City Starz Contest

[MookieSays1Love]

cool words work on flow youll be dope

[lypse14]

i was feeling the lyrics, but not so much the flow, keep at it though, you're good! good luck and check mine out if you get the chance

peace

[thebert23]

u should write for people and probably not rap. it was hurried and just not very easy to listen to. trying to fit too much in with the beat.

on lyrics: definitely real nice. liked the rene descartes reference. dont here that name dropped too often in a hip hop song. keep working.

[terrascalnicov]

Then again, the man's been rapping for about a month. I think it's a little too early for him to consign himself to ghostwriting.

[KevinBike]

ur lyrics are sick maan but ur flow needs work just saying bro

[Raiher]

definitely. i've only been writing for a little while and this was my first time recording. but thanks for the comment, all criticism is welcome

[terrascalnicov]

doper than a rope-a-dope.

(rope of dope)

[emohkay]

this is ill reminds me of spoken word

[REALYZE4]

yo dopness good luck...

[LittleSweetSister]

AAAAAAAAAAH

[LittleSweetSister]

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