What the world needs (poetry)

[Reddoodly]

you know i think you would like to hear music from Serj Tankian

[MrChange31]

Good one. Love it, can't wait to here more from you!

[KatyluvsCena]

nice use of near/slant rhyme. And good use of exacrt rhyme. love it! <3

[supermarioex]

@b4Nightmares glad you like it ;)

[b4Nightmares]

i like the message, <3 the first and last lines

[wmcelhatton]

thats awesome mate, it touched a nerve listening to it.

whats scary is there are so many who should listen to this & take heed of the waste greed and lust in their lives. you definitely capture that sentiment in this poem

i doff my cap

[supermarioex]

It sends a important message about so much, I surprised my self about how much stuff I managed to cram into this poem.

thank god for that English lesson, otherwise this would have been 3times longer.

[veedubhev]

Well said ,Words of wisdom there. You never fail to suprise me SMX

[supermarioex]

lmao, thanks ;)

[3873236]

How true it is ! Sadly enough.

[supermarioex]

I think everybody should hear this poem. It's gives a very important message to people.

It is also reminding people about something that they have forgotten.

[AskParisHarvard]

Rooby should love this! Loved it, that was quite profound yo!

[supermarioex]

Glad ya like it, my poetry is childs play compared to mastery of poetry.

[katteithel]

You are fucking brilliant.

Just sayin.

[supermarioex]

aaawh thankyou!!

[rhinomatt]

We might just have a future poet laureate on our hands!

[supermarioex]

Thanks means a lot.

[rhinomatt]

Hope there is more to come!

[supermarioex]

there will be, I am a big fan of sonnets also. might upload a few of them.