You clearly have the skills and the gear; you should pay more attention to details like gun impacts that are absent on his body, the blood trail on the wall that cuts off at some point (you could use some PS brushes to continue it here). The biggest problem however is the background witch clearly doesn't relate in anyway to the scene; it's proportions are wrong and it's quality is bad. I hope you don't find this offensive, they're just tips to turn good work into something great.
hey, looked pretty good but when you did that blood streak on the wall, you should have cut the shot before you got to the end since the stock you had ended with a straight edge, it doesnt look natural, or you could have masked and feathered or added more blood ontop top to extend it
Was good man, not as bad as people here whine about. Some better CC and some more realistic lighting would have made this a tonne better, and they are just minor adjustments. Keep it up (this is 2 years old though, so I bet you're a lot better now)
I like how you've done the bullets hitting effect by going faster at the moment of the hits. Not very realistic, but hey was Sin City a realistic movie?
the choroma keying was good, but the way you put yourself onto the images looked kinda fake, your movments weren't matched up very well. but still good!
bullets look terrible when they hit they are tracers when they leave the 9mm they are not tracers and no bloodsquirt muzzleflash to little and no smoke
bro. do this for like a zombie game film. you know how resident evil and shit like that made a movie for there game except in game form? if you are using the blue screen do that.
nice little film, but you need more color correction on your actors, the light cast on the actors doesn't match what's happening in the background. the blood could do with some more transparency and grit from the background showing up too. nice vid though.
@MC5Productions you can see its a picture basically coz if you look at the end of the blood smear it ends with a straight edge. Same with the smoke coming out of the gun, its a video on a black background which they take out
sorry i said song please so many times, when i left a comment, it said an error occured, so i thought it didnt leave the comment. sorry i sounded really desperate !!!
Hey. Cool movie, but constructive critisism here. At :30-:32, look at the blood on the wall and the actors head. He is slightly transparent, and the blood effect is a streight line across. Other than that good job.
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First two scenes and the one where he starts shooting should need a bit more color correction, the actor doesn't quite blend with the background. But still, great job!
so is blue screen better than green screen? cos with green screen it seems no one can key correctly. they always make the edges of the person look really shitty
@nuahsx green screen is better if used properly because with proper keying, it's easier to catch those edges that you can still see before you render.
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Looks good
Misho5z 1 month ago
why blue screen instead of green? just curios
KrazyKali69 1 month ago
its not that bad...
learyPRODUCTIONfilms 1 month ago
lol his eye moves at 0:31
ChezterG 1 month ago
oh wow im much younger than you yet i can do better wow
blazejpietraskondrad 1 month ago
i like at 0:31 how his eyes roll into the camera
jakefifa 1 month ago
Hmm, you need to take your lighting into account. The people look far to super imposed.
Smashedupcar300 2 months ago
You clearly have the skills and the gear; you should pay more attention to details like gun impacts that are absent on his body, the blood trail on the wall that cuts off at some point (you could use some PS brushes to continue it here). The biggest problem however is the background witch clearly doesn't relate in anyway to the scene; it's proportions are wrong and it's quality is bad. I hope you don't find this offensive, they're just tips to turn good work into something great.
CristianMoisei 2 months ago
Great, please, the name of the music of this video.
mauricio2000 3 months ago
@mauricio2000 Music is 'requiem for a dream', google it
Smashedupcar300 2 months ago
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Alin118118 3 months ago
Love it!
KarterudFilms 3 months ago
LOOOL !! when he slides down the wall, when he is almost out of camera line he watches right in the camera XDDD
XGhostRecon 3 months ago
lol
darkjeson55 3 months ago
Blue Screen Madness - just like Windows 98!
neoqueto 3 months ago 2
omg what is this BG sound called XD i tottaaalllyyy love it =3
Shiraimai 6 months ago
hey, looked pretty good but when you did that blood streak on the wall, you should have cut the shot before you got to the end since the stock you had ended with a straight edge, it doesnt look natural, or you could have masked and feathered or added more blood ontop top to extend it
ForTh3Wolf 6 months ago
yah and advice you should to adjust the levels that gonna make it look alike the background.
mmm... so so.
Said736 6 months ago
Was good man, not as bad as people here whine about. Some better CC and some more realistic lighting would have made this a tonne better, and they are just minor adjustments. Keep it up (this is 2 years old though, so I bet you're a lot better now)
catfishy08 6 months ago
Well attempted dude, everyone's gotta start somewhere.
thoughtgrenades 6 months ago
fg / bg lighting is a bigger problem.
they don't match very well /_\
lambiekh 6 months ago
Fail in CC!
SHPGaming 7 months ago
pro
juanelox1212 7 months ago
doesent look good at all
sexyteilchen 7 months ago
This is why even as an effects artist I avoid blue and green screen like the plague. I f*cking hate it!
turbodude555 8 months ago
the guy in black should be tinted, it would be much more realistic and a bit of contrast also wouldnt be bad, but this is very good, i like it
Spk202 8 months ago
The dude that got shot looked at the camera before he fully hit the ground lmao 0:28
DatPimpish1 8 months ago 3
the lighting was wrong
SunburntBrownie 8 months ago
nice video, like the smoke coming out of the gun at the end
heartfullofmaggots1 8 months ago
Not half bad! What blue screen program are you using?
ncc1954 9 months ago
brillian crap
1123581321enter 9 months ago
brilliant!!! i need to get a blue/green screen!
GlovedFilms 9 months ago
Excellent job
BillHassel 9 months ago
He really comes from the dead at 0:30 (look at his eyes.......)
tzav0o97 9 months ago 3
Really cool!
After3ffects 9 months ago
lol 0:31 he looks at the camera.
Zacydude96 10 months ago 3
whats the difference with Blue and green screens?
ShizzProductions 10 months ago
@ShizzProductions one is blue other is green
1123581321enter 9 months ago
bogus
BBBTUBEDMS 10 months ago
The subject was too clear.
BallpenEater 10 months ago
Looks beast
Halfmind3d 10 months ago
I like how you've done the bullets hitting effect by going faster at the moment of the hits. Not very realistic, but hey was Sin City a realistic movie?
hulchuyou 10 months ago
pretty cool
YourLBN 10 months ago
the choroma keying was good, but the way you put yourself onto the images looked kinda fake, your movments weren't matched up very well. but still good!
alexkfridges 10 months ago
good job!
TheMrLegoDude13 10 months ago
bullets look terrible when they hit they are tracers when they leave the 9mm they are not tracers and no bloodsquirt muzzleflash to little and no smoke
taserking1 10 months ago
Name of the soundtrack????Please reply!!
Baqrakiller 10 months ago
whats daaat SONG?
SyncEffects 10 months ago
It looks very Sin City or 300ish with the backgrounds, it dosent look great, but if you think about those movies, it fits in perfectly, great job!
MasterofTheFreeWorld 11 months ago
Looks like shit
JoakimJockeHansson 11 months ago 33
@JoakimJockeHansson Thanks :)
BlueCastStudios 11 months ago 28
@BlueCastStudios Exept the color filter
JoakimJockeHansson 11 months ago
@BlueCastStudios That was REALLY BAD
KayWildcat 7 months ago
@JoakimJockeHansson hahaha your a dick
bangbangboogybaby 11 months ago
@bangbangboogybaby ^-^
JoakimJockeHansson 11 months ago
@JoakimJockeHansson And not the poopy kind :D Blue cast, you rock!
RedMaskX 8 months ago
@JoakimJockeHansson No, it actually looks awesome!
supernalyd3 8 months ago
@JoakimJockeHansson u have11 subs
this dude here got 4000+
destroinst 7 months ago
@destroinst He's registered 2009, also this is different categories you can't compare
JoakimJockeHansson 7 months ago
@JoakimJockeHansson Hall Kaften :)
(min svenska inte bra)
destroinst 7 months ago
Dude I think we have the same pistol. It's a metal gun meant to shoot tiny darts at a dart board right? lol
LifeOfHero 11 months ago
lol he looked at the camera after he dies lol!
andreisabe 11 months ago
damn that was a nice key for such a ghetto blue screen set up :) i bet the shadow when he was sliding down was a bitch
shrimpinpat 11 months ago
looks good by backgroun looks fake
CasperGhost915 11 months ago
@CasperGhost915 he said he was experimenting
shrimpinpat 11 months ago
good
mppmable 11 months ago
Your video has a rather unique style. I like what you did with the backgrounds and the dreamlike quality. It set your short apart. Well done.
sgi1972 1 year ago
Fantastic, fantastic, I was impressed by the quality! :)
MrThesurprising 1 year ago
It's great! What is name of the song?
matejmuzatko 1 year ago
pause at 0:31 at the bottom of the blood smear it is going through his hood :S
omgapurpledinopop 1 year ago
This is so bad, I could die of watching it.
areallyverylongnick 1 year ago
way to use the most overused score
Slayer100 1 year ago
where did you get your backgrounds? help me please. where to get backgrounds.
kengynation 1 year ago
@kengynation just film/take a picture yourself or use google image...it doesnt matter
bradra2 1 year ago
what software did you use to key? 0.56 You can remove the shadow as well..
lbeeh89 1 year ago
all of your stuff reminds me of the look of 300
HardScopeKing 1 year ago
It looks Like a video game!
CaolanBP 1 year ago
is this good color walmart.com/ip/Mainstays-Sheet-Set-Blue-Eyes/13341756
KryptoniteAceHD 1 year ago
THERE WAS NO BLOOD ON HIS SHIRT!!!!
mello1801 1 year ago 22
THERE WAS NO BLOOD ON HIS SHIRT!!!!
mello1801 1 year ago
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TheMattProduction 1 year ago
what song is this
spencerduhbarrett 1 year ago
shit..i can tell Vegas Pro 9.0 can't pull this off >_<
kirkgunx 1 year ago
dude its pure HD
Mrcoolagainbuzy 1 year ago
bro. do this for like a zombie game film. you know how resident evil and shit like that made a movie for there game except in game form? if you are using the blue screen do that.
MegaJoe63 1 year ago
pretty cool
MMAAllegiance 1 year ago
WOW Mit welchem Programm habt ihr das gemacht???
bejschwej 1 year ago
0:21 This Is Sparta !!! xD
TheVictoryProduction 1 year ago
Dude awesome quality, but crappy editiing (ie. blue screen work).
zyphernova750 1 year ago
THIS IS MADNESS!!!!
Paralyzer1000 1 year ago
what's that music?
Ze0shaif1 1 year ago
lol at 0:30 where the dude slides down the wall, look at his eyes :D just before he disapears
MaltheF 1 year ago
@MaltheF LOL..yah...true...funny!
MrShaddowleggy29 1 year ago
nice little film, but you need more color correction on your actors, the light cast on the actors doesn't match what's happening in the background. the blood could do with some more transparency and grit from the background showing up too. nice vid though.
itsumonihon 1 year ago
:30 to :34 the kid gets down to the bottom, looks at the camera, bends down, and on top of it all, the back of his head is kinda invisible
XDsmileyDX 1 year ago
awesome!
kandycakeTV 1 year ago
how did they get that blood smear????
MC5Productions 1 year ago
@MC5Productions you can see its a picture basically coz if you look at the end of the blood smear it ends with a straight edge. Same with the smoke coming out of the gun, its a video on a black background which they take out
iamevildoing 1 year ago
sorry i said song please so many times, when i left a comment, it said an error occured, so i thought it didnt leave the comment. sorry i sounded really desperate !!!
MC5Productions 1 year ago
@MC5Productions its "requiem for a dream - theme song"
RedlightExpressMovie 1 year ago
@RedlightExpressMovie thanks!!!
MC5Productions 1 year ago
@MC5Productions ur welcome dude
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MC5Productions 1 year ago
what do you use cuz when I use keylight it also keys out som black and some of the blue stays
speedomike747 1 year ago
juu??? disculpe como se llama la cancion de fondo ???
alberthalo 1 year ago
two things are lame: there is no blow back on the gun, and smoke is moving to fast in the last scene, besides nice work
vitalisPL 1 year ago
Hey. Cool movie, but constructive critisism here. At :30-:32, look at the blood on the wall and the actors head. He is slightly transparent, and the blood effect is a streight line across. Other than that good job.
BlackLabsproductions 1 year ago
Were did you get the backrounds frm
RrRMusik 1 year ago
Great Video! I subscribed!
What camera are you using?
Ph33r3dVid3os 1 year ago
muzzle flashes a little to small
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emirkqiku 1 year ago
cool bro!
Altair4359 1 year ago
what is the name of the song
m60man12 1 year ago
AltShiftSpam 1 year ago
@AltShiftSpam Relax dude...
boblesaft 1 year ago
Muito bom seu trabalho!
CUBALIVREX 1 year ago
Constructive criticism: Liked the editing of music and clips, only problems i noticed:
- BG doesnt move with character @ 15 sec.
- 0:32 you can see where your red solid mix with AE2 textures stops (try feather a mask off the end or extending it.
But with the amount of time you spent and what you planned on accomplishing, good job. you should make it into a film short.
Ruffneck101 1 year ago
lol nice job looking at the camera dead guy
Patriotsix6 1 year ago
First two scenes and the one where he starts shooting should need a bit more color correction, the actor doesn't quite blend with the background. But still, great job!
xaxk007 1 year ago
so is blue screen better than green screen? cos with green screen it seems no one can key correctly. they always make the edges of the person look really shitty
nuahsx 1 year ago
@nuahsx green screen is better if used properly because with proper keying, it's easier to catch those edges that you can still see before you render.
Ruffneck101 1 year ago
what program did you use?
VVS3 1 year ago
fantastic cinematography
Lanooski93 1 year ago
hahah 0:31 how he look :D
XxUniqueRebelxX 1 year ago
this is nice. with what software was the blue screen animated?
betomcfly 1 year ago
NICE JOB
raulsantiago58 1 year ago
Pretty good - didn't like the background tho -still good
doogiebombom 1 year ago
This is great!
I love it.
Needs a wardrobe designer though. ;-)
redepoch76 1 year ago
nice job i got the same camera wonderful!! Editing job!
redimi2s 1 year ago
WHAT KIND OF CAMERA YOU USED?
CUBALIVREX 1 year ago 3
@CUBALIVREX Canon HV30
BlueCastStudios 1 year ago
@CUBALIVREX
GUE3VARA 1 year ago
I have that exact same BB gun
senik343 1 year ago
XD This was loltastic.
thecakeisbake 1 year ago
what kind of camera was this
KingBester 1 year ago
Nice ! :-)
ETHOB121 1 year ago
How did you do the bullet traces?
Cowboyraygun 1 year ago
Wrap the light on the shooter - he looks flat against the background.
Hope this helps
SimpleTwistFilms 1 year ago
thekingofHar95 1 year ago
i think its very well done. looks very professional:)
Ifaniproductions 1 year ago
whats the name of the music?
cortcoal 2 years ago
@cortcoal requiem of a dream
aznboi11218 2 years ago
jaj yeah, he look at the camera... good job
LopezCorona10 2 years ago
If you used colour correction front and background image would look more in the same picture.
Background look better more softer to give depth of field.
Maybe make it all black and white.
Use more light on ur chroma be eaier to key.
Ive made a video on my chanel about chromin
nigel101 2 years ago
oh no... not this song again....
Aspenly 2 years ago 41
@Aspenly lol
mrcooban 2 years ago
@Aspenly this song is , actualy, epic!
XtoneZMovies 1 year ago
@Aspenly Please tell me the name of this song...
WITNESS892 1 year ago
@WITNESS892
Its "Requiem for a dream"
elsahlino 1 year ago
0.30 WTF!!!!!
MrKatushya 2 years ago
lol yeah, at 0:30 he just looks at the camera.. MEANT TO BE DEAD.
kieranhenshall 2 years ago
aciton movie essentials 1 or 2 version?
miciok94 2 years ago
very well made
KingSkulkZ 2 years ago
you havent colourcorrected well. You can see it has been shot with blue screen
sierkkanis 2 years ago
if I was the director of this scene
I would correct the following
0:08 lol walking
0:30 blood is not the same place as in previous shot
0:30 he looked at camera
many more motion track faults but i wont explain it here
breakphysics 2 years ago
@breakphysics 0:31 the blood stain on the wall is also square and can be seen through his sweather
hmatb 2 years ago
@breakphysics blood is in the same place
mrcooban 2 years ago
It is not in same place as in previous shot.
SunnyShahFilms 2 years ago
@SunnyShahFilms d yuo mean the blood to the left or the blood on the head
mrcooban 2 years ago
I wish i could show you some of my clips
breakphysics 2 years ago
really nice,,,great job
cinnatu 2 years ago
very, very well done.
5/5 !
Reddiepoo 2 years ago
Cool!!!!
TheDarkChild696AMV 2 years ago
very cool!
btw requiem for a dream makes everything epic!
goldrunkendragon 2 years ago
Whats the font @ the beginning? 5/5
DaansMontages 2 years ago
sry just found out
ledzeppelinrools 2 years ago
I subscribed!
happyfoxproductions 2 years ago
1080p my nigga.
happyfoxproductions 2 years ago
holy shit niceee
pimpz33 2 years ago
nice one man, I liked the blending of the green screen, looked authentic, keep'm coming XD
narutofan9tf 2 years ago