Dragon Ball: The Legend of The Seven Demons Episode 3, "Your True Past"

[DeHeerMinecraft]

Well making this takes alot of time! So he should get a "like"!

[shawnajeinga]

why did they clone goku i read the dialouge and i don't understand

[leottje]

Make more eps

[nickhaynes2005]

this is so incredibly lame

[yamisupersaiyan]

april fools? im glad you love it

[maadd100]

i dnt get whats with the " HMM (Fast)"

[yamisupersaiyan]

like affirmative, right. You know when someone says you got it?

and they'll nod and make a noise

[XxxBardockShinigami]

wait what does the line hmmm (fast) means I don't really get it

[ssj10goku12]

i think u made a mistake at 6:18.. it says Goku: hey goku, good luck out there, i have a feeling it wont be easy

[babysal23]

he's right its suppose to be gohan

[yamisupersaiyan]

well its gohan saying that

[DBZJojo]

fight was decent, overall it was ok but i exdpected more from someone who critisced me. 4/5

[DBZJojo]

you think ur something special, i will tell you.

do not abbreviate a persons name, it dimmers the professional feel of an episode also do not have two people talking in each line split it up so its easier to read.

text reflecting emotions is very good.

plot appears original so far but try to add more variety on minutes of text, camera views etc.

6.39 horrible transition very sudden. tapion was hit above the lookout but fight continued at the bottom?????

*continue*

[XxxBardockShinigami]

lol you were upsed at this moment, weren't you?

[dman9314]

interesting your story is very original itl be good to see how this progresses keep this up

[Simgr101]

this was great, kick ass. If Goku is the chosen does that mean gohan is as well?

[CtCnJB28]

Many people don't like filler episodes, but i do. I like learning more about the plot, and your plot is orginal, and awesome. Really good ep, nice fight, good job man.

[rendetsku]

nice man goku is pretty strong in this

[ssj2unlimited]

awesome job, man u make episodes fast and what waz the song when goku fights tapion and i cant believe gohan is a clone of goku

[ksone714]

nice spoiler thx alot

[movie1321]

i think you have to stop havign the same line hmm(fast )over and over again but dude this is a kick ass fanfic. I was upset in the beginning casue i was lie kgreat gohans not a saiyasn, he'll be kicked out of this fanfic in no time then it says hes a clone i was liek what the hell?> I didin't see that coming. Good job if you keep this up you'll be o ntop justr have text bigger and keep up with the suprises