i hav seen a few of ur poems and theyre all amazing, this one especially is really touching, u r soo tallented and i am really looking forwards to getting ur book, i hav ordered it in at a local book store an cant wait to read it xxx
That was one of the most amazing things I have ever read, when I watch your videos they give me hope, and let me know that I am not alone...I struggle everyday, and feel there is something wrong with me cause I cant just "get over" my self harm... thanks for your videos
No Michelle, I'm going to make you pay for some of the things you have said. Moderate your forum, do it now. It's going to be a pleasure making your life more of a hell than it already is.
That was simply beyond what words can express. How you have written this is amazing and one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. And I am a poetry freak, Seriously you should publish your own poetry book.
so true.my life was desroyed 2 years ago,wen i tryed...to...i sadly tryed suicide.didnt work.Nick,my bf,was at my house and found me on the bathroom floor with the razer in my hand and a huge,deep gash in my neck.i'm not proud of it.if it wasnt 4 the scar,no-one wood have found out.now i'm happy to be alive and with Nick,and i got help.i try not to cut,but sumtimes life gets too much.srry
I feel your struggle. I have never attempted suicide but I am suffering from SI. I dont bruse myself or have any sort of eating disorder, I cut as well. I do not cut every day like I used to, but every once in awhile, I crave the relief too much. :(
Thats true. I think there are a few sides to the issue of hiding the scars. There are so many judgments and uninformed beliefs. But even if we did want attention...that's not the kind of attention id ever want.
Living with this secret is a huge weight. I agree that its better not to hide them. I think that if a person gets to that point it shows growth and definitely courage. But I haven't reached that point. Maybe someday.
Thank you for sharing a bit of your story and that its possible to stop SI.
I don't hide my scars. I show them what I did to myself for 15 years, and encourage those who want to stop self injuring by showing them it is possible to stop, I stopped 8 years ago. If I stopped anyone can
i love your poem it is a,mazing...the music goes so well with it..i felt the poem..if that makes sense
247rayn 6 months ago
"A wrong that was his was claimed as her own".
I almost cried.
BrainDeadIntellect 8 months ago
this was very good(: great job<3
lesleycchao 9 months ago
i hav seen a few of ur poems and theyre all amazing, this one especially is really touching, u r soo tallented and i am really looking forwards to getting ur book, i hav ordered it in at a local book store an cant wait to read it xxx
batonamat098 11 months ago
I absolutly love this poem, your talent really shines through it!
8foodcat 1 year ago
That was one of the most amazing things I have ever read, when I watch your videos they give me hope, and let me know that I am not alone...I struggle everyday, and feel there is something wrong with me cause I cant just "get over" my self harm... thanks for your videos
sezzie12345 1 year ago
wow u made this??? ur realy good.
TokioHotelatic 1 year ago
This Poem Is Amazing. Your So Talented. I Loved It.
DeadFallenAngel94 1 year ago
awwwwwww so beautiful... gonna cry
PunkGirlChicken1801 1 year ago
i really love this poem ,well done ,you a fab peron xx.
carrot42379 1 year ago
I like this poem , so powerful , the music really goes with it :)
Hoopybluefood 1 year ago
The poem is amazing,
and the music really suited :)
Th3GivingTr33 1 year ago
Wonderful poem. I never knew you had a book until I read these comments:P I must look around for it:).
TeresaxxScreaming 2 years ago
No Michelle, I'm going to make you pay for some of the things you have said. Moderate your forum, do it now. It's going to be a pleasure making your life more of a hell than it already is.
Channelingus 2 years ago
This is absolutely amazing. (:
foreverholdurbreath2 2 years ago
Wow, that is very beautifully written. And very real. Thanks you :)
MyMartyMcfly 2 years ago
I love this poem and video and yet at the same time I hate it becaause of the pain involved.
fluterify 2 years ago 2
I LOVE it thank you
kdsilver8888 2 years ago
Nice poem, i like the music too
SlyFox48 2 years ago
wauw oh wauw that was so beautiful. it really touched me. thank you so much for posting that
AnaemicEye 2 years ago 2
I love the poem<3
Yapiej 2 years ago
truly amazing
keep writing your brilliant
xx
catriona1996 2 years ago 2
absolutely wonderful...you have so much talent! PERFECT!
Darkhalfoflife 2 years ago
Thank you
This is one of my favorite poems that I wrote and posted.
Im glad you liked it too.
take care
idranktheseawater 2 years ago
love the song and the poem is beautiful.
emogirl5461 2 years ago
beautiful poem :). good job! its exactly like my life except theres no guy heh :(
WolfxEyed 2 years ago
truley amazing
amazing...
reallydoesntmatte 2 years ago
It's called 'Lace and thread'
idranktheseawater 2 years ago
(: What this poem called?
Igunatwilight 2 years ago
great job
blackblood11789 2 years ago
Slipping away, by Sum 41
idranktheseawater 2 years ago
what was the song before you changed it?
ShermanClay88 2 years ago
wow that was beautiful nice work ^^
sasukelova0 3 years ago
that was the best poem iv ever read thank you
peach1706 3 years ago
All i can say is wow...that was amazing
SoraxRikulover 3 years ago 4
You're all very kind. Thank-you
I'd love to publish a poetry book, but I dont have enough poems to fill one. Maybe one day...
I did publish a book though, but its a novel for young adults.
idranktheseawater 3 years ago
what is it about and called
lillythecutter 2 years ago
Sorry, I didnt notice your comment until now.
My book is called 'Tell me lies' by Melissa Wall. You can find the description on Amazon.
idranktheseawater 2 years ago
What is the name of your book?
fluterify 2 years ago
That was simply beyond what words can express. How you have written this is amazing and one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. And I am a poetry freak, Seriously you should publish your own poetry book.
ILovesMcr 3 years ago 2
that was BRILLIANT absalutly GORDEOUSE :) i love it it was so MAGNIFECENT keep writing pease
XxXkryingx4xuXxX 3 years ago 2
absolutely beautiful . your words are like a symphony . continue in your writing. your pain is that of a heroes .
mybuddyme 3 years ago 3
so true.my life was desroyed 2 years ago,wen i tryed...to...i sadly tryed suicide.didnt work.Nick,my bf,was at my house and found me on the bathroom floor with the razer in my hand and a huge,deep gash in my neck.i'm not proud of it.if it wasnt 4 the scar,no-one wood have found out.now i'm happy to be alive and with Nick,and i got help.i try not to cut,but sumtimes life gets too much.srry
katluvscherryz 3 years ago 4
I feel your struggle. I have never attempted suicide but I am suffering from SI. I dont bruse myself or have any sort of eating disorder, I cut as well. I do not cut every day like I used to, but every once in awhile, I crave the relief too much. :(
hinderrox07 3 years ago
thanks for the comments
No worries ytWatchhound, ive asked for help. And what's 'evil'?
idranktheseawater 3 years ago
tell someone they can help!
ytWatchhound 3 years ago
this is incredibly beautiful!
gse08 3 years ago
that was beatiful!, im 15 and a self harmer so i can relate to this video X
dandyglobe 3 years ago 3
evil....
ytWatchhound 3 years ago
thank you
I wrote this one after getting a white floor length skirt. Seems like I'm always getting stuff that covers what I do.
Im glad you guys like it, but I'm sorry you can relate.
idranktheseawater 3 years ago
I loved it. It was exactly like me, exept I eraser burn, and nobody knows... Really powerful. Thank you for posting this video!!!
gcrox657 3 years ago
evil...
ytWatchhound 3 years ago
that was really good! It relates to me with every line...I loved it.
jj23200703 3 years ago
that was beautiful
prurplerockmonster 3 years ago
wow...that was so beautiful...and a little creepy because its like you know me...haha.....trying so very hard to stop though....thank you for this.
smilewild 3 years ago
at least your trying to stop, tell someone who cares about u and they can help
ytWatchhound 3 years ago
that was so beautiful :) you're ability to string words to convey deep meaning is amazing.
Nikkiiii 4 years ago
thank you for your comments everyone
song is, Slipping away, by Sum 41
idranktheseawater 4 years ago
good job. =]
what song is this?
unlovedx345 4 years ago
wow. that was awesome and beautiful and sad all in one.
xDeadxVampirex 4 years ago
That was absolutly beautiful! i loved it...it has so much power.
xDpunkBx 4 years ago
i no!!!
wen ppl ask me about mi scars
i just fling away and shout ans say why would the acuse me of such a thing??
XGangstaxHannieX 4 years ago
Thats true. I think there are a few sides to the issue of hiding the scars. There are so many judgments and uninformed beliefs. But even if we did want attention...that's not the kind of attention id ever want.
idranktheseawater 4 years ago
I hide mine because if I were to get the guts to let them show, people would say I want attention. When really it's the exact opposite. :(
2FacedB 4 years ago
Living with this secret is a huge weight. I agree that its better not to hide them. I think that if a person gets to that point it shows growth and definitely courage. But I haven't reached that point. Maybe someday.
Thank you for sharing a bit of your story and that its possible to stop SI.
idranktheseawater 4 years ago
I don't hide my scars. I show them what I did to myself for 15 years, and encourage those who want to stop self injuring by showing them it is possible to stop, I stopped 8 years ago. If I stopped anyone can
stopselfinjury 4 years ago
beautiful. :]
fukthislove 4 years ago
That was so beautiful =]
sobored77766 4 years ago
Thank you. So delicately and beautifully done.
nebis12 4 years ago
Thank you so much
I hope you get to see my other videos too
:)
idranktheseawater 4 years ago
I think it's absolutely beautiful.
welcometothejungle21 4 years ago