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  • is selena in here

  • subscribe to me please i have one video but uploading more please watch read and comment pretty please thank you its a jonas love story

  • this is awesome =}

  • this chapater is almost word for word the first chapter of a perfect chemistry .... a published book this is playgrized

  • Bad ass Nick is hot.[; ... Why does he have to be in a gang? I mean,

    he could easily protect his family with a gun or bat in

    the house or something...not be in a gang.

  • wow......

  • OMG i love this! but does he get back together with miley? i kinda hope not. i mean i love NILEY in real life but all the NILEY stories arent good. or atleast the ones i've read. OFF TO CHAPTER 2!

  • oh this is really good

  • really good

  • wats the name of the bk u said it was like??

  • you should write a book.

  • <3 it

  • OMG that was really good

    next one please! :)

  • OMG that is so amazing.

    I bet this will be an amazing story! :)

  • Honestly post soon cause this is going to be a great series!!!

  • this is amazing :o

    great job !!

  • Wow....interesting. different from anything i've ever read. so update soon! i would love to see what happens next in this story!

  • Amazing. Truely Amazing.

    && picturing that Nick... -Woo Wayy Haute!-

  • haha well thank you.

    and yes a bad ass nick seems very hot =]

  • Totally, I had a heat-flash just picturing it! lol

  • i like it.

    I feel bad for

    Nick, and Miley, i mean

    she's in it too, so yeah.:/

  • Poor Nick! :(

    I feel so bad for him! I really do!

    But I like this so far! :D

  • i love these types of stories ! looking forward to reading the rest ! oh btw great chapter :D

  • this is like so original !!!

    i like it =]

  • this is soooo good! but i am slightly afraid of this gang, but i cant wait until you post another one!! haha

  • OMG! I Love this! and its like the book! :D LOVE IT! :D

  • haha yeah i wanna try to make it like the book...cuz its like my fav book ever! =D

  • Its my fav book too! Haha! I lovee it! I cant wait for more chapters! Keep writing! Its wonderful. :D

  • Eep! I can't wait!

  • that is AWESOME i love it so much please post

  • ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh love it

  • Seems really good! thinking i might have get a new favourite =P. you want to be a writer?

  • lol well thanks. And I'm not sure, lol I think it would be fun to be a writer but I dont think I'm good enough :P

  • you're definitley good enough =)

  • lol well thank you =]

  • awesome XD

    ilovethesoundofit :)

  • omg i LOOOVE it!!

    its so different!

    cant wait for more((:

  • I'm looking forward to read this story!, it sounds awesome!

  • looks awesome=)

    please post more soon!

  • Sounds amazing :)

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