archipelago a.k.a israel created the 3d in his free time using sketchup and windows media maker. feel free to critique it (and you do not have to be nice)
i wouldnt want to be mean. This is meant as constructive criticism. Camera work, lighting, materials and composition need work. but then i know your only working with sketchup
Oh come on Michael.. Is that all you got? I didn't spend close to 1/10 of my life in architectural studio and critiques to accept a brief criticism. I welcome more of your opinion and advice. lookign forward to them.
more or less the lighting is standard lighting. id advice research into the new lighting simulations out there. standard lighting tends to be flat shaded with no real variations in the shadows. I believe i saw a fake reflection in the front window, every material in life reflects. different glossyness and intensity but they all do. The camera is kinda jerky in its transitions from one move to the next and the compositions are more of someone with a steady cam than a piece of art
I agree with you. In the first instance I will make the time to study lighting and materials. I suspect i will have time after the first half of the year to improve my visual communication skills. I must also admit that the story board needed some development actually you hit the nail on the head with regard to "steady hand with cam" I will think of a concept, more so relate the cinematography with design concept of the dwelling.
who did the 3d?
DaElfer 1 year ago
@DaElfer
archipelago a.k.a israel created the 3d in his free time using sketchup and windows media maker. feel free to critique it (and you do not have to be nice)
izmarchipelago 1 year ago
@izmarchipelago
i wouldnt want to be mean. This is meant as constructive criticism. Camera work, lighting, materials and composition need work. but then i know your only working with sketchup
DaElfer 1 year ago
Oh come on Michael.. Is that all you got? I didn't spend close to 1/10 of my life in architectural studio and critiques to accept a brief criticism. I welcome more of your opinion and advice. lookign forward to them.
izmarchipelago 1 year ago
@izmarchipelago
more or less the lighting is standard lighting. id advice research into the new lighting simulations out there. standard lighting tends to be flat shaded with no real variations in the shadows. I believe i saw a fake reflection in the front window, every material in life reflects. different glossyness and intensity but they all do. The camera is kinda jerky in its transitions from one move to the next and the compositions are more of someone with a steady cam than a piece of art
DaElfer 1 year ago
I agree with you. In the first instance I will make the time to study lighting and materials. I suspect i will have time after the first half of the year to improve my visual communication skills. I must also admit that the story board needed some development actually you hit the nail on the head with regard to "steady hand with cam" I will think of a concept, more so relate the cinematography with design concept of the dwelling.
izmarchipelago 1 year ago
I love this project - can't wait to see it complete. Only problem I have is it's urban ... vid makes it seem like it's on an isolate site
architechnophilia 2 years ago