Home made Short Film: Vengeance Unloaded.

[MPKFilms]

cool video

[puneet9029]

no from p itself...

[puneet9029]

wer u shot it....??? i m puneet do cal me 9738808560

[puneet9029]

i lik to act

[dsprocks100]

@puneet9029 ur last name starts with a J right?

[wozyboy0]

Liked the film and the addition of the metal gear solid music.

Found it funny how he left the boot of the car wide open so anybody could see the full collection of guns inside :D

Continue making films :)

[jackbuttidiots]

in 12 hours u could make a 1 hour movie

[BadManFifi]

you should cover the orange tips of your guns with black tape or something.

[TARAVAKUR]

song ??

[HMBFILMS5]

We loved it !! Come and see our film called (foyer news)

[TheThomBindels]

Good job, but some tips:

-Always, but really always color correct your video!

-Do some research for some better gun sounds.

-In my opinion the normal sound, walking, grass, is not necessary, you could remove that, if you need voices speak them in and add them!

Good job, keep going and you will be good at this :P

[MrTryHard107]

4:41 - 4:46 Lol late fall.

[dangerbean55]

Good job. Really liked this vid.

[ChronicThunderHD]

music??

[CSPRODUCTIONSnz]

Cool short film :) so much better than ours Lol and nice guns! :D

[realrandoms]

LOL 5:13 he moves 3 seconds after he was shot

good film though

[hokyks]

Nice job! The film is great, but a film look would have been great..

Check also my homemade movie: "The Ambush - Homemade action movie"..

Hope you like it!

[PKMovies127]

not bad at all:) good use of music and story was good. only thing which i would do is use bit more angles and shots, color correct and use the letterbox effect to give it a cinema touch...but still very good.. id give it a 7.5/10 n a like :)

[ETHOB121]

Ok

[blackhawk8927]

great job, check mine out and tell me what u think

PS dont use muzzle flares for evry shot, dosnt always happen when you shoot real guns

[ETHOB121]

@blackhawk8927 I know it is more realisitoc not always using muzzle flashes but I think it looks better when you always put them in

[VIPstudios100]

3:17 why did he bang the mag on his head

[UPH3AVAL]

@VIPstudios100 because in the army you tap it on your METAL helmet to see if it has ammo in it, usually it makes a clinky sound

[MrKissinger101]

really good film :) good work boys

[slakyboy727]

Worst gun shots evR

[NinjaWilly7]

2:29 ENEMY NUKE INCOMING!!!

[Thedanmetzler]

Paint the gun barrels orange. Color correct. And the muzzleflashes you used were for small machine guns, not pistols. And if you do use them for pistols, make sure you make them a lot bigger. Acting was good, angles were great. BUT GET AN EXTERNAL MIC. Just go out and buy a $50 boom mic and a lightbulb changing pole. There's tutorials on YouTube on how to make it into a true boom pole. Also, crop the final product down to anamorphic widescreen. Detonation Films has some nice cropping guides.

[Thedanmetzler]

Paint the gun barrels orange. Color correct. And the muzzleflashes you used were for small machine guns, not pistols. And if you do use them for pistols, make sure you make them a lot bigger. Acting was good, angles were great. BUT GET AN EXTERNAL MIC. Just go out and buy a $50 boom mic and a lightbulb changing pole. There's tutorials on YouTube on how to make it into a true boom pole. Also, crop the final product down to anamorphic widescreen. Detonation Films has some nice cropping guides. 2/

[mmasoldier1]

Not bad! But work on the acting part a little more.

[tennischamp234]

catchy music

[YoungDirector100]

look at my short films on my channel.They say i have skills for a 14 year old

[JordanAndJoel]

Ok but effects were very very bad but Awsome camera angles

[MoviesFromG]

nice metal gear solid music.

[griphonus98]

boring..

[CwisssStunnaaa]

not bad the music went with it good. one tip cover the orange to make the guns look more real thats the only prob i had

[girlikestwilight]

i like this video. very entertaining

[3MusketeersMovies]

this is good,the effects were good,the camera angles were good 5/5

[coifgx]

boooooooooooooooooring!!

[abbieluvsyou991]

LOL !! 

[maxclay123]

Boom...the end lol

[tintinstooge8]

How generic.

[hyperhollie1]

boring

[smka13]

what did u use to create the muzzle flashes?

[moviesmyway]

goooooood .. no .. GREAT camera work. but if you had color correction of some type (just change some small adjustments) it would've looked Hollywood.

[BLD1996]

More dialouge needed!

[iPaulTV]

Martin!!!!!!!! haha

[lif3master93]

nice but u forgot the red point on the gun so u see it's fake

[10sk8r95]

@lif3master93 maybe he didnt care ?

[95bradders95]

nice efoort, liked the muzzle flahses, liked the story, keep up the good work, could u check some of my action filmss out please

[BuckleyBoy10]

How're things.

How did you get the light from the gun when the shot is fired?

[ragnarak45]

awesome

[MyJr29]

did those muzzle flashes come with express? and is it easy to use because i am thinking about getting it. and can you export footage to imovie?

[XDarkF3arX]

the title sounds like a porno

[toystory3soldier]

Project 347 is way better.

[madmomentsgo]

the music goes really good with your movie, well done.

[KeeHartProductions]

I actually loved the angles. But the acting..could have been better. Lol. Good angles though, muzzle flashes and color correction coulda been upped a bit, but still pretty good. Except for the orange tips lol :)

[ETHOB121]

Nice soundtrack but effects could be better i recomend adobe after effects plz whatc my new vid it will be out on halloween its caled the missing

[1MILLIONAREM8KR]

that was awesome guyz !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not bad at all for starters. keep up the good work soon you will be on the big screen.

[YOSEPH619]

whats the name of the music/song

[Quiznozsubs44]

It's from metal gear

[cupplesproductions]

good vid i give 5 stars could have done a couple things difrent but not bad at all keep it up...

[tehcpclubpenguinshow]

final cut express its in the description.

[juusiksi]

thats nice 5* and subcriped

[kozmleoparkour]

cool vid butadd color correction!

[blackdragonrider3]

i like the backround music, it adds a lot, and good angles. pretty sweet video.

[Agusto5493]

thanks for the tip.

[johnandsuchir]

nice work

[willow519]

Nice Video, Great angles, good music, the picture quality and acting could have been Better But overall one of the better youtube action films.