Hey Nafergo :) I can see how you are trying to make your movie seem epic and lots of great music choices in there :) I think Jake didn't read what your vid is about :S anyways I highly recommend you go check out my personal fav GW storyteller "catsillustrated" You can learn a TON from them...mainly I think developing use of emotes with those your character interacts with and maybe break down your scene even more for more detailed, clear storytelling...best wishes!
thx for the comments. Will work on that... although it's not a music videoclip I totally agree it lacks more "rythm". about the "dark" thing, you mean the image is too dark, lack of luminosity? or it's other kind of "darkness"? :)
Hey Nafergo :) I can see how you are trying to make your movie seem epic and lots of great music choices in there :) I think Jake didn't read what your vid is about :S anyways I highly recommend you go check out my personal fav GW storyteller "catsillustrated" You can learn a TON from them...mainly I think developing use of emotes with those your character interacts with and maybe break down your scene even more for more detailed, clear storytelling...best wishes!
QueenKitiara 4 years ago
thx for the comments. Will work on that... although it's not a music videoclip I totally agree it lacks more "rythm". about the "dark" thing, you mean the image is too dark, lack of luminosity? or it's other kind of "darkness"? :)
nafergo 4 years ago
*sigh*.....haven't you ever watched MTV before? Your video is set to such a slow pace. It is also too flippin dark. And....it's a bit blurrrrrrrry.
JakeBatchelor 4 years ago
This is my first non-dance video. Possible series... want to read some comments ;)
nafergo 4 years ago