NEW POEM "MY ADDICTION"

[poet303]

REALLY ? I AM NOT GONNA HATE, ALL I GOTTA SAY IS FIND A POWER HIGHER THAN YOURSELF, ME PERSONALLY, I BELIEVE IN JESUS. PEACE LOVE AND ALWAYS ABOUT RESPECT.

[trophie121209]

wait hold up wait a mineut how you gone talk about condoms on a girl and all that shit when you are a girl yet a lesbian you dont need a condome. just be aware of who pussy you eatin and next this fuckin poetry is ugly as hell its not pose to have that dirty ass ghetto shit in it what the hell is ya problem im not gone sit here and kiss yo ass yo shit is wacccccc. yo mom need to see this bull shit video you made you need an ass whopin for this video. tell yo mom to go get the damn belt

[TEETEE0000001]

@trophie121209 hahaha its good to have one hater. let me guess ur over the age of 25 right? thanks for the criticism though. next time make it constructive. and by the way, there are condoms for lesbians too dumb ass. and learn how to spell check. thanks bye bye.

[Misty15big]

@TEETEE0000001 I think your poem is amazing... Trophie121209 doesn't understand that poetry is art and can't appreciate quality prose:) keep writing and posting

[Mrszxstillstanding]

omg this is amazing

[BADREDPOETICSOUL1]

AMAZING..

{RED}

[ajbrown217]

nice



[kikibabii1994]

i kno im late n all bt dat wus de shyd...du me a favv n find me on fb "kientaye johnson" cuz i wnna staii updated

[trunisha09]

Hey hun man i love dat poem. shit was hellah deep! i'm also a poet i just dont have nun up here yet but when i do get sum up check me out. but yo shit go Hard you have a lovely way with words and i was feeling everything you was saying man. keep dat pen in your hand hun!(lyrik)

[TaknTokes]

amazing

[labreka88]

i think the poem was good i also think everything you think you dont have you do. people with out hearts done hurt and you have pain. and people who dont know god .. dont know him i think you know him and have you own relationship and stop allowing ppl to give you a destination for your soul only he knows.

[PoeticallyCaptured]

damn my comp, was fucking up when i tried to post my comment but nevertheless..this piece was hot!!! i absolutely LOVED it...the content was just ridiculous!! keep rockin it!

[femmeology]

yuh mad deep dat was hot and ur not going to hell cuz im gay to so we going to heaven...Kno dhat girl

[1ronda]

damn mi nigga that wuz raw for real man thats some real shit man I write 2 and people keep tellin me 2 post it but u no its people on here tryin 2 steal yo shit so therefore i just keep them 2 mi self but ma keep it for real

[ambermontease]

You have remarkable skills!!! I love this poem and also life support. If you ever come out with a book of poems I'll be the first to buy one ^_^

[kj6889]

damn girl..you have skills..really..wow

[Sponqebobrawxx]

stuff was deep love it keep it up

[kekekierra]

man dat right there that went so damn hard i gotta a tear

[mv12698]

thats mad deeep

[th0SES0lidChiCkS]

im sorry to ask bu wuts yur qender? im just a lil confused ??? & its botherinq me , bu i love tha poem =)

[p0eticfemme]

this is whats up...........im addicted

[sweetrishalove123]

that was deep

i liked it

[salemmid]

yall need to stop worrying about gender and give feedback on the damn poem

[TEETEE0000001]

thanks look for new piece coming soon

[TEETEE0000001]

puttin up a new one soon guys. thanx 4 da positive feedback.

[p0hetik]

make sure i use the condoms cause i dont wanna catch a disease..

-i see yuh

[salvation65]

thats deep

[litaw726]

Wow....that all i gotta say. But yeah that was hella good!!!

p.s. That is a SICK ASS hat haha

[stuckimakeeper]

Thats deep you got talent. I liked that a lot.

[bailey23444]

i love that poem!

[Tdawt]

i think shes a gurl cause she sounds like she talking from a female perspective

great poem, keep up the singing and stuff great work =)

[BriannaNicolex3]

this is so goodd(:

[teiri567]

is this a boy or girl can somebody tell me

[AJBESOHEARTLESS]

dat poem is dha bomb i loved i its so real

-aj

[lovemefor3v3r]

you are really good keep it up

[SuperBaddazz]

dat was hot, u deep! 4 real!! keep it up!

[Ebony1ntrue]

i like it check mines out

[BonethugLady]

i really like the poem

[900evelyn]

this is so cool i like da hole thang♥

[babygirlsiera]

OOOOOOMG Mah b3STii3 lov3 dIZZ po3m ITZ h3lla gud sh3z crying lmao gud job thankz:)

[downelink2005]

deep poem sweetheart..

[peacelovejayy]

Lmao.. (:

I love the part where you said

"They say you are what you eat and most of these nigga's eating pussy or bullshit."

that is soooo true this all is soo true so keep on girl.. yhull go far

[mszbrooklyngurl]

i like the poem yuu can be somebody if yu try

[jadab17]

luv tha poem. buh i wanna kno is u a boy or a girl. cuz ppl got me wunderin

[kauricahoward13]

yeah i fell u, u tellin the truth

[bailey23444]

wow great poem WOW lolz!

[princessof96]

its a guy or a gay girl cuz his vid birthday sex is 4 a girl

[Tierra43]

man dat made me wonna cry.....that waz real......i write poemz 2 but minez never will come 2 b dat real....keep it up n do yo thing.

[superlarisa]

is this a girl or a guy?

[thatkidB]

def. a female

[sexybaby1429]

True Shyt

Im Tellin Yhu

Yhu Is Like The Realist Person I Have Ever Seen

[valeriedoll012]

i think dis is sum spiritial shit and dis is da best poem ive heard n a long time do yo thang girl n hit me back wit n e type of comment cause i don have n e

[ttbtsm]

just take the curses out and you can publish this. The devil must be a nigger???

[itskianalee]

this is a girl....

[ttbtsm]

lol thats what i tought but hes not

[thatflymama12]

omggggosh that wqs wonderfu land log i loved it add me omgosh u are a poem writwer 4 real so nhit me up on tswaga4eva ight hlla

[Skataprincess16]

really deep and so good u.. wow im speechless i was shcoekd and it sounded like u were crying when u were reading and that was so beautiful. must of took u a long itme! GJ kudgw (keep up the good work)

[Skataprincess16]

i really felt dat and it made me think

[thatkidB]

that was hot..

[curlygyal2]

Very Deep Dhudee ;{]

Im Speechless I Mean God!!

And By The Way..

Yuee Said Niggas Alot

xD

[ParadigmCrime]

Thanks for writing that. I felt it.

[eyezstaylow1]

daymmmm son you got skills

[wolfslayervswolf]

wtf

[boold4eva]

that was the deapest shit that i heard in forever i rite too

[SH3R3N3LAQU33N]

do u know how deep u r. U need to do sumthing with that talent

[SH3R3N3LAQU33N]

this is deep. Keep on writing. I really like this

[KiKiBoo894]

That Was Like. Really Good. Speechless.

[sexxibaby006]

this is gooodd [:

[MissNevaeh17]

My sista im not tryna judge you and i can't put u in Heaven or Hell but one thing your wrong about IS GOD IS A WOMAN...READ JOHN 3;16 AND IT WILL TELL YOU HE'S NOT A WOMAN...and if you dont want to get the bible here it is....

For God So Loved The World That He Gave HIS Only Begotten Son, That Whoever Believes In HIM Shall Not Perish But Have Everlasting Life.

Read It

Know It

Don't Forget

[vetdoc2b]

First off God is a spirit, and I wouldnt be too worried about what he had in between his legs anyway. Genitalia is used for physical reproduction...God is not a physical being. GTFO and stop whining about little ish

[AlfordMatthew]

Great Poem:)

[MiamiiChick123]

i luv it its deep im 11 but can i get cho # Lol jk

[mzmooka09]

deep papii

[mrzzdimplezz1]

this poem waz real deep. it realli touched me.

[ballerballer0025]

this is really good(:

[kbaby283]

WOW THAT WAS AN AMAZING POEM>>>>>>>>>

[megisdaish]

i lyk (most niggs either eat pussy or bull shyt )nw that was real kepp it up

[loletham]

i love this poem

u talked bout a lot that most people mainly adults r to scared to talk bout even to their own kids that see those things every day so thank u

[Natasha511]

I FEEL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM THE FIRST TIME I HEARD IT.......You hit on a LOT of prevalent issues and I respect your openness to be vulnerable to present it to the world!

[trinistayzintrouble]

very gud bruh very deep

[SexiiBrown832]

that was real deep man that came from da heart keep up da work

[flyyerthanyou]

this poem is hella live ma ..

i love the place its comin from and how after every line it seems to get deeper ..

[TEETEE0000001]

THANKS

[ScoobysWifey4Lyfe69]

it was dope mami

[MyLyFeASiZ]

u go hard,1 question do u beliveve n and have any faith n GOD

[TEETEE0000001]

yeah i do. but i dnt believe that i have to go to jesus or a pastor just to talk to him

[ycity202]

damn that shit was deep homie you should read more of your poems.

[lashund44]

hey that was good ma