congrats brother,this should have won all the awards.. nw I need to have pots of coffee to create something like this :) all d best for all ur future work too
The concept's predictability is revealed at the shots were the man (father) listens to both son and his wife at the same time! I mean, this info could have been delayed and utilized as a great climax, if portrayed in a very well tailored realistic manner! Hope u understood what i meant. The whole movie in a realistic manner n editing with classic cuts would have been a far better output.
really gaurav great wrk done.1st of all ur RJing was nice.direction,editing,sound were vry professionally done. and excellent work done by the cinematographer, hats off to him. specially the coffee cup movement was awesome, color tone at the begining was too good.
now i would say a bit confusing for mass audience.... ...over all "coffee meri jaan" thrill to watch. ending sound at the background was also nice,i liked it.......have great luck n great films in future.
well,to start with ...the film is simply awesome..nw d discription...the initial startin o d movie is vry well scripted..(hats off gaurav)..and what can i say abt the camera angles ..i simply love dt coffee mug shot during credits...the actors had performed very very well and nt even fr the 1 sec audience wld b distractd frm the story..ovral flm shwed the other side of he horror elements..technically 5/5,cinmt:4/5,direction4/5,editing:5/5,acting.5/5 ..keep goin..al d bst...
you mean to say only those people will understand this kind of story better who had this kind of unusual experience in past. Yeah the techniques used in the film are very good but don't u feel bollywood is starving for scripts (good stories) rather than special effects......and in the end movie is bit confusing also......4 people were watching this movie with me and had their own speculations about the real story.....it seems funny but true......
This is undoubtedly one your best creations till now, actors were spot on, Yogesh captured some nice shots, the concept & story is well integrated. Everything seems to be in place.
Now comes the tough part, though it was nice & tight till end, but ultimately i wondered if the climax could be simpler as we saw almost everyone dead at one point of time in the story, so it was a bit confusing.
Apart from this indeed a great effort, you have raised my expectations from you for your next projects.
superb film sabki bakwas mat mano....bahut acha kaam hai....lage raho all the best sab kaam actors . editor camera direction sab mast....all the best...
Its very beautifully handled concept... yes we can understand that there is a scope for improvement in everything but still i would rate its concept, editing, camera work, lighting effects and direction above the par level. Gaurav... you have done a wonderful job so keep it up.
If you want (simple) people to force hardly on their minds to understand the story..........then I will not call this a creative script.........and how many times this kind of script (where people have already died and still showing on screen) will keep repeating
Amit dead people will keep on showing on the screen till the time people like you don't experience any such thing in real... i have experience a lot of this stuff so i know... btw short films are not necessarily based on scripts they are more of concepts portrayed creatively (now-a-days bollywood biggies are not based on scripts) No offense but talk about the pros and cons for the filmmaker to improve on not the generic feelings of your own.
Good job done...
6383rpuller 1 month ago
I LIKE THE CONCEPT...EDITING, BG.. NICE ONE....
anuragsinha2007 5 months ago
great concept... n like one shot where the colours become grey scale to black... great
shreyashroff 11 months ago
:D I agree to the coffee logic ...Nice one!
itsmjhere 1 year ago
Over blown... Tried too much.
jatinsharma1989 1 year ago
Very Nice!
MrGumpoo 1 year ago
Oh my God u gt some real gud talent!It scared me up in night!I am ur fan!Gud work
karansep91 1 year ago
congrats brother,this should have won all the awards.. nw I need to have pots of coffee to create something like this :) all d best for all ur future work too
meesaeditin 1 year ago
Congrats Gaurav! We won the "Best Editing" award for CMJ at Hyderabad Short Film Festival.
msejwal 1 year ago
Very Nice Gaurav, great work
nirdeshakashish 1 year ago
The concept's predictability is revealed at the shots were the man (father) listens to both son and his wife at the same time! I mean, this info could have been delayed and utilized as a great climax, if portrayed in a very well tailored realistic manner! Hope u understood what i meant. The whole movie in a realistic manner n editing with classic cuts would have been a far better output.
Very good try indeed, concept wise.
Technically, highly amatuerish,
lukhmanpambra 1 year ago
the photography is the best I've seen in a while - 7 stars for this gem
padnil2004 1 year ago
the photography is the best I've seen in a while - 7 stars for this gem
padnil2004 1 year ago
the photography is the best I've seen in a while - 7 stars for this gem
padnil2004 1 year ago
yup very interesting...
plz watch my videos since I'm also 21 yrs old.Comments will be appreciated too..
abhaydalakoti 1 year ago
yup very interesting....plz watch my videos on my channel...
regards
abhay
abhaydalakoti 1 year ago
I m scared of drinking coffee now
a very good film indeed.
asimplecapricorn 2 years ago
Brilliant!!! Awesome....u shuld send it to all the Festivals in India...this is a grt movie....especially the script..its brilliant...
ABHANKS 2 years ago
beautiful concept, good work with sound mix and cinematography...
in a nutshell, way to go grv !!
pavandaxini17 2 years ago
Great work buddy... every thing was really good camera ... editing, acting and direction very good.
It was really good example for people like me who are trying to make their own short films.
And let people know what a 20 yr old guy can do living in jaipur , what many hot shot directors cannot do
Excellent work !!!
saurabh20111983 2 years ago
very gud movie...conept is great...actin of prf was vry gud...I also liked sound mixin and editin of this movie.....Keep it up Grvv!! :)
pranavpaty 2 years ago
really gaurav great wrk done.1st of all ur RJing was nice.direction,editing,sound were vry professionally done. and excellent work done by the cinematographer, hats off to him. specially the coffee cup movement was awesome, color tone at the begining was too good.
now i would say a bit confusing for mass audience.... ...over all "coffee meri jaan" thrill to watch. ending sound at the background was also nice,i liked it.......have great luck n great films in future.
saptaraj (atarkya films)
saptarajassam 2 years ago
well,to start with ...the film is simply awesome..nw d discription...the initial startin o d movie is vry well scripted..(hats off gaurav)..and what can i say abt the camera angles ..i simply love dt coffee mug shot during credits...the actors had performed very very well and nt even fr the 1 sec audience wld b distractd frm the story..ovral flm shwed the other side of he horror elements..technically 5/5,cinmt:4/5,direction4/5,editing:5/5,acting.5/5 ..keep goin..al d bst...
atarkya 2 years ago
@ msejwal
you mean to say only those people will understand this kind of story better who had this kind of unusual experience in past. Yeah the techniques used in the film are very good but don't u feel bollywood is starving for scripts (good stories) rather than special effects......and in the end movie is bit confusing also......4 people were watching this movie with me and had their own speculations about the real story.....it seems funny but true......
amitjoshig1982 2 years ago
This is undoubtedly one your best creations till now, actors were spot on, Yogesh captured some nice shots, the concept & story is well integrated. Everything seems to be in place.
Now comes the tough part, though it was nice & tight till end, but ultimately i wondered if the climax could be simpler as we saw almost everyone dead at one point of time in the story, so it was a bit confusing.
Apart from this indeed a great effort, you have raised my expectations from you for your next projects.
msejwal 2 years ago
superb film abhi to bas itana likhta hun baad me detail me likhunga sab kuch kamal hai....lage raho grv films...
haikalakar 2 years ago
superb film sabki bakwas mat mano....bahut acha kaam hai....lage raho all the best sab kaam actors . editor camera direction sab mast....all the best...
haikalakar 2 years ago
Its very beautifully handled concept... yes we can understand that there is a scope for improvement in everything but still i would rate its concept, editing, camera work, lighting effects and direction above the par level. Gaurav... you have done a wonderful job so keep it up.
jagatjoon 2 years ago
its got a flaw. who is showing/seeing the imaginary person's imagination??
ranjeetsankar 2 years ago
If you want (simple) people to force hardly on their minds to understand the story..........then I will not call this a creative script.........and how many times this kind of script (where people have already died and still showing on screen) will keep repeating
amitjoshig1982 2 years ago
@amitjoshig1982
Amit dead people will keep on showing on the screen till the time people like you don't experience any such thing in real... i have experience a lot of this stuff so i know... btw short films are not necessarily based on scripts they are more of concepts portrayed creatively (now-a-days bollywood biggies are not based on scripts) No offense but talk about the pros and cons for the filmmaker to improve on not the generic feelings of your own.
msejwal 2 years ago
editing is very good,,it was seeming that coffee is the protagonist ,,creativity in cinematography is also good.
nealsworld34 2 years ago