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From: lovatonjobrostories
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  • who song its?

  • Is there more?!?!?!

  • EEEEEEKKK sooooo excitiing! im hooked on this story!!!! Love it Love it Love it Love it

  • OMG ! cant wait for more! i love this story [":

  • love it!!! more more more!!!!!

  • omg.....this is such a movie story

  • awe. jemi is so cute, next one please=))

  • Well, that's not good..

  • "Greg: *angry* I really don't wanna play this game.

    Demi: Well neither do I, but it's the best way to avoid you.

    And so they continue on like that."

    LOL I LOVE YOU xD

    &

    "Joe: *runs to the table and grabs his keys, spins around but Ricky is right there*

    Ricky: *tries to grab him. (don't be perverted when you read that)*"

    LOOOOOOOL xD I WASNT, until you mentioned it xDD

    "Ricky: Argh! (no he's not a pirate)"

    I. just. love. you. x)

  • awesome(:

  • Love it

  • LOVE IT. Jemi is so funny! XD

    MORE PLEASE!!!

  • ahh finally catched up! lol lovee this story! cannot wait to see what happens next! btw I loveed all your side notes your so funny xD

  • it was funny

  • 1. i was on the edge of my seat the whole time they were getting chased

    2. your side notes were hilariousss

    3. loved it, cant wait for moree

  • OH NO OH NO! I love it!!! hehe more more more! loved ittt

  • I wasn't going to be pererted until you said not to xD

  • "*tries to grab him. (don't be perverted when you read that)*"

    "Ricky: Argh! (no he's not a pirate)" LOLOLOL -dead-

    is it bad that while i am reading this i am laughing really loud? hahaha its so funny yet intense and suspenseful xD i love it<3 this is freaking amazing!! :DD

  • @LOVATiCLOVER hahaha it's perfectly fine. i'm glad someone finds me funny :D

  • @lovatonjobrostories hahahaa good cause i kept laughing then i was like..."wait i shouldnt be laughing...Jemi are almost gonna get caught :O"

  • @LOVATiCLOVER Dang you, you beat me to commenting on her side comments. =D they make it that much more funny.

    **Don't be perverted... wasn't until you said that

    **Argh! (No he's not a pirate) Again not until you said anything did i think that.

    hehe agree. laughing really loud.

  • @gigglegiggle12468 hahaha sorry xD

    haha i know righht?? i didnt think of it she just pointed it out xD

  • @LOVATiCLOVER But then again, that is why she is the author not us, she thinks of all this stuff. i mean EVERYTHING! hehe thats why we love her stories!

  • @gigglegiggle12468 agreed one hundred percent! :D hahaa

  • @LOVATiCLOVER @gigglegiggle12468 oh you two. you're making me crack up. :)

  • @lovatonjobrostories says the girl who writes side comments of things we dont think of :P LMFAOOO

  • @LOVATiCLOVER LOL. well maybe i write side comments to defuse the tension...no idk why i write them. i somehow think about it and i'm like "he tries to grab joe?" aw man that sounds wrong. note to self: do not think that way.

  • @lovatonjobrostories LMFAOOOO oh gosh xDD hahahaahaa i really dont see tension but its just that voice in your head hahaha but dont worry, i love your side notes :D

  • @LOVATiCLOVER hey you're the one who's like should i be laughing at this? it's so intense?

    haha. :) but yeah. i really don't know what i'm thinking sometimes.

  • @lovatonjobrostories hahaha i just did not know if my actions (coughh laughing cough) was okay xD its an intense moment with jemi and im laughing....either 1) i am losing my mind and going nuts or 2) you meant to do that xD

    its okayy ahahahaa

  • @LOVATiCLOVER aw laugh whenever you want to. haha. unless someone dies...then idk.

  • @lovatonjobrostories good! LOLOL---wait...are you foreshadowing something? o.O

  • @LOVATiCLOVER no i don't think i am. but see if i put a side comment there you wouldn't have thought that.

  • @lovatonjobrostories hahaha good thing. hmmm i would say stop with the side comments but i love them xD

  • GAHHH! the suspense!

    you always know Joe and Demi are gonna be okay, but you read to figure out HOW they exactly make it okay. (:

  • awesome =)

  • More! I love it!

  • HOLY COW!!!!!!

  • ARGH! lol. oh my gosh more!!!!

  • Next one!

  • I really hope they get away from them, i was tense through the whole episode, hoping that Joe will make it.

  • Can´t wait to read the next one!

  • I love this story. I miss when you don't post it. Oh and the intro is amazing :) simple yet amazing...

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