Gaaah sounds like it swings, then it sounds like straight eighths... make up your mind, and use a tuner... Stick to a single style, or switch... just keep it constant. Don't play two and a half measures of swing, then three beats of straight eighths, then go back to swing for six and a quarter measures. Throws peeps off and sounds bad... just practice it a bit, you'll get it down.
Hey man its alrit, your picking hand tho, you need to practise 'raking' across the strings more like brushing across rather than individual up/down strokes when playing groups of two or more strings in one direction... it makes sweeter tone whenever you feel like one...nice rythm..peace
Give the guy a break. He's probably hasn't been playing that long. And that's not an easy piece anyway.
Needs to relax more muscles and practice until things become automatic. The musical equipment used doesn't sound like it's the best quality. Might be a factor.
Has potential. Needs to just keep at it. Evaluation by a good teacher would help. (sometimes hard to find one who's "good").
You should really concentrate more on what you're doing with your right hand as well. The picking looks a bit sparatic. Spend a few weeks just working on your scales and playing with strict alternate picking while playing as legato as possible, this will really clean up your chops.
Tuning needs fixing, timing was off, technique was shaky. What's with the solo? It sounds so forced. Like you were trying too hard to play certain passages.
Nice start, but you gotta get some more practice in. Work on your picking and fingering before you start adding in slides and vibrato.
Sorry man, your playing just seemed really awkward and out of tune. Keep working at it though!
spoofzilla 1 year ago
Oh! I just too hurry to do the music, other video is ok!
RickyTse 1 year ago
not to be rude, but can you really not recognize that your guitar is out of tune....very out of tune actually.
mcgruppian 1 year ago
Gaaah sounds like it swings, then it sounds like straight eighths... make up your mind, and use a tuner... Stick to a single style, or switch... just keep it constant. Don't play two and a half measures of swing, then three beats of straight eighths, then go back to swing for six and a quarter measures. Throws peeps off and sounds bad... just practice it a bit, you'll get it down.
ultimabass 1 year ago
Pretty much ridiculously flat. Other Than that nice :D
the5thfiend 1 year ago
my ears hurt ahhhhhh
chasemi97 1 year ago
you have talent, but you need to get a tuner.
pamirs94 2 years ago
good stuff man keep practicing and all u can do is get better
6stringsUp 2 years ago
good job!
lefeverthierry 3 years ago
good!
yunkanwu 3 years ago
Please tune your guitar.
DT570 3 years ago 15
Hey man its alrit, your picking hand tho, you need to practise 'raking' across the strings more like brushing across rather than individual up/down strokes when playing groups of two or more strings in one direction... it makes sweeter tone whenever you feel like one...nice rythm..peace
paddycaples 3 years ago
Hey! same guitar! Epiphone Sheraton right?
KindofGuitarish 3 years ago
it's Gibson ES335
RickyTse 3 years ago
Nice lines.
elvind222 3 years ago
Give the guy a break. He's probably hasn't been playing that long. And that's not an easy piece anyway.
Needs to relax more muscles and practice until things become automatic. The musical equipment used doesn't sound like it's the best quality. Might be a factor.
Has potential. Needs to just keep at it. Evaluation by a good teacher would help. (sometimes hard to find one who's "good").
gamac1 3 years ago
tune up..
burucumpa 3 years ago
You suck.
goldtop4 3 years ago
Oooops Ayyyy.
tenberge52 3 years ago
funny tuned
jAmguitar84 4 years ago
great song funny playing ja
jAmguitar84 4 years ago
try speeding it up and play with more intensity have some fun but keep it up!!!
evansp23 4 years ago
You should really concentrate more on what you're doing with your right hand as well. The picking looks a bit sparatic. Spend a few weeks just working on your scales and playing with strict alternate picking while playing as legato as possible, this will really clean up your chops.
danmit 4 years ago
Tuning needs fixing, timing was off, technique was shaky. What's with the solo? It sounds so forced. Like you were trying too hard to play certain passages.
Nice start, but you gotta get some more practice in. Work on your picking and fingering before you start adding in slides and vibrato.
spookypants24 5 years ago
a lil emotion is maybe needed, and a tuner
good tune tho, keep it up
DustinGuitar 5 years ago
no fire in it.. sorry
asd12300 5 years ago
Yes, "no" time. Hes playing it like he was totally bored.. absolutely no fire it. ..and that string is flat a little. Too bad.
asd12300 5 years ago
... bad timing brooo
kclansk 5 years ago
Nice to hear this on guitar. You do a really good job with it too.
My only suggestion is that your tuning seems a lil' out (I think it's your B string, if you're usually conventional eadgbe tuning :) )
Solo work is excellant. Rated 5.
KyleLear 5 years ago