A Poem on the Underground Wall

[fdosoro]

Well done. From one S & G fan and musician to another: Here are a couple of tips (with all do respect):

1) It's waaaay to fast (take ur time...)

2) Control the dynamics (both guitar and vocals), it sounds monotonous.

This is something S & G where masters at. You need "loud" moments and "quieter" moments.

3) Don't be nervous, loosen up and feel the music.

I hope u consider them! You will notice the difference!

Good luck!

[toobshmoob]

Nice one

[bear4cubs]

A little fast but very nice...