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  • my minds set, on this rap game i'm the best yet, deadset, next bet up in flames, got the fame droppin names on track only the wack ones, cats dumb that's none, other then the fat one krum one, get some skill bro, no that's not ill flow moving on for real though i'm done it's ten zero peace outa ya fuckin weirdos
  • nigga has "ADD ME ON MYSPACE" in the description box tho.. lmfaooo

  • yall check out my version to this so far i got 4,502 views on it but i changed the name of the song to last winter

  • come winter,come cold winter,waiting for my last wish,so numb i cant feel my finger,

    lost my inner thoughts to the sight of my mind beginin to rot,

    walking,watchin the crsytal flakes flow around like my mistakes,that i throw around,

    hope,no one notices that i have no sweater,and my body is on a breakin point,

    if i wouldve held you close,and told i loved you,mhmmm there would be no point,

    winter comes as fast as you go,you rip the cold,frostbittin heart out,

    and dropped it in the ice cold snow,

  • winter comes,but it seems like it will never go, im cursed,with this curse,that will never dispurse, my reasonin is faded, my eye sight,is blurry, my hands are shakin, and my veins arent pumping in a hurry, you said its my fault i ended like this, i guess situations get messed up and turned into stupid shit, i try to side step the problem but i just dont know what to make of it, im srry..i get lost in my own words,i call it black magic, where the dust turns grey,and leaks sad shit-by eli
  • Aye yo,

    I made a track to this not to long ago.

    Im not tryna spam this guys page with wack,

    shit and i mean he did make the beat.

    Im just tryna promote good music and something i believe in...my music.

    So if you could please take the time to check it out id appreciate it. And like this comment so it can get to the top if you did.

    Feel free to check out my other music too.

    ONE LOVE!

    -DoughP!

  • @uGnoM3 yall check out my version to this so far i got 4,502 views on it but i changed the name of the song to last winter ima cjeck out ur stuff just now

  • ay whats good bro ima artist as well and i produce and latley ive bin tired of producing so i wanted to ask is ight if i use this ill give you full recognition -klewless

  • @krik0r be my guest

  • While the winter comes//

    The summer still creeps at night//

    Seeing the green grass turn to yellow terrain aint right//

    I don’t understand why my air Jordan`s aint take flight//

    My mood is miserable//

    Nothing seems too alright//

    If you can’t understand//

    Well pardon my miss-confusion//

    I have mislead thoughts//

    You can call me an illusion//

  • I love this so much.

  • I fucking love you! I'm using it, I'm going to credit you all the way!!!

  • NICE

  • female Gettin it in......Keekee Starr....Out Atl now....check her out...she looking for producers..........

  • I think this is truuee art, ma bro, for real, mind if use this for a song/project?

  • perfect...almost a shame to rap over it.

  • Dam. eyes locked tight across the room the nights drawn out. no cartoon Blast tunes. swoon to a full moon fall like the month of june. charismatic. lip lockin is our habbit see the reality to kiss is to fly like gravity fly like a parrot. spread love and havoc for those that lost love but lust for love addicts oh shit. gone done it again leaked my mind out through the dam pen. rapping tactically actually im killin lyrics with a hook so cold like a winter blizzard. - ChillinIT
  • when i create a download file for this the quality gets fucked up can you personally send me this file????

  • I made this into a track and posted my response to this video!

    Im hoping everybody could check it out and check out the rest of my videos!

    -DoughP!

  • @uGnoM3 loved the track man

    

  • @mark111491 Thanks Bro! I'd love it if you could subscribe! The "YoungHeart.OldSoul." mix tape will be here August 26th so stay tuned!

  • OMG. . . . .........YOUR BLESSED . .

    IM USEN ILL EMAIL YOU WHEN IM DOWN....SEND ME YOUR EMAIL

    ~dutchee

  • Winter came with a cold harsh hand It left me broken-hearted Wishing I had never started Had to many dreams, so we parted Sometimes I think that it was heartless You are the one person I cannot be apart with When our hearts split, Is when I realized the hard shit But your eyes glistened just like the stars lit But I sold my soul to the devil On the black market So put your money where your heart is And let me get a chance... Cuz this Devil is only asking for last dance
  • SUBSCRIBE AND SPREAD THE WORD IF U CAN RELATE WITH THE MESSAGE COMMENT, RATE AND PLEASE BE A CRITIC ONLY GOIN TO GET BETTER.

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  • Love the remake... I used the instrumental on a small project I did. I gave you credit on here! Keep up the great work! check it out my page if you want to hear what I did! Thanks!

  • U DID GREAT FOR A REMAKE

  • you made this instrumental more deeper than the original i want to use this for a project. can i ?

  • @TheOfficalpyro yeah, fine with me bro. i only ask you show recognition for the beat creator, being me: lilseinmadeit

  • @lilseinmadeit Mind if i use it for a mixtape bro? This is fire.

  • your sick been lookin for dis for too long

  • i think i like this remake better than the original.

  • very good remake man...very beautiful bruh.

  • fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­ee

  • I love these type of smooth beats,I get loose on shit like this.

  • Ur smile got me dem mad/ were above the stars/ ur love so extravagant for u ill give heart/ eyes is so amazin got me singin bruno marz/ i will always be by ur side/ only if u wit me to ride or die/ i hope this last for ever i thx god dat ur mine

  • RESPONCE: I seen her eyes gazin, she so hot its amazin. Im gonna stay blazin, then she smiled and i was dazed then. I moved to the temptation, she knew like she was waitin. We spoke, shared a glass, she had class and she was diggin my swag. I was glad to keep it goin, i just felt her flow and it was so natural. My body was lifted by her glow so i had to let her know. We shared thoughts and then i let her go with plans to see her 2marrow.

  • can you spend me dwnload link

  • I Gotta Winter Soul

  • The download doesn't work on that site.

  • till then we will see i will be waiting,recognize I'll never leave my all is saved dont disbelieve I'll always be here even thru midsummer eve...Ho!

  • As I'm moving along I see this boy wit a new swag,dont like to brag,to him I'll tag I will never detach,understand him with composition thoughts,never an awkward pause,my heart is a rock engraved by him,never felt such a passion temptation,a magical creation,evrynite I sleep I'm haunted wit clarification,that he might be just a dream,dat in my heart lies a stream to my mind it leads then it deceives,but I do believe,he is all I see,till when we meet,if its meant to be then its meant to be,

  • made sure he had his request,cause I thought I met da 1,da real 1,now I'm stuck wit a stain,I always rub out,experiment with the pain I found a way out...HO!

  • I met this boy late March early April,I called him a bunch of times wasnt able,2 get a text I wasnt shameful,but it was painful,4 da fact wit him I wasnt careful,met him at sa club we had a good time,it was a good shine we danced all nite & our lips combined,far from my expectation,thru my whole body I felt a vibration,a new sensation,sang to me all nite made me feel rite,line of sight my heart ignite,flames burnin he was so polite,did not think twice,follow his advice did everything precise

  • cold ass snowflakes on the dashboard,

    turn the keys over start the iggnition , there was a warm fire in my heart, but my yous was missing, looking over my shoulder tryin to get a kiss in,

    warm fires got us thinking,

    it got us drinkin, the cold petrone we sippin,

    cold Canadian snowflakes hit the window pane, i hate to see you leave and you would say the same, cant believe in, that you leaving, especailly after you came twice, a frame for you perfect picture would be a sight ,

  • I love this beat

  • i met this real cute girl right around winter time,

    she has me here thinking is this a good time, and most of a is she a benifical dime. but dam did she look so fine, but dam did she look so fine.

    i wanna learn to appreciate her beauty so ill take my time.

    its funny cause she has me sitting here writing down this rhymes.

    her natural body curves just blow my mind, but her real inner beauty Lise deep inside.A quick glance at her eyes makes me feel alive inside,

  • @MrFreelancer4

    aaah shitt that was a killa!

    Proper =D

  • .......

    

  • damn. so the love is all gone. im sittin here wonderin y im feeling so strong. told me that im emotional naw that is just the liquor. if i drink anymore i feel pain will kome quixker. so i just roll a swisher. light 4 mi niggas. 7 blunts later still feelin bitter. its a cold world mi nigga so uu betta grab a sweater.emotionally im fuxked. but gawop wise im betta.

    -Masikur

  • But its all good, I'm hibernating for the season rest in peace; No dead-woods creaking. Leaves scattering away from around my region, blowing into my face clearing all this vision. All I wanted was to let you know, I am not caring for all these reasons. One you suited to the fact I became all this decent..

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  • I talked to a good friend who think she might be pregnant

    Its funny how the winter teaches you lyfe's adolescents

    I think about my life preparin anotha session

    Tellin my cousin roll dat tight and start dat misty session

    16 and my lyfe advices yo descresion

    Flowin with the wind why its a blessin

    I tell my new chicks baby im jus Split Dimensions

  • this song is amazing

  • My currents status is pending, sick of tired of living in this shit moving and renting, writing and venting, yeah.... its all getting so heavy thats it coming with a bloody machete, Jason or Freddy, doesn't matter cut your ass up like confetti, bitch im ready to pay the price, cause im only 16, and ive been in more heart aches then your whole entire life

  • @blackjoshmc don't worry about it

  • now this is like the old skool...do ur thing Drake

  • To be honest this beat is dramatic and I want to change it up cuz Im ecstatic had enough off the bullshit so i'm throwin it in the cabinet and hate if you wanna hate discrimate or say whatever it is you want to say this shit is icing on a cake another rhyme on a mix tape so let it play
  • in the city whos comin with me

    the sun is shinin all haters history

    the patrons crystaling

    It's a stress free day

    in californ-I-A

    only kush I blaze

    bitches diggin every word I say

    thank you for puttin this smile on my face~

  • AMAAAAZING remake

  • i wake up in the morning tryna find a way to one day be important, anyone who hears me or reads my lyrics say man you should be recording, and this is just a portion, it might worsen if i put my work in cause lately ive been dreaming bout making a fortune, but unfortunately im still stuck here killing other rappers beats, when i should i be making own im only 16 years old almost an adult pass the dope i cant cope hand me a rope this time i might actually choke cause im tired of being broke

  • so many dirty tales i can't express in this piece

    of the plenty dirty tails had sex with in sheets

    so many hurt females i left upset when i"d leap

    to my feet after the wild shit in bed was complete

    you know the natural order, we pretend to be sweet

    the chats are shorter, leavin the room a mess every week

    even the ones who spoke about their past like how they fell fast

    and will never again, turn out to be unexpectedly weak

    to all the playas leavin maids pissed in embassy suites

  • i spit cold like snow flakes/ but i admit there won't be no hate/ rounding third almost at home plat/ Im close, but i still dont know the tast/

    i wana be rich i wana be famous/ all of us do hu can realy blame us?/ so wild, hu can realy tame us/ only time, its been doin that for ages/

    colder now than ever before/ hearin homis from way bak nock at my door/ now that its finaly freezin they just want a place to thaw/ ah

    so fuck em i dont em now/ so clos i am homeward bound/ only movin forward now/

  • @yourmomsfavproducer rewarded with the crown

  • did you remake this?

  • No 2 snowflakes are ever the same, but they both melt/ They can claim indifference, but they both felt/ That spark i ignite it like a Bic lighter/ Make club owners work pull all nighters/ And everybody wanna know where the room at/ That there was even a room- safe to assume that (ha)/ Like a cold glass of Skyy Blu they pourin in/ I make somebody's life change every place that im tourin in/ No concerts and flyers its free- pay attention/ My flow got depth- multi dimensioned.../ 903
  • Im working on this beat now..i should be finished by 2nite

  • If you could find 'Thrill is Gone' I would appreciate it so much.

  • The worlds like winter, it's a cold place Need some new flavor cuz i gotta an old taste livin' in the mansion but damn I miss my place I have trouble looking at my face what am I turning to? It's like I've almost made it but I'm burning through racing to the finish but I'm starting to diminish vitamin water couldn't replenish what am I losing? Is it my mind? The watch said it's my time, I just need a second
  • is this on mp3?

  • you farkn genius :D

  • can u email me the mp3 of this cuz youtube ruins the quality of ur remake? jaykasaiip@gmail.com

  • yea i swear its colder than you could imagine,lifes hard,on this long walk so far into the abyss,it wouldnt be unusual ta spot a Blair witch,scared,riddled with fear,in ya heart you feel kno one cares,but i make this music to be ya flair,ya beacon of light,its 2010 now and the worlds plummeting,valcanos eruptin,sink holes the size of meteors freefall deep,oil bein spilled into the gulf while idiots point fingers and grill,shits real just know i kno its cold but u kno i got a lil warmth my dear

  • @Mike757Fiory can i hve that

  • Summers just about beginning Tell me how it always feels I'm losing Even when I'm mostly winning This shit is so confusing but you're gonna catch me grinning, It's hard to feel whats goin on, With all these different women, And i don't wanna be the type, that even when I know its wrong, I'm straying from the right, Somebody help me see the light, Girl I'm praying for a night with you, I know we've had our ups and downs But I still wanna live my life with you.
  • this is a great remake yo

  • Awesome remake!!!!!

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