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  • i love your poem it is a,mazing...the music goes so well with it..i felt the poem..if that makes sense

  • "A wrong that was his was claimed as her own".

    I almost cried.

  • this was very good(: great job<3

  • i hav seen a few of ur poems and theyre all amazing, this one especially is really touching, u r soo tallented and i am really looking forwards to getting ur book, i hav ordered it in at a local book store an cant wait to read it xxx 

  • I absolutly love this poem, your talent really shines through it!

  • That was one of the most amazing things I have ever read, when I watch your videos they give me hope, and let me know that I am not alone...I struggle everyday, and feel there is something wrong with me cause I cant just "get over" my self harm... thanks for your videos

  • wow u made this??? ur realy good. 

  • This Poem Is Amazing. Your So Talented. I Loved It.

  • awwwwwww so beautiful... gonna cry

  • i really love this poem ,well done ,you a fab peron xx.

  • I like this poem , so powerful , the music really goes with it :)

  • The poem is amazing,

    and the music really suited :)

  • Wonderful poem. I never knew you had a book until I read these comments:P I must look around for it:).

  • No Michelle, I'm going to make you pay for some of the things you have said. Moderate your forum, do it now. It's going to be a pleasure making your life more of a hell than it already is.

  • This is absolutely amazing. (:

  • Wow, that is very beautifully written. And very real. Thanks you :)

  • I love this poem and video and yet at the same time I hate it becaause of the pain involved.

  • I LOVE it thank you

  • Nice poem, i like the music too

  • wauw oh wauw that was so beautiful. it really touched me. thank you so much for posting that

  • I love the poem<3

  • truly amazing

    keep writing your brilliant

    xx

  • absolutely wonderful...you have so much talent! PERFECT!

  • Thank you

    This is one of my favorite poems that I wrote and posted.

    Im glad you liked it too.

    take care

  • love the song and the poem is beautiful.

  • beautiful poem :). good job! its exactly like my life except theres no guy heh :(

  • truley amazing

    amazing...

  • It's called 'Lace and thread'

  • (: What this poem called?

  • great job

  • Slipping away, by Sum 41

  • what was the song before you changed it?

  • wow that was beautiful nice work ^^

  • that was the best poem iv ever read thank you

  • All i can say is wow...that was amazing

  • You're all very kind. Thank-you

    I'd love to publish a poetry book, but I dont have enough poems to fill one. Maybe one day...

    I did publish a book though, but its a novel for young adults.

  • what is it about and called

  • Sorry, I didnt notice your comment until now.

    My book is called 'Tell me lies' by Melissa Wall. You can find the description on Amazon.

  • What is the name of your book?

  • That was simply beyond what words can express. How you have written this is amazing and one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. And I am a poetry freak, Seriously you should publish your own poetry book.

  • that was BRILLIANT absalutly GORDEOUSE :) i love it it was so MAGNIFECENT keep writing pease

  • absolutely beautiful . your words are like a symphony . continue in your writing. your pain is that of a heroes .

  • so true.my life was desroyed 2 years ago,wen i tryed...to...i sadly tryed suicide.didnt work.Nick,my bf,was at my house and found me on the bathroom floor with the razer in my hand and a huge,deep gash in my neck.i'm not proud of it.if it wasnt 4 the scar,no-one wood have found out.now i'm happy to be alive and with Nick,and i got help.i try not to cut,but sumtimes life gets too much.srry

  • I feel your struggle. I have never attempted suicide but I am suffering from SI. I dont bruse myself or have any sort of eating disorder, I cut as well. I do not cut every day like I used to, but every once in awhile, I crave the relief too much. :(

  • thanks for the comments

    No worries ytWatchhound, ive asked for help. And what's 'evil'?

  • tell someone they can help!

  • this is incredibly beautiful!

  • that was beatiful!, im 15 and a self harmer so i can relate to this video X

  • evil....

  • thank you

    I wrote this one after getting a white floor length skirt. Seems like I'm always getting stuff that covers what I do.

    Im glad you guys like it, but I'm sorry you can relate.

  • I loved it. It was exactly like me, exept I eraser burn, and nobody knows... Really powerful. Thank you for posting this video!!!

  • evil...

  • that was really good! It relates to me with every line...I loved it.

  • that was beautiful

  • wow...that was so beautiful...and a little creepy because its like you know me...haha.....trying so very hard to stop though....thank you for this.

  • at least your trying to stop, tell someone who cares about u and they can help

  • that was so beautiful :) you're ability to string words to convey deep meaning is amazing.

  • thank you for your comments everyone

    song is, Slipping away, by Sum 41

  • good job. =]

    what song is this?

  • wow. that was awesome and beautiful and sad all in one.

  • That was absolutly beautiful! i loved it...it has so much power.

  • i no!!!

    wen ppl ask me about mi scars

    i just fling away and shout ans say why would the acuse me of such a thing??

  • Thats true. I think there are a few sides to the issue of hiding the scars. There are so many judgments and uninformed beliefs. But even if we did want attention...that's not the kind of attention id ever want.

  • I hide mine because if I were to get the guts to let them show, people would say I want attention. When really it's the exact opposite. :(

  • Living with this secret is a huge weight. I agree that its better not to hide them. I think that if a person gets to that point it shows growth and definitely courage. But I haven't reached that point. Maybe someday.

    Thank you for sharing a bit of your story and that its possible to stop SI.

  • I don't hide my scars. I show them what I did to myself for 15 years, and encourage those who want to stop self injuring by showing them it is possible to stop, I stopped 8 years ago. If I stopped anyone can

  • beautiful. :]

  • That was so beautiful =]

  • Thank you. So delicately and beautifully done.

  • Thank you so much

    I hope you get to see my other videos too

    :)

  • I think it's absolutely beautiful.

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