I thank you for that.

  • You are very welcome - I am so glad you got something from this...it makes me very happy :)

    Never give up, you know. If you accessed that place once - it is yours somewhere forever and I am sure you can go there again. Hold the thought. Expect the best. I wish you that dreamy creative state once more :)

  • Thank you Sunbeam- I will do some deep breathing and self hypnosis tonite and look for some Unicorns!

  • I've been swept away to sleepy thoughts in my daydream mind. :)

  • Ahhh....good. Is it feeling safe and peaceful where you are now?....:)....I hope so!! Happy Thursday, sir :)

  • a most perfect night for the magical unicorn flight you just granted me sweet sunbeam :):):) i wish you journeys o'joy always as you dream~~~dare~~~dive!!! :):):)

    you'll NEVER walk alone!!! you'll NEVER fly alone!!! :):):) i am on cloud 17 right now, john :):):)

  • Hi!! What a pretty comment :) I do so love magical flights - in imagination, our dreams - by night and by day....we can always find peace there :) Thank you for stopping by!!

  • On wanting stage of lucid mind Your unicorn now plays its flight And e'er we pass by gentle heart On vision born of light within Now swept afar Each silv'ry star Revealed anew by lovers eye This magical beast Of which you speak M'Lady 'Tis your pen
  • A tribute to you, Sunbeam, for all your readers

    You must now read your own poem

    Through our eyes

    With unicorn as metaphor

  • Truly beautiful. I had not seen it that way before. Now when I sit to write - I can imagine soaring amongst the stars a little :) Thank you for such a beautiful contribution to this poem and its interpretation - it has taken my breath away a little :)

  • Hello sir :) I read this not long after you posted it - and it jolted me somewhat, so I wanted to let it immerse in my soul a little before replying.

    It is just beautiful and your choice of words was eerily echoeing of something important to me that I am mostly certain you know not of. It was a somewhat haunting experience to read it.

    Sometimes we touch people deeply with our words unknowingly. You did! Thank you for being part of life's magic!! :)

  • yes lol time is a funny thing on yt indeed,

    im often behind on viewing these poetry gems,

    but i get there in the end ;)

    im very fine this day jill i trust you are also

  • Yes - doing well thanks!! Putting the finishing touches to that video finally showing the 'face behind the poetry'...lol..You know how that traumatises me somewhat!!...:)

  • Yes i know the feeling, i have no idea why im on youtube lol I am extreemly nervous on camara every time.

  • so imaginative and soothing a collection of images you created with your words

  • Hi Adam...Hope you are doing well :) It seems a while ago I posted this one now - my second poem up here!! But it wasn't long really - time is funny on YT!! Thanks for peaking in at this one!! :)

  • u read this very well jill. it lovely. i fell like its something from a movie.

    michael

  • Hi Michael...Thanks very much for watching and commenting!! It was like a little movie in my mind that made me get up and write this out! Have a wonderful day, sir :)

  • Dear Jill,

    What a Magical Poem

    you have written and spoken with your Beautifull Voice,

    from out your HEART.

    Thank you.

    greetings Angeline

  • Hello Angeline :) Lovely to see you. Glad you found my little magical Unicorn hiding on my Channel...:)...I really appreciated your comment! Thank you. Sunbeam xoxo

  • Thank you sincerely for adding this beautiful poem and video as a response to my Unicorn piano piece. Exquisiteness:)

    Regards,

    Angelo

  • You're very welcome :) It just seems to belong there somehow, in some magical way :) xoxo

  • Soooooooo beautiful. The words, the images,your voice. Stars just aren't enough to express how I feel about this poem. Love it !!!

  • And you just made it more beautiful, by adding such a magical comment!! Thank you so much....it gives me a lot of joy that it touched you so :)

  • Beautiful.. :)

    Your images are perfect too !!

    5 stars.

  • Thank you Anindya!! Glad you liked my little magical Unicorn :) A journey to the stars is only a leap of imagination away!! :)

  • Beautiful!! I really enjoyed Unicorn Magic The Poem was very meaningful and spiritual,and I do believe in magic!,nice Poem! Sunbeam!!your voice is so relaxing to mind, I also like the art work of the Unicorn ,Great Clip!! 5 stars***** From Marc Jones Vocalist....Los Angeles.

  • Thanks Marc! Here's to magic!! :) Love Sunbeam xoxo

  • Another truly beautiful poem! I can't wait to see more of your videos, you have such a talent for making words stunning! Tamara xx

  • Thank you for your kind words.....I think the Unicorn himself adds a bit of magic to this one somehow...;)

  • He does, you are so right! I will enjoy watching any videos you post in the future! Let me know when you have posted your next one! Tamara x

  • I love unicorns! this is such a lovely description! it's like being there myself! Please post more!

  • Thank you :) I have lots more on the way - ones written a while ago and ones that 'pop' up on an ongoing basis like this one!!...Just finding the time to prepare and post - but slowly and surely they will appear...like little flowers budding to create a lovely, blooming Sunbeam poetry garden on here, I hope..:) Thank you for all your feedback Janeczka - you are a great encourager. Truly. I really appreciate it xoxo Happy Sunday!!

  • Beautiful. I like your reading and your poems too. Carry on Jill. Warm Hugs and 5*

  • Thank you, my new friend :)Your encouragement means a lot to me xoxo

  • My favorite thus far, I am continually amazed by your talent.

  • Thank you!! I just love writing poetry!! :)

  • You read this beautifully, and I love your accent :-) I have a poem about a unicorn that I've recorded the reading of, but can't figure out how I want to visually illustrate it. It's darker though and not as hopeful.

  • Thank you for your kind words :) Oh...I hope you find a way to bring your poem to life visually in a way you find just right! I am really quite stunned at how much even just a little bit of visual imagery can add to a poem....I wish the very best for yours! xxoo

  • Wonderful :) warm huggs filled with much light and warmth upon you and all your family I really enjoyed :) xoxox

  • Your enjoyment brings me happiness :) Thanks for stopping by to hear about my little magical unicorn xxoo

  • O that is perfection. Your channel, everything is just perfection Miss. I love this little unicorn poem. I am exceedingly fond of White Unicorn's especially.

  • Glad you liked it. Have a nice day :)

  • This was beautifully written and read, Jill! Unicorns are brought to life through poetry like this =)

  • Thank you, Jennifer. Any things that keep the magic in our worlds are special things, I think! Have a wonderful day.:)

  • Another beautiful poem xx

  • Thank you kindly, Miss :) I had fun making this little video :)

Loading...
Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more