"*tries to grab him. (don't be perverted when you read that)*"
"Ricky: Argh! (no he's not a pirate)" LOLOLOL -dead-
is it bad that while i am reading this i am laughing really loud? hahaha its so funny yet intense and suspenseful xD i love it<3 this is freaking amazing!! :DD
@LOVATiCLOVER But then again, that is why she is the author not us, she thinks of all this stuff. i mean EVERYTHING! hehe thats why we love her stories!
@LOVATiCLOVER LOL. well maybe i write side comments to defuse the tension...no idk why i write them. i somehow think about it and i'm like "he tries to grab joe?" aw man that sounds wrong. note to self: do not think that way.
@lovatonjobrostories LMFAOOOO oh gosh xDD hahahaahaa i really dont see tension but its just that voice in your head hahaha but dont worry, i love your side notes :D
@lovatonjobrostories hahaha i just did not know if my actions (coughh laughing cough) was okay xD its an intense moment with jemi and im laughing....either 1) i am losing my mind and going nuts or 2) you meant to do that xD
who song its?
fandisneycrepusculo 5 months ago
Is there more?!?!?!
vzrocker12 6 months ago
EEEEEEKKK sooooo excitiing! im hooked on this story!!!! Love it Love it Love it Love it
LovaticAndJesusLover 7 months ago
OMG ! cant wait for more! i love this story [":
mrsjenniferJONAS1 7 months ago
love it!!! more more more!!!!!
aliciarocks19 7 months ago
omg.....this is such a movie story
allfilipino98 7 months ago
awe. jemi is so cute, next one please=))
keykey1998 7 months ago
Well, that's not good..
jonascrazay14 7 months ago
"Greg: *angry* I really don't wanna play this game.
Demi: Well neither do I, but it's the best way to avoid you.
And so they continue on like that."
LOL I LOVE YOU xD
&
"Joe: *runs to the table and grabs his keys, spins around but Ricky is right there*
Ricky: *tries to grab him. (don't be perverted when you read that)*"
LOOOOOOOL xD I WASNT, until you mentioned it xDD
"Ricky: Argh! (no he's not a pirate)"
I. just. love. you. x)
TeachMeToDemi 7 months ago
awesome(:
Juliaroxs4life 7 months ago
Love it
justanormalgirl123 7 months ago
LOVE IT. Jemi is so funny! XD
MORE PLEASE!!!
sayekuna10 7 months ago
ahh finally catched up! lol lovee this story! cannot wait to see what happens next! btw I loveed all your side notes your so funny xD
PiNKL0VER123 7 months ago
it was funny
WWWXXXZZZ81 7 months ago
1. i was on the edge of my seat the whole time they were getting chased
2. your side notes were hilariousss
3. loved it, cant wait for moree
PINAYL0VE 7 months ago
OH NO OH NO! I love it!!! hehe more more more! loved ittt
gigglegiggle12468 7 months ago
I wasn't going to be pererted until you said not to xD
MONKERKINZ12 7 months ago
"*tries to grab him. (don't be perverted when you read that)*"
"Ricky: Argh! (no he's not a pirate)" LOLOLOL -dead-
is it bad that while i am reading this i am laughing really loud? hahaha its so funny yet intense and suspenseful xD i love it<3 this is freaking amazing!! :DD
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER hahaha it's perfectly fine. i'm glad someone finds me funny :D
lovatonjobrostories 7 months ago
@lovatonjobrostories hahahaa good cause i kept laughing then i was like..."wait i shouldnt be laughing...Jemi are almost gonna get caught :O"
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER Dang you, you beat me to commenting on her side comments. =D they make it that much more funny.
**Don't be perverted... wasn't until you said that
**Argh! (No he's not a pirate) Again not until you said anything did i think that.
hehe agree. laughing really loud.
gigglegiggle12468 7 months ago
@gigglegiggle12468 hahaha sorry xD
haha i know righht?? i didnt think of it she just pointed it out xD
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER But then again, that is why she is the author not us, she thinks of all this stuff. i mean EVERYTHING! hehe thats why we love her stories!
gigglegiggle12468 7 months ago
@gigglegiggle12468 agreed one hundred percent! :D hahaa
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER @gigglegiggle12468 oh you two. you're making me crack up. :)
lovatonjobrostories 7 months ago
@lovatonjobrostories says the girl who writes side comments of things we dont think of :P LMFAOOO
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER LOL. well maybe i write side comments to defuse the tension...no idk why i write them. i somehow think about it and i'm like "he tries to grab joe?" aw man that sounds wrong. note to self: do not think that way.
lovatonjobrostories 7 months ago
@lovatonjobrostories LMFAOOOO oh gosh xDD hahahaahaa i really dont see tension but its just that voice in your head hahaha but dont worry, i love your side notes :D
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER hey you're the one who's like should i be laughing at this? it's so intense?
haha. :) but yeah. i really don't know what i'm thinking sometimes.
lovatonjobrostories 7 months ago
@lovatonjobrostories hahaha i just did not know if my actions (coughh laughing cough) was okay xD its an intense moment with jemi and im laughing....either 1) i am losing my mind and going nuts or 2) you meant to do that xD
its okayy ahahahaa
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER aw laugh whenever you want to. haha. unless someone dies...then idk.
lovatonjobrostories 7 months ago
@lovatonjobrostories good! LOLOL---wait...are you foreshadowing something? o.O
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
@LOVATiCLOVER no i don't think i am. but see if i put a side comment there you wouldn't have thought that.
lovatonjobrostories 7 months ago
@lovatonjobrostories hahaha good thing. hmmm i would say stop with the side comments but i love them xD
LOVATiCLOVER 7 months ago
GAHHH! the suspense!
you always know Joe and Demi are gonna be okay, but you read to figure out HOW they exactly make it okay. (:
DemiItUp 7 months ago
awesome =)
Mikaelaification 7 months ago
More! I love it!
erickaandemily 7 months ago
HOLY COW!!!!!!
Loverz1423 7 months ago
ARGH! lol. oh my gosh more!!!!
joelslover93 7 months ago
Next one!
akelahb94 7 months ago
I really hope they get away from them, i was tense through the whole episode, hoping that Joe will make it.
vjj15productions 7 months ago
Can´t wait to read the next one!
JazzGirlification 7 months ago
I love this story. I miss when you don't post it. Oh and the intro is amazing :) simple yet amazing...
lalalaJennaismyname 7 months ago