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[foreversisters24]

LOL. Selena is feeling horny :)

[XjobroLUVAH1409X]

please no drama!

there should be a lil of drama before the baby comes and they fix it up cuz of the baby

[lovejonas90]

they are jus so darn cute and adorable

[volture12]

the story confesses me. what did nick mean when he said he was angry when he raped gomez

[Massiekurwannabe]

1. HELL YEAH! I want 1 more break up (lol)

[Paramorefreak0594]

geez selena is extremelyy hormonal

[ElizabethRachelDare]

1. after the baby.

2. the baby has to be nicks.

3.i havent noticed any.

[xkimberlay17x]

amazing!

[splexy901]

lol loved it<3

1.maybe after the baby

2.i haven't seen joe in the story :D:P

3.lol i was way to into the story to notice :P<3

[UltimateLuvStories]

Please let the baby be Nicks

[blueberrypudding]

drama - maybe but let them be happy first....have the baby and let it be nicks.

mistakes - nope :D

[xxDemixSelxx]

omfg amazing!

im in love wid nick haha

i always say that xx

[Xilovejb00X]

1. let her have the baby first. unless she's not that far along.

hahaha...whoa there selena.

[miasofie87]

Please let the baby be Nicks, thats all i ask for...

And what you write is perfect so dont change a thing :))

[Magnificent408]

ohh slena u so nasty!

[ILoveMiley1213]

1) Let the Baby Come before any drama please!

2)The baby should come, but they shouldn't break up ever!!!

3) I didn't notice any.

Sorry if I forced this on you.... I didn't really want to give my opinion, your doing just fine in the sorry haha

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

forced what? lol.

i love my readers opinions so nothing is forced on me.

[ILoveMiley1213]

Okay, I'm just making sure, I didn't want to offend you.

[xoselenaloverxo]

woah! lol selena gets feisty!

1.not yet, let them be a happy couple =] lol

2.whatever u choose =]

3.didnt saw any

[jadoretuX0]

love ittt!!! but that doesnt suprise me =)

[jmnelena]

1. let the baby come first

2. hmmm... I wanna see a love trianlge with nick selena and ??? [but a boy]

3. none that i noticed, but i'm a very bad speller myself xD

AWESOME EP!

[hshorsegirl1]

MORE MORE MORE!!

1. yeah like maybe she has twins or taylor comes back!! haha just dont let them get split up or the baby dies!

2. idk you post right now??

3. non that im awear of!! lol!

[wendYRoxx25]

the only thing I want is for that baby

to NIcks! haha

loved it as usual!

your awesome just thought I should let you

know :]

[lewisclarktrackstar]

I love it!! Like a lot maybe a teency bt more drama

[ladiicrazii234]

Selena is fiesty ;) I'm sure Nick enjoyed it

[lipstick4kisses]

Loved itm

1.Not yet.

2.Not sure,

3.SelTwiDemJBMil244. she got it all except dfor your not supose to put a d after use , its good the way you typed it

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

so, no D? lol. okay, let me go edit it again. lol.

Thanks.

[lipstick4kisses]

:D no problem

[Magnificent408]

Amazing. That was so cute.

[jazzershmazzer25]

wow selena sure knows how to get what she wants lol...

1. a little wouldnt hurt

2. taylor comes back! ..what happened to him anyways? lol. ooh or a scene where they get into a big fight and then its all awkward for two seconds until they randomly start making out. haha lol jk :P

3. i didnt see any.

[JoeDemiJemi2gether]

1. AS LONG AS SEL DOESN'T LOSE HER BABY Then Sure

2. Not Sure up to u

GREAT EP so CUTEE

[SelTwiDemJBMil244]

1. nope. i don't like drama.

2. no idea. :/

3. the part when she has the, uhm, mood, it says suckled. isn't it supposed to be sucked?

when he was staring into her eyes, it's, "pulling me into her trap."

when he said she was feisty when pregnant, its supposed to say, "i joked, stroking my hand against her chest."

i think?

AND, you're missing a d when it says, "I just wasn't use to this Selena."

sorry. i'm just a really huge grammatical freek :)

i love nick here x]

[Xox0NelenaLove0xoX]

hehe, thanks.

-I meant to use "suckled." It's almost the same as sucked. The only difference is suckled refers to a more hungrier sense.

-I changed "pulling me into her trap" and added the "D" to used. Thanks =D

-Lol, you have such a dirty mind. He was actually stroking his own chest, but I see where your mind is at. Hehe. XD

[SelTwiDemJBMil244]

i didn't know about the word suckled... :)

no prob.

like i haven't heard that one before ;]

[BritinieMartinie]

hmm...i'd say hold off on the drama until baby jonas is born. then put all the drama you want in it! :)

[iLoveTelena]

1. hmm .. im not one for drama, but a little bit couldnt hurt. i dont like when she falls in love with two people and whatnot .. lol

2. aaaah... her hormones are funny (:

3. everythings good (:

(: loved it

[ElissaTita8]

I love it.

[phia103]

awesome and yea drama! like....idk taylor wants selena and the baby and will stop at nothing, i repeat, nothing to get them. or something like that.

[IHeartNickJonas1000]

I think some drama, but we appreciate love doveyness all lot more! lol!

WHat should happen??? Hmm.... thats a hard onnneee..

[JBSEL236]

love it

[RQOCJD]

yea first comment lol anyhoo aww they're so sweet :) nah no need for drama i lyk it this way lol post more soon n i don't think i saw any errors post more soon :)

[jojonasrox01]

haha those hormones of hers love it i love it its perfect