i like the voices and really like how you incorporated real video with your own art. at first, i couldn't quickly grasp that the black ink was part of the storyboard and was to be watched with the background, but soon enough it happens. it's like i had to skip back in the beginning to watch the intro again since i thought it was a random background. great work! =)
I felt like Dom should have a more basso, rumbling voice. But it's your choice.
Also, I had a hard time hearing what's being said. What is "batchakusee" at 3:10? At 1:00 I know the guy is warning Dom, but it sounds like "Boom. Boom. Fapacheeko in 120."
Another note, the intro is nearly 25% of your entire video.
The footage behind the animatic was a little distracting to the story. I kept having to force myself to refocus on the storyboards Other than that, it was a really cool animatic! Nice voice acting for the main character too.
i like the voices and really like how you incorporated real video with your own art. at first, i couldn't quickly grasp that the black ink was part of the storyboard and was to be watched with the background, but soon enough it happens. it's like i had to skip back in the beginning to watch the intro again since i thought it was a random background. great work! =)
thelittletoh 2 years ago
I felt like Dom should have a more basso, rumbling voice. But it's your choice.
Also, I had a hard time hearing what's being said. What is "batchakusee" at 3:10? At 1:00 I know the guy is warning Dom, but it sounds like "Boom. Boom. Fapacheeko in 120."
Another note, the intro is nearly 25% of your entire video.
Good work, though.
eclairsyum 2 years ago
The footage behind the animatic was a little distracting to the story. I kept having to force myself to refocus on the storyboards Other than that, it was a really cool animatic! Nice voice acting for the main character too.
KuroihitomiTurliwa 2 years ago
Supercool!
euscos 2 years ago
That's an amazing plot. I really like it, and the voice acting for Dom was really good. I always enjoy your short films. ^^
TheXemnas 2 years ago 2
WOW'! SO AMAZING!
aceofplymouth 2 years ago